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Posted: 16 years ago

Part-37

Officers Lt. General siddharth vashishth ko lekar uss spot pe pohoch jaate hai. Baki force uss jagah ko sari taraf se seal kar lete hai. Jaise hi officers Lt. General siddharth vashishth ko lekar gate tak pohochte hai Rajveer ko ek call aata hai jo ki ansh ka hota hai.

Ansh: so finally Indian Army ke jaabaz officers ko meri baat manni hi padi.. kaafi samajhdaar ho gaye ho tum

Rajveer: bakwas bandh karo...

Ansh: mujhe bhi tumse u guftugu karne ka koi shouk nahi hai.. Mere aadmi waha honge.. Uss buddhe ko se kaho ki bina koi chalaki kiye unke saath chup chap ander aa jaye..

Rajveer: per baki cadets aur teachers...

Ansh: buddha ander aate hai tumhare cadets aur teachers ko chod diya jayega... Yaad rahe koi

chalaki nahi.. Warna yaha se ek cadet kam hoga.. aur ha jaise hi tumhe tumhare cadets mil jaye mujhe ye pura area 10 min me khali chahiye warna is buddhe ko yahi ura dunga…{hangs up}

Sidharth: kya hua?

Rajveer: apko in logo ke saath ander jana hoga tabhi wo cadets aur baaki teachers ko chodega..[siddharth nods in consent and Rajveer turns to other people] jaise hi sare cadets bahar ayenge hume yaha ka area pura khali karna…I don't want any kind of action from any of you…

[ all nods in agreement tabhi ander se two men comes out and step forward to take sidharth along with them... As soon as they step in, cadets were left..mean while these officers who were standing near the gate orders some of the officers to get in and let the cadets go out safely.. But some men stop them saying they can't get in and the cadets will be out in few minutes..Un log mei thodi behes hone lagti hai..Usi dauhran saare cadets bahar aa jaate hai...]

Dhwani: guys, ipshita mam to ander hi hai..

Anu: ha aur Chahat mam bhi dikhai nahi de rahi…oh god kahin unhone dono ko

Ashi: oh shit we need to do some thing

Abhi:guys hume ander jana hoga..waise bhi ye jo bhi hua hai sab hamari wajah se hi hua hai..

Yuvi: right bro, isse pehle koi humei dekhe lets get in there..

Ye sare ander ki taraf jate hai but they don't know where to find ipshita…so they decide to split out…rohan ashi n yuvi ek taraf jate hai jabki abhi dhwani and anu dusri taraf…they all were trying their best to find ipshita ke tabhi dhwani kuch logo ko siddharth ke sath dekhti hai

Dhwani: guys, wo dekho..wo to Lt. General siddharth vashishth hai... ye inhe kaha le ja rahe...

Abhi : lets follow him...

Teeno unlogo ke peeche chalne after some time they reaches to a room jaha siddharth ko ander le jate hai

Dhwani : shit abhi ander kaise….

Anu: nahi ja sakte…lets do one thing unke bahar ane ka intezar karte hai…

So abhi ye teeno wahi chupke ansh ke logo ke bahar ane ka wait karte hai taki wo log ander ja sake…idhar kafi dhundne ke bad yuvi rohan aur ashi ko ek room milta hai jo bahar se locked hota hai

Rohan: ye room locked kyou hai…m sure ipshita aur chahat mam yahi hain…

Yuvi: ha magar ander kaise jaye door to locked hai…

Ashi: guys ye window khuli hai….yaha se ja sakte hai

Rohan: lets do one thing mai aur yuvi ander jate hai ashi tum hai raho n dekho koi ander na aye okay

[ yaha bahar as per instructions sare logo ko leke army wo pura area khali kar deti hai…yaha ander yuvi n rohan window se ander jate hai Ipshita ke haath bandhe hue hota hai... Yuvi darvaze per khada ho jaata hai aur Rohan ipshita ke haath kholta hai.. Teeno waha se nikal hi rahe hote hai.. Yuvi kisi ke awaz sunta hai}

yuvi: rohan quickly...

[saying he runs, uske peeche ipshita hoti hai aur uske peeche rohan.. usi waqt waha Ansh aata hai aur kisi tarah ipshita ko pakad leta hai.. Yuvi aur Rohan daud hi rahe hote hai ki koi ansh ke peeche se rohan aur yuvi ki taraf shoot karta hai... Yuvi ko kuch nahi hota per wo bullet rohan ko lagti hai and he collapse down.. ipshita turns around and was shocked to see a person standing right in front of her with the pistol in hands.. She simply could not believe her eyes... It was like everything had come to a halt.]

On the other hand we can see 5 figures jumping in the boundary wall of the building…they all very skillfully enters in the building without the guards noticing them…to their luck the entrance of the building was not that heavily guarded there were round abt 10-15 ppl which was not a very big no for them to handle…the start dealing with them one by one very skillfully.....3 of them were left dealing with the guards while two sneaked their way to the second floor....when they all heard a gun shot two who were upstairs rushed to the direction of the gun shot and what they saw their was a shock to them...In their 7 years of army carrier Rajveer and Radhika had seen many battles many missions but this one was unexpected and shocking for even both of them let alone the others...they were late Radhika and Rajveer two of the best officers of Indian army were standing there helplessly.....the scene before them had made them numb....it took some time for Radhika to recover but by then the terrorists had done their work they were right now defenceless surviving on the mercy of the terrorists....Radhika looked at Rajveer who was still in shock.....

Rohan's lifeless body was lying before him and the killer gun was shining proudly in the hands of his own sister whose face had no sign of regrett...it seemed that time had stopped for him...

Nothing mattered to him any more....he suddenly felt as if he had lost every thing...he didn't no how to react on this till date he and his team had been nightmare for terrorists n traitors...time and again they have always risked their lives to stop the destruction they intended to cause bt today hw was to battle with his own sister....his chahat....he suddenly lost track of all that was happening around him....

Ansh: ah! major Rajveer rathod....ao finally we meet.....welcome to my hub major

[Rajveer still doesnt reacts anything] kya hua major kis soch me par gaye...lemme think...oh ya apni behen ko yaha mere sath dekh ke hairan ho na......[laughs and goes near Chahat ho in turn smiles to him] tch tch tch....kya Chahat ye tumne bilkul thik nahi kiya....I mean log kya karenge the famous major Rajveer rathod ki behen rathod group of industries ki MD terrorist hai....aur tumne to [pointing to Rohan] is bacche tak ko mar diya....

Chahat: cut the crap ansh....i know tumhe ye nautanki karna bahut acha lagta hai but can we please end all this quickly? I mean am really bored of this game....plus abhi[pointing to Rajveer n Ipshita] ye dono yaha a gaye hai to iska matlab wo baki[pointing to Rajveer] iske chamche bhi yahi kahin honge....I can't bear them all together...bahut lecture denge yar...hum tumse pyar karte hai...bishwas kyou tora...blah blah blah...so inka case yahi khatam karo taki we can speed up a bit....

Sab bas Chahat ko dekhte rehte hai including Rajveer they have always seen her as a sweet loving n delicate person...whom Rajveer and other officers loved more than their lives this new face of hers was complete shock for them....Tabhi ansh ke admi Dhwani anu and abhi ko leke ate hai sath me Siddharth bhi hota hai..all were shocked to see Chahat wid ansh but most of all they were terrified to see Rohan's dead body...abhi tries to go near that but is prevented my the man behind him

Chahat: lo ab to aur log Aa gaye seriously ansh m telling you inko yahi khatam karo warna wewajah ki bheed mujhe nai pasand 2 sale se in sabke sath natak kar kar ke main thak chuki hu....ab no more please

ansh: as you say sweetheart....magar marne se pehle jara iske sawalo ka jawbab to de do warna bechare shanti se upar bhi na ja payenge....

Chahat: as if I care

Radhika: Chahat Rajveer tumhara bhai

Chahat: bhai? mera bhai?here you need a correction Radhika...ye mera bhai nahi sautela bhai hai...meri mom ki pehli shadi ka nateeja...wo to mere dad ne ispe taras khake ise apna nam de diya tha... [every one looks at Rajveer who wo still standing with his head down looking at the ground....Radhika keeps her hand on his shoulder...]phir bhi mere dad ne apna harm far nibhaya...ise name diya wo saree haq diye jo unke bete ko milna chahiye...apne business me sahamil kya...apni puri wasiyat inke name kar di... magar isne kya kiya? Jab mere dad ko iski Jarurat thi...sabse jyada Jarurat thi...sirf isiliye ke inhe apne reputation aur apne career jyada fikar thi...sirf inki wajah se Mere dad ne apni jan dedi,,,and you are saying hez my brother?Nafrat karti hu main inse...i hate him....usdin se maine sirf ajke is din ka intezar kiya hai jab main inpe apne hatho se mar saku....

[saying this she points gun at Rajveer...he closes his eyes...a bullet shot was heard...Rajveer quickly opens his eyes hearing soft scream of Chahat...she was standing there holding her hand...her gun was laying on the ground..ansh was caught by Samarth while Karan and suraj took care of the other terrorist most of whom were either dead or injured to death....Rajveer turned to see the person who has shot Chahat...it was kunal who was now checking on Rohan...Rajveer Chahat ki taraf jane ke liye barhta hai lekin Radhika Usko rokti hai...he turns to her wo na me sar hilati hai...he keeps looking at Chahat]

Siddharth:galatfehmi me jee rahi ho tum..tumhare pita ke maut ki wajah Rajveer nahi balki [pointing to ansh]ye jo tumhare sath khara hai na ye hai... Iska bhai hai....Sameer singhania[Ipshita looks at Siddharth] tumhare dad ka business partner...usne tumhare dad ke business Unki reputation ke aad me drugs and weapons ki smuggling ki....jab pakra gaya to sara blame tumhare pita pe aya kyouki pura business uske name pe tha....Aur tum jis Rajveer pe iljam laga rahi ho na wo Rajveer us waqt tumhare pita ke sath sirf isiliye nahi tha ke uswaqt uspe departmental inquiry chal rahi thi wo bhi sirf isiliye ke tumhare pita ka name uske name ke sath jura tha....kya kaha tha tumne Rajveer ke liye Uski reputation jarur thi...uswaqt Rajveer ka sirf itna kehna ki wo hez step son of mr aditya rathod use us arrest se nikalne ke liye kafi hota...magar usne aisa nahi kiya...tumhare pita ne atmahatya ki kyouki unhe laga tha ki Uski itne salon ki banaI hui reputation standing sari barbad ho gai hai...duniya ka samna nahi karna chahte the wo....lekin shayad tumhe ye nahi pata ki agar aj bi log unka nam ijjat se lete hai to Uski wajah sirf aur sirf Rajveer hai...iske request pe hi army ne in case ko public nahi kiya aur Sameer malhotra ke case ko confidential and top security matter me dalke RTI exclusion me dala diya...agar aj tumhare pita zinda hote to bhi is case ki bhyanak tak kisi ko na parti kyouki aise bhi your dad was proved to be innocent aur ye tab sirf Rajveer mi wajah se hua tha jisne din rat ek ake diya tha is case ke liye...aur aj tum yaha khari hoke usi pe iljam laga rahi ho...ek bar itna to soch liya hota ki ye wahi Rajveer hai jisne aj tak tumpe ai ek kharoch tak ko rokne ke liye khud ki parwah nahi ki....

Isse pehle ki Chahat kuch bolti ansh frees himself from sam and picks his gun taking Ipshita hostage ansh: bas buddhe bahut sun li teri bakwas...ha maine kiya ye sabkuch [pointing to Chahat]thanks to you main apne plan me kamyab bhi hua...magar tum mera kuch nahi bigar sakte kyouki main to chala yaha se aur agar kisine bhi mujhe rokne ki kosish ki to main is larki ko mar dunga....

Wo Ipshita ko leke waha se nikalne lagta hai...tab soch rahe hote hai ki Usko kaise roke taabhi they hear a gun shot a bullet hits ansh...he turns to find Chahat standing there holding the gun...he looks at her touches his wound and then fires at her...the bullet hits her in her abdomen...in turn Rajveer empties his gun on him...all these happened in fraction of time so no body gt the time to react...Rajveer runs towards Chahat....

Chahat was lying on Rajveer lap...regret was evident on her face...it was defeating the pain n fear of death she was going through all she wanted to do was to apologise....

Chahat: m srry bhiya

Rajveer: ek bar mujhse pooch to liya hota....

Chahat: bahut der ho chuki hai....meri ek bat manoge?[he shakes his head in no] jo hua uskeliye khud ko blame mat karna aur ho sake to mujhe yad mat karna....[raises her hand] janti hu kuch mangne ka hak kho chuki hu magar phir bhi...

Rajveer: don't go please I promise main tumhe kuch nahi hone dunga...puri report me tumhara name kahin nahi ayega....hum sab khush rahenge plzzz don't go...

Tabi Samarth raha ata hai...

Samarth: raj kya kar rahe ho take her out she needs medical assistance...

Rajveer looks at him blankly as if trying to get what he was saying....when suraj and sashank comes der with few person and two stretchers....sashank checks Rohan n declares him dead while takes Chahat to hospital....

Two days had passed since then..media was kept away from whole incidence....all officers minus Rajveer were in base reporting the happenings....Chahat was still unconscious and in hospital with Rajveer on her side...who was there without a single break or word with anyone...Ipshita and Vaishnavi were worried abt him...looking at him any one could say that there was loads going inside him which he was trying to deal with himself....Vaishnavi n Ipshita comes near him...Vaishnavi keeps her hand on his shoulder...Rajveer looks up at her

Vaishnavi:Chahat will be fine[Rajveer simply nods in agreement and moves his fingers on chahat's hand that he was holding] Kab tak aise baithe rahoge...got take some rest m here with her...

Rajveer: am fine...

Vaishnavi looks at Ipshita who had tears in her eyes...Ipshita moves out of the room Vaishnavi goes after her and finds her crying...she hugs her trying to comfort her...cadets who were still not out of grief and guilt of Rohan's death were noticing all this...

month had passed since then Chahat was fully recovery and back from hospital...she was hesitant facing all after whatever had happened but their love had brought her back to normal life.....

The whole incident had been reported it was now time of final enquiry which had cadets statement to be recorded....every one was worried bt whts gonna happen as apne level se unhone report me Chahat ka mention nahi kiya tha lekin expecting same from the cadets Rajveer ne kisi ko bhi cadets se bat karne ya is bare me kuch bhi samjhane se mana kiya tha... apne students se unke farz ki pehli hi kasauti pe peeche hatne to kehna Rajveer ko manzoor nahi tha....aj cadets ki graduation ceremony thi sath hi unka statement bhi aj hi ceremony se pehle record honi thi...officers ke bhi transfer orders a gaye the...as this was last stage of their inquiry so they were to leave as soon as the cadet's statements were taken....Rajveer voluntarily kept away from the procedure as he didn't wanted to influence the cadets...still being part of the team he was present in the inquiry room, slowly cadets started entering in the room...they took their seat in front of the members from the central army base...Lead by abhimanyu seth....

Abhimanyu: I suppose every one is in?

[Suraj nods in agreement....abhimanyu lookes at every one and continues...]as you all know that a report has been submitted about the academy kidnap by our team hv got statements of every of u on the matter bt still there is one point where the report is silent.....that is death of cadet Rohan Mehra....[all cadets looks at him] I know this is very difficult and painful for you yo recall the incident bt for the sake of department you will have to

sare cadets chup se baithe hote hai there was pin drop silence in the room...after about 10 mins ashi speaks up...

Ashi:ansh ne sare captives ko chor diya tha while coming out we realised that Ipshita mam was still with ansh So we went back to get her when we saw lt. Gen. Siddharth wid some men anu Dhwani n abhi unke peeche gaye jabki main Yuvi n Rohan....Ipshita mam ko dhundte huye ander gaye the...Rohan Ipshita mam ko room se nikalne ki kosish me tha...when we heard a gun shot...jab murke dekha....

[She turned to Rajveer who was sitting near Karan his eyes were fixed on the table....he was absolutely calm and had no reaction on his face....wo anu Yuvi abhi n Dhwani ki taraf dekhti hai jo uski aoor hi dekh rahe the....they all nods to her and she nods back....takes a moments pause and the speaks] jab murke dekha to realised ki ansh had shot Rohan and he was dead.....[Rajveer bas nazrein uthe ke ashi ko dekhta hai his eyes had gratitude for all of them.....cadets Uski taraf nahi dekhte and sare members ke sath room se nikal jate hai....Rajveer wahi baitha hota hai...he then closes his eyes n sighs in relief and a tear falls from his eyes...after some time he Ipshita comes to him keeps her hand on his shoulder]

Ipshita: u okay?[Rajveer open his eyes n looks at her then nods in agreement] chalein? sab apka intezar kar rahe hai..

Rajveer:main nahi jaunga

Ipshita: Rajveer ap ye kaisi batein kar rahe hai...aj cadets ke liye itna bara din hai...

Rajveer: main unse nazrein nahi milan paunga Ipshita....jin cadets ko maine ajtak sach aur farz ki rah dikahyi wo aj meri wajah se apne farz se peeche hat gaye...mujhe pata hai ye unke liye asan nahi tha...dost khoya hai unhone apna phir bhi meri wajah se chup rahe...

Ipshita: Rajveer ap galat samajh rahe hai...cadets ne jo kiya khud ki marzi se ki kisi ne unko kuch nahi bola...

Rajveer: main janta hu Ipshita...aur isiliye main unse ab kabhi nazrein mila nahi paunga....Aj main unke samne bahut chota ho gaya hu....

Tabhi peeche se awaz ati hai

" nahi sir ap humare liye kal bhi humare role model the aur aj bhi ho"

Rajveer n Ipshita turnes n finds all cadets n teachers der...Yuvi was the one who was voicing the words

Yuvi: ap humare liye kabhi chote nahi ho sakte sir kyouki ap wo insan ho jisne hum jaise unless youngsters ko jine ki wajah di unko ek maksad diya....

Ashi: ha sir...sari zindagi humne aise hi kat di...jab academy aye the to hum tab kisi na kisi se bhag ke aye the...sabke apne reasons the yaha ane ke...lekin sirf apki wajah se hume ek disha mili ek maksad mila

Anu: sir aj ap ek choti Si bat ke liye humse akhein milne me hich kicha rahe hai...apne na jane kitni bar khud ko bhulke humari zindagi ko nayi disha di hai..to kya hua humne aj ek chota Sa jhuth bola....aj agar yaha Rohan bhi hota to wo bhi yahi karta...

Dhwani: yaha ane se pehle humari zindagi bas chal rahi thi...khwab to the magar manzilon ka rata pata nahi tha magar apse milne ke bad hume apne khwab bhi mile aur Uski manzilein bhi mili...apki wajah ae hum aj is mukam pe khare hai jaha humari khwabon ki manzilein humse bas ek kadam dur hai aur aise me ap humara sath chorke jana chate ho?

Abhi: us din chahe jo hua ho jisne kiya ho...sach Bas itna hai ki humare zindagi me apke maine kisi bhi aisi hadse se kahin upar hai....kl agar hume apni bhi jan denin pare to bhi hum peeche nahi hatenge....isiliye sir ajke bad kabhi ye mat kehna ki ap humse nazrein nahi mila sakte..apne aajtak jo bhi dusro ke liye aur apne desh ke liye kiya hai wo hum Chah le bhi nahi kar sakte...aj humara yaha akhri din hai pata nahi phir kab mulakat ho to sir for the very last time we all salute you as cadets of this academy

sare cadets Rajveer ko salute karte hai...

Rajveer: aj sach me lag raha hai ki mere cadets bare ho gaye hai....mujhe nahi pata ki jo pyar aur ijjat tumhare dil me mere liye hai main us layak hu bhi ya nahi...magar one last thing that I wanna tell all of you is that guys an really proud of you...

He hugs all of them...



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Posted: 16 years ago

So frnds that was all in KKM. Hope u all enjoyed reading this ff as much as we did writing it.

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Edited by starbellz_21 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
varu, faru... first of all me very happy to see the update... tum dono ne apna promise nibhaya..yaaa..ab chalo part par aathi hoon... kya hua guys part ke baare mein ..kitna achcha likha hai tum dono ne... yeh padhkar tho mujhe aise lagg raha tha jaise expect the unexpected...woaahhh... yaarrr kitne saare twits aur turns hue is ek part mein..... i can't even imagine utna shock diya mujhe is part ne.. mujhko patah hai kii tum dono mujhse keh rahe the kii kuch tho shocking hoga is part mein..lekin aisa kuch hoga maine kabhi bhii expect hii nahii kiya tha..i had to read the part again & again jahaan mujhe yakeen nahii ho raha tha kii kya main joh padh rahii hoon woh wakayi mein aise hii ho raha hai..lekin pehle cadets ka realizing kii ipshitha aur chahat unke saath nahii hai..hmm..they are brave enough to go inside to search for them..hmm..kyun na jaye after all they are training to be a part of the Indian Army... then jab woh log ipshitha ko bacha rahe the rohan ko kissi ne goli marri...mann...i was like nooo..rohan ko kuch nahii hona chahiye...aur yahaan dusari taraf raj aur unki team bhii pakde gaye...i was thinking kii isse bura tho kuch bhii nahii ho saktha..jab mujhe kkm mein aaj thak ka sabse bada jhatka laga.. hazaar volt ka shock laga..i really did not know how to react..chahat ansh ke saath mili hui hai.. raj kii chotti behen chahat...mannn....sachchi when i was reading it mere aankhein bade ho gaye, i squeezed my eyes twice to thrice to confirm what i'am reading... then when i composed myself & read the para again..i was like O My God..what the hell was chahat upto this was the first thought on my mind... then jab chahat ke true colors rajveer aur sabke saamne aaye...aur jab chahat ne raj ko itni ulti seedhi baatein boli.. itni kadwi baatein boli... i just wanted to slap on her face... raj ne chahat ke liye itna kuch kiya aur usmein gratitude naam kii ek pratishat bhii nahii hai...aur raj tho kuch bhii bole bina chahat kii baatein sunn raha tha... i really felt bad for him..my heart went out for him...aur issi wajah se kii chahat ne raj ko dard diya i wanted to strangle her....himmat tho dekho uski..jis bhai ne uske liye apni zindagi de di..ussi bhai par aaj itna ghinnona ilzaam lagaye hue, bole jaa rahii hai... she does not realize kii agar rajveer nahii hotha tho uski izzat do kaudiyon kii bhii nahii hothi.. jin logon ne usko itna pyaar diya aaj woh unhi ke saamne bandook taane khadi hai..very badd.....ab joh siddarth ne bolo achcha kiya atlast he was able to knock some sense into chahat's stupid brain.....aur chahat ko aakhir patah chal hii gaya kii uske dad ke maut ka zimedaar ansh aur uska bhai hai..she also came to knoe kii rajveer was not there during the death of their father as he was handling his dad's case & seeing to it kii unke dad par ya chahat par koi aanch na aaye.. rajveer itna achcha hai..aur chahat ne apne haathon gunaah kar diya..before she could realize woh ghalat hai woh agge badh chuki thi....ab ansh tho ek number ka disgusting fellow hai.. ladki ko dhaal banatha hai khud ko bacha ne ke liye. sharam aani chahiye usko..laalat hai us par... lekin kehthe hai kii sudharne ke liye it is never too late, aur chahat ke saath bhii kuch aisa hii hai, usne ansh ko goli marri, aur ansh ne usse goli marri.... aur phir raj ne ansh par saari goliyaan khali kar dii.. well iski ek wajah yeh bhii hai kii ansh ne chahat ko ghalat raasthe mein dhakela.. issi liye rajveer ko aur bhii ghussa tha ansh par... uske baad chahat aur rajveer kii baatein... bechara rajveer kitna pyaar kartha hai apni behen se..uski tadap... i feel so sorry for him..aur chahat ko bhii apni ghalthi ka ehsaas hai... achcha hai.. kehthe hai it is better late than never...lekin in sab mein cadets ne apna ek saath kho diya.. rohan chala gaya sabko chod kar... chahat kii nadani rohan ko mehengi padi..it cost him his life...bechara rohan....but kehthe hai in the battle of life to get everything in place you win some & you lose some... win mein yeh hua kii chahat bach gayi.. usse apni ghalthi ka ehsaas hai..aur the cadets ne apna dost rohan ko kho diya.....rajveer kii haalat when chahat was in the hospital ipshitha se tho kya mujhse bhii dekhi nahii jaa rahii thi....kitni parwaah hai usse chahat kii.. sahii bhii hai after all after his parents chahat is the only family for him...achcha hai chahat is fine..aur sab uska saath de rahe hai for her to come out of her guilt..goodd..all are supportive...then the last scene jahaan cadets ka bayaan lena tha..rajveer did not want to pressure the cadets or ifluence them, i regard kii woh log chahat ka naam na le...so he was away from them..ab bayaan dene ke baad unki graduation cermony bhii... ab un cadets ka bayaan saying everything that happened,lekin bas changing the bit kii ansh ne rohan ko goli marri...this shows cadets ke liye rajveer kitna mayine rakhtha tha... they have whole loads of respect for him.... then that finishes..uske baad ka ipshitha aur rajveer ka scene... that one scene between them spoke more than a million of words...jis tarah ipshitha rajveer ko samajthi hai, jis tarah rajveer apne saare dil kii baatein usse kar detha hai bina jhijhak.. all was very well written... raj ka guilt...cadets ka wahaan aake raj se baat kar na.. raj ko Salute karna one last time as cadets.. raj ka realizing his cadets have grown up... sahii kaha un logon ne raj ne sabko jeena sikhaya, unke khwabon ko manzil par pohanch na sikhaya, udna sikhaya....in short rajveer na sabko jeene ke mayine seekha diya.. last hug of the cadets & rajveer was very nicely shown....the emotions were veryy well potrayed yaar... hat's off to both of you... tum dono kii writing ka jawaab nahii..absolutely rocking....perfect to the t.... awesome..amazing.. mind blowing...in short i loved the fanfic with all the twists & turns....it was extra odinary.. excellent...par excellence.....love it all the way..thumbs up to both of you & your writing skills....👏lekin guys ek baat bolun mujhko bohat dukh hai kii Khwabon Kii Manzilein end hogaya.....Me very sad about it..😭 kehthe hai kii har achchi cheez has to end one day or the other & you guys have given kkm a perfect ending.... aab mujhe yeh padhkar bohat khushi hui kii you guys are thiking for kkm's sequel i'am already excited to read it.....jaldi likhna okie...😃😃😃 and abhi main jaake tum dono kii nayi fanfic Chak De padhthi hoon.....hehehe....love you guys....🤗🤗
Edited by sun_423 - 16 years ago
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Wow I luved this part. Actually pure part me main Rajveer ki state of mind samjhne ki koshish kar rahi thi. I wonder how he must be feeling. The incidents thruout the part was shocking but the emotions portrayed wer wonderful. Aap dono ne bahut hi khubsurti se sab kuch describe kiya, each n every action n their reaction, the feelings, the facts, everything.

Rohan's death was a big shock but then I guess he's proved himself thru this. And the cadets hav now also grown up. I really luved their convo wid Rajveer.

In short. its been a beautiful ff jisse main already char baar padh chuki hu aur ab jo ki last part bhi aa gaya hai, puri ff main phirse padhne wali hu. Kya karu I just luved it thoroughly. And I'd be w8ing 4 its sequel n I really hope u'll cum up wid dat.
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Posted: 16 years ago
grt ending
u guys are rocking
bahut hi achi ending di hi
i'm happy n sad both with 1 thing:
ye khatam hogayi hai
grt work done
looking fwd for ur new fic
will definatel missing dis fic
bi
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey guys thx 4 all those positive n encouraging comments its really nice to know that our ff is being liked by so many ppl...m glad tht was able to stand up to all ur expectations till the end....three yrs back when we started wid the concept we had no idea that will gt such an overwhelming response form u all...kkm is very spl 4 me nd is very close to my heart...will miss writing it...but as we said may be some day we will be back with its sequel trust me m trying my best 4 the sequel....till then keep giving us ur love n support...love u all 4 being so nice
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Posted: 16 years ago
very nice and also shocking one too..................they all proved to be the real heroes..............rohan's death was very too shocking and also chahat's thought abt rajveer................and rajveer's heart and mind was clearly portrayed..............he didnt do and say anything to any1 to protect chahat but the cadets did an understanding job.....................the way they spoke to rajveer finally was awesome.................

hopefully and eagerly waiting for the sequel of kkm...................
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Posted: 16 years ago
guys awesome ff loved it i did feel really bad 4 rohan wish he did not have to die gr8 part
Edited by jyothi_cool - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Nice one....!
Loved the last part.....Of the cadets and Raj.......reminded me of raj's last scene in LRL with the cadets in front of the flag !!
Add me on the PM list of your new fic,when u start it !!
Luv,
Vandu
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Posted: 16 years ago
First of all happy third anniversary to kkm! This one fic has and wil always be one of my fav ff. Its always fun to read it anytime. I've read it about 4-5 times till date and never it has given that repeated feel. So thumbs up to sdc for such a different concept.
Coming to the part. This whole part was the surprise element of the story. Never thought that Chahat would be the one responsible for all that happening. goshh!!!! Glad that ansh was killed... But why rohan???? :(
Felt bad for Rajveer. But his cadets made him proud, that last scene was such a touchy one.
Overall thoroughly enjoyed the entire story. Liked the way this part was written as.
I hope u guys come with its sequel soon. For now rushing for Chak de for the name says its full of fun and i dunt wanna miss that one!
Good luck to u both for the next ff.

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