FF: D for Desire Thread #4 (26 - 29) - Page 77

Originally posted by: Sanchita_Laha

Fantabulous update yaar... ASR and his ego *hmmph* What will happen if he tell that he is in Lucknow only for Her *hmmph* Thank God Khushi guessed it right.. Wow... My heart is racing DHAK DHAK with their KISSY.. Haaye... They compensate for all the hours while the are seperate.. Now Arniee baby is determind as "SHE IS MINE" Let's see what will he do to keep her with him always... Payal baby u guess it right.. Ur little sis has gotten herself into her 'obssession'... Continue soon dear.. Eagerly waiting to unfold the story.. Thanks for the P.M..

Originally posted by: golpokobita

What you have gotten yourself into????

Anyone would look into it this way, yet would consider it to be something big and fortunate of her...

but only khushi knows, what she has gotten herself into!

I love this 'chasing arnav'! So perfectly sketched a character!

Lovely..

Originally posted by: praj.shrish

Waiting for this update was totally worth. I just loved this update for many reasons. Of course the main and foremost reason is Arnav and Khushi met and they had their share of remuneration for their separation of 1day and few hours 😳

I did not feel the pace of the story slow anywhere. Instead I feel you have very well described the Arnav and Khushi's state of mind and their thought process. It's matter of time now that Arnav will understand Khushi's place in his life. Kudos to you for perfectly maintaining Arnav Singh Raizada's character. He was eager to see Khushi, vulnerable without her and yet he did not let lose his attitude. You did very good job there. 😃

Waiting to know how Payal reacts to this news. update soon

Originally posted by: crazyforarshi

Oye...that was one beautiful chapter. Itni garma garmi...ke baad...thande thande paani se nahaana chahiye...kyunki...arnav singh raizada...keher dhaata hai...haaye...why does he have to steal my heart time & again???????? Well done luv...aap delay toh karte ho par jab wapas aate ho chappar phaadke laate ho...luv u loads for that!!! Keep up the good work dear!

Originally posted by: KKKA

OM BOTI ...YOU PUT THE PREY KHUSHI IN FRONT OF THE

HUNGRY LION ARNAV

SHE WANTS TO BE DEVOURED

N HE WANTS TO RELISH HIS KILL

THEY ARE NOT INTO REASON ANYMORE

EXPECTATIONS N DESIRES ARE RUNNING HIGH

AAHH I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT

THANKS FOR THE PM

ALERT MOI

KKKA

Originally posted by: sahada

Aaawww AWESOME update!!! Splendid writing!! Every bit my heart was racing with anticipation... It was heart warming despite the several battles tht await thm..

I want to say I want to slap Arnav but HE IS SOOO ADORABLE!!!! Eeeks! Pappiee to Arnav! XD

Originally posted by: AquaSandhya

I personally didn't think it was a slow update. Obviously, Arnav and Khushi cannot fall into bed with eachother. There are things to be resolved.

Although they are both sure they want each other only Khushi has accepted the fact that she loves Arnav. Arnav for his part doesn't understand the concept of love.

He loves her otherwise he wouldn't be in Lucknow barely a day and a half after she leaves.

I particularly enjoyed reading about Khushi's guess that Arnav being there on work and Arnav accepting it. Each is not willing to back down. That is so Arnav-Khushi.

But what was better was how Khushi knew he was there for her.

You have a way with writing love scenes ...they are really hot and exciting.

Loved this one...really 😊

Originally posted by: Anupama.

1. How could have Khushi thought she could stay away and they wouldnt try to meet?

2. Arnav cant lie.

3. Glancing at each others lips and able to stay away.? Not possible! 😃

They have loads to talk about. Yet, for now, some truths and realities are there for them to feel and they do!

Originally posted by: abavi

You clever girl, you just twisted the slip and made it into a slide game! (payal reading the SMS "Bye Arnav")

Good one Dear! I loved it!