Taarey FF: A One Man Army #3 (season 2 OUT)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: sangeeta_taarey
I dont know abt others giving one line comment.. u know me and i will give my best comment to action queen always... ryt babes..

shud i say wot i read is just an ff or did i watch real action movie...
while reading i was reallypicturingthe scene in front of me.
.. wow queen ... dis part was really worthy to read... with a keen attention read each and every line ... only thing i felt was i wasexperiencingit..
...hats off my queen ... please update it soon for my sake least....

 the line starting from shaka gum point , taani's interuption, gun shot, rey falling on earth .. swayam trouble sensor, swayam braveness, his way of removing bullet, his sense of humour meeting rey at morning sight... his concern towards rey and taani, his dilemma, rey's concern towards taani...wow wow wow... everything perfect .. lovely explaination...

hoping for best in future moves.. hope taani is good and fine .. will be awaiting for ur next update ...

last but not least miss u dear and happy frienship day darling


u r my lovely action
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I know dear u have never given me a one line comment n will never give in future as well
Thanks for ur long and lovely comment
I m glad u liked the update dear it means a lot :)
Awe will try to update as soon as possible
Same to u dear
Lastly thank u so much for all ur love n support ❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: -Fam_TaaReY-

Update is mind blowing as always Tashu👏👏
Rey was shot😭
I was like🤢🤢dead🤢🤢
then Taani's reaction😭
It was heart touching😭
Shakha😡😡I wanted to kill him that moment when he shot him😡😡😡
He took her with him😲😡
I was expressionless😆😆
Really , I didn't know how to react😆😆
then Swayam's flashback😃😃
I had a huge smile plastered on my face while reading the flashback😃😃
And hiss attitudedude you are questioning ACP Reyaansh Singhania who leaves no trail and whose plans always works
It killed me😳😆😆
I am in love with his attitude😳😳
I think Swayam ko bhi police department mein hona chahiyay😆😆
I know Rey he will not leave a trail back for his enemies to get him. It's a trap to fool them. I know him. We are going in opposite direction and those who doesn't wanna come with me it's ok. I don't damn care
This clearly show that he have the ability of a successful police officer😆😆🤣
But when I read this :
He started searching around in each and every pocket of dead goons and finally found a knife. He lights a fire and heats the knife tip up and with trembling hands tries to take off the bullet. Finally he was succeeded, he cleaned the wound and now it was time to wait that's all he could do
The first thought came in my mind was he should be a doctor🤣
And when I read this :
"No use of looking right and left look up and down maybe you will be able to find me then" again a familiar sound reached Rey's ears and he looked up and find Swayam sitting on a branch of tree, smiling and waving at him. Swayam had two thick sticks with one side of it sharped. "Swayam what the hell are you doing up there? Rey asked totally confused. "Well I am keeping an eye on both human and animal forms of enemies" swayam smirked looked at right and left and slowly jumped down from the tree.
I was laughing badly🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣
Swayam was sitting on tree🤣 🤣 🤣
I hope this scene we also get to see in D3🤣 it will be an adoring scene ever😆😆
I felt bad for Rey when he said :
"I can still hear her scream when she saw me getting shot & falling on the floor".
I was like😭😭
And we should always listen to our heart and this proved it :
Her heart was saying that you were in that direction but I didn't listen. She listened to her heart and found you.
Superb update Tasha👏👏
update soon😊
Love Fatima🤗

Thank you so much dear
I m glad u liked the entire update
poor Rey n taani
🤣 police office n doctor lol yeah
Awe I want this scene to b in d3 as well. Swayam on tree
Yup one should always listen to their hearts
Thanks once again
Will try to update soon:)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: lovelysweet
update is mindvlowing honestly plz update soon and scared where is tani hope they find her soon atleast swayam found rey and rey is alright uff please update soon

Thanks dear
Will try to update soon :)

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Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: TaaReyD3_Neha
Dii, What Do I say about this update
Total Shocker !! I mean Rey getting shot and Shaka taking Taani was really frightening.
But fortunately, Swayam found Rey and did a great effort to save him !
The Jija-Saala Convo was great ... Love them both !!
And Finally Swayam finds Out that Taani is with Shaka ... 😡
But Kya Dialouges Mare Rey ne ... Ab Iss Shaka ki Khair Nahi !!
Now I'm eagerly waiting for the next update !!

Thank u so much dear
I like reyam bond a lot n I m glad u like their convo
Hmmm Shaka ki toh band bajay gi 😆
Will try to update soon :)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: riyataarey
nice chp di
bt yaar tr ko kb milvayoge means happiness laoge it was nci chp
reyam talk was also nice
hawww gun rey ko lagay i mean goli
sry fr shrt cmnt mera exam hai so sry
updat soon

Thanks dear
By the end of this ff which is near taarey will b happy and together just few more updates
It's ok
Will try to update soon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: tharu01
superb so swayam found rey finally next is taani...awesome...update soon

Thanks
Will try to update soon :)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: forever18able
omg i love d update!!😃
ab kya hoga??😕
hope nthng bad happens to taani
thnx for d pm n update soon😃

Thanks dear
Hope so too
Will try to update soon

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Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#108

comment unreserved on pg 12 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: Natasha.
TaSha seriously u need to send me boxes of tissue when u updating, my God Taani scream when she saw her of shot in front of her eyes and there is nothing she can do... Ahem that right there is damn heartbreaking 😭 the way Rey fell and Taani just give up like her world ended there was another touching scene. Thank God Swayam found Rey and save him
There flashback was superb. Swayam know his BFF so well. I can't wait for Reyam to find that bas***d and kick his 🤬
Swayam breaking down and blaming himself for Taani is very emotional
Amazing mind blowing update, although I cry like crazy I love the entire update
Job well done TaSha 🤗

awe dear i will pakka but i thought it wasnt as sad as before but i guess i was wrong 😔

yup its is heart breaking 😭

yup he does thats y they r called REYAM 😳

oh yeah they will dont worry 😆

yeah poor swayam 😔

awe dear i m glad u did

n thanks a lot dear 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: shikha_taarey
Amazing update dear...loved it 👏
Rey got shot 😲 ...bt thankgod he was safe n d bullet hit him in d shoulder only
N dat shaka 😡 ...kill him...he took taani wid him 😲...wat will he do wid her!!!
Loved d bond b/w reyam...n their convo was really senti...best buddies!!! 👍🏼
Luv swayam for saving rey...n dat sharpened branch wala ideam...n rey telling he felt as if dey r in d old age! 🤣 🤣
N rey telling dat he will give shaka a painful death...i luv dis side of rey...he luvs taani sooo much...
Waiting for d next update...pls update soon n pls pm me!!! 😃

thanks a lot dear

yup just shoulder

lol yeah i will kill him 😆 hmmm actually i dont know 😕

awe i love reyam bond too 😳

😆 i know right i so wanted to add something like this as they r in jungle i m glad u liked it 😃

i love him like this too😳

will try to update soon

n will pm u as well 😃