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Riima_Azraa

@Riima_Azraa

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#81

That was beautiful, I had tears , the way you portrayed such a horrific thing so creatively...

we can only pray that this never happens to any women, no one deserve such a thing..

thnx for writing hun

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marleylerner

@marleylerner

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Thank you so much for writing this. It is indeed baffling and terrifying how common this has become over the past few years. I mean every time a guy feels jilted, throw acid. A girl doesn't respond to your advances, throw acid. A girl doesn't wish to be with you anymore, throw acid. A girl resists being molested, throw acid. A girl slaps you for passing lewd comments, throw acid. It's that easy for a guy to just alter irrevocably a woman's life for merely trying to be her own person. I still remember the case where a guy actually shot a girl to death just because she refused to go out with him. This was right in the middle of the day on a busy overhead pedestrian road-crossing in Delhi's South Campus. Seriously, a culture so patriarchal where men, on an almost everyday basis, are capable of even imagining such "punishments" should die of shame!

This case has been inspiring to say the least- her courage and the judgement finally do bring hope. I just really wish this makes a difference. It's just unbelievable how common this is and how it limits women. We were constantly told and still are not to respond to "eve-teasers" and just walk by because they were bound to retaliate like this.

You brought out the pain of a survivor so well. No matter how much we believe in inner beauty, our external appearance is an important part of who we are. And the support of loved ones is just so important. It just enrages me so much that something so horrific can treated so callously.

Much applause to you for writing this. Brilliant job, NB!

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Preethi

@blackdove

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Awesome work...

Very inspiring...

U rock...

Do continue writing more...

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Sultan_Of_Swing

@Sultan_Of_Swing

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

NOTE-

A few have sent me buddy requests after reading this OS requesting for PM notifications. Unfortunately I don't send PMs anymore.

To receive update notifications of my work, you can either follow my twitter handle @Naach_Basanti

Or drop me a PM with your email id. I send out emails every time I update.

Also I don't intend on updating this regularly. I need to find inspiration, be in the right frame of mind and do some research before I can post a new OS. Having said that I already have another issue and story in mind. I will try and post a new OS next week.

Thanks for liking and appreciating this effort.

Edited by Naach_Basanti - 12 years ago

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Wow, just wow. A beautiful one shot, so emotional and heart breaking.

The topic written is definitely very inspirational and a very sensitive topic, honestly you wrote it perfectly.

The one shot was written beautifully and exceptionally well.

Awww loved how Arnav supported Khushi through this difficult time as Khushi had contemplated to even kill herself, so sad.

It so amazing after Khushi had recovered from the incident She had decided to help others, tremendous accomplishment.

Amazing writing, the one shot was a fabulous read, take a bow for writing this phenomenal piece.

A special thanks to Juhi, for recommending this in her update.

Honestly reading the update it made me cry how some innocent women are victims of this heinous crime.

On a side note, its shocking how this acid is available to be bought in local stores, I have discussed this with my mum so many times when she tells me about acid attacking incident that have occurred.

Thanks for the note, eager to read your other inspirational stories.

I shall PM you my email id, please notify me when you update, thanks xx

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Amiarisme

@Amiarisme

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

these sort of events around you, make you realize that you actually live among animals who are not only powerful enough to shred your beauty, dignity and confidence in to pieces but also have the power to effect the love your love ones have around you.

salute to those husbands who support there wives in every situation. husband and wife are each other cloth "libaas" they are there to cover the bad, enhance the good and most importantly to protect. those who find there libaas in their spouse are very lucky indeed.

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

Such a respectable thought behind this OS K !

Khushi here had the support of her husband and family but there are so many who are shunned by the society.

Its tragic that women in our society are so easily susceptible to these kind of horrific crimes.

And unfortunately using this extreme form of attack with the least amount of investment by the criminals with its effects being manifold and long term make this a cheap attraction for such characterless bas***ds.And then further dampening the spirit of the victim is the slow process of Justice if at all in the first place.

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Seethu

@Seethu

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Very emotional and inspirational OS !!

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710617

Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#89

It's a good story...scary but it happens.. Unfortunately

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Vistaa

@Vistaa

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#90

Beautiful, brave and heart-wrenching!!! Loved the story, your writing and the way you have handled what is such heart-breakingly sad reality for so many.