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Posted: 11 years ago
Ok guys I know we said we might discontinue...but the response we got to continue was heart touching...therefore for it we are continuing it..but beware it might bore u!!!😆

And heartful apologies for putting up the discontinuation note..but it was disheartening to see so less responses for our hardwork...but I guess we are also to blame since we are not regular updating it and you tend to forget about it...so we will try giving regular updates form now...no promise but will try our level best...!!!

But that doesnt mean you are off the hook...no no no no!!!

We still are looking out for comments so that we get to know where we have to improvise or where you want us to makes changes...!!!
It will be helpful to us...!!!

So drop in comments,might again lead to u know what...!!!😆

sorry for that😃

so enough of my talks in next post will be the bakwaas update...!!!!

My signature line...I'm back with my bakwaas!!😆


Edited by rocking_gal - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

At Raizada office..

Shree is standing bending his head,for not what he did..he didn't feel what he did was wrong but the way he might have approached must have been wrong and he was feeling bad for that...because of him his mentor might have to hear some words...

Sameer is pacing back and fro... giving angry glare to Shree and if looks could have killed,Shree would have been surely dead by now.. he was confused and angry at Shree... he was proud of his team,all its members...but today he doubted was his pride at right place...why did Shree go in this way,why didnt he approach him before doing something so wrong...Sameer needed answers but he knew now was not the right time...

Aisha,is just standing there giving unbelievable looks to Shree...she didn't know as a team member and friend to Shree,should she support him or should follow her sister duties...

On the other hand Arnav is anxiously waiting for someone and as soon as that person enters he drags him along with him to his cabin...

The man looking at Arnav tensed face asks"hey dude chill.. kya baat ho gayi? why are you so tensed?"

Arnav just looked at him and glared at his friend..."tensed??Abhi you know what could have happened if I was a second late..!! that guy out there could have gotten every damn info about Lavanaya...I am just shocked that why does he want to know about lavs.. kya milega usse..?"

Listening this Abhi gets shocked...

"what ???????? he was extracting info about lavs?? but why? I mean...why.. "even Abhi was also at complete loss for words..

Abhi moves out of the room and goes into the room where Shree was present

He sees two people there one guy pacing the room and other guy standing there with guilt written on his face... he clears his throat to gain the attention of everyone present there..

"I'm DIG Abhimanyu...and I would like to ask some question to Shree..."he introduces himself..

"I'm ACP Sameer Rathod...Chief of ETF and Shree...It's nice to meet you..."Sameer steps in and introduces himself...

"Rathod,I will like to ask few questions to your subordinate..."he tells giving a stern look to Shree...Sameer nods his head and looks at Shree for getting his answers..

"Shree ab btane ka takleef loge..why did you hack into their company records..what information were you gathering?"Sameer asks..

Shree gulps down hard..he didn't have any idea to go with the truth or just beat around the bush but thinks if needs answers to all his questions the only right thing is to do is ask them...and in one go tells all what he found about Riya and lavs...the date when lav went away Raizda family,the date when Riya joined,all the coincidences...the way Riya and lavs are one person...

Abhi is shocked listening that...he was impressed all the observations and things Shree has found out in short time...but at the same time was tensed because if one wrong move or a correct thing is out then everything might go down the drain...

Arnav who was with them and was listening to Shree explanation asks"what???who is riya??its Lavanya..lavs was to supposed to be in LA doing her degree in fashion then what was she doing in ETf that too as Riya?"he looks at Abhi for all answers which are fired up in the room...

Abhi feels like situation is going out of completely a different direction and was shouting as danger..he takes the matters in his hands now...

"Arnav... woh actually Lavs was supposed to be in LA..but then we thought she would be safe in ETf so we decided to place her there...she joined ETF as Riya,research specialist... she was always good with the research work so we thought if she was in between ETF team no harm would take place..."

Arnav listening to that got a smile on his face..."please don't tell me she used her signature line there "aakdon ke hissab se..."

Everyone chuckles hearing that...

"so can we meet her now...gosh Khushi will be damn happy listening to this...we have been missing her badly and madam was here all the time..."he asks hopefully...

Sameer and Shree looks at him with confused looks...he looks at them raises an eyebrow...he turns towards Abhi for an answer...

Abhi was struggling to find the words to tell the truth to them...the harsh truth which will break some people and for some it will be again the sense of deja vu...

He takes deep breathe and starts speaking the truth or truth wrapped in lies..whichever way we see...

"guys its truth Lavs was supposed to go LA but there was last moment change in plans and we thought She will be more safe if she among the ETF people so she was signed as Research Specialist..she was quite happy there and had got many relations at that place..she used to tell me she found mentor cum brother in Sameer sir and full to faltu friends like her...Chotu and Shree...she was happy being Riya..so happy that she forgot about being Lavs...but..."he stops he didn't know how to continue..

"Ya she must be have been happy that's why never bother to call us even one time...I'm happy for her than..."Arnav smiles a little and looks gratefully at Sameer and Shree...

"But where is she now..."Arnav again asks Abhi again...

Abhi seriously wanted to kill himself for putting people again through the same thing again...same anguish again..."woh Arnav..woh Arnav..."

"she is dead..."a sound speaks from back...

Arnav looks at Shree..yes it was Shree who disclosed this fact...tears were flowing down from his eyes...it was hard for him but all were beating around the bush and he didn't want that..after all the truth had to be out one day...Abhi and Sameer was looking at him helplessly...where as Arnav was ready to kill and he did..he grabbed his collor and was about to hit him but Sameer and Abhi stepped in main time...Aisha was just standing their helplessly..

Arnav looks at Abhi for answers...as they say silence sometimes reveals the truth when words fails to...Arnav got his answer...

"I'm sorry I thought your family might not be able to take this that's why I hid it from you people..I was waiting for the time Arnav..."Abhi apologies..

"When was your right time going to come Abhi...Oh shit what will I tell Khushi..How will I tell the family now..."Arnav was about to break..he need some alone time to think...he was about to leave from there..but his eyes fell on his sister who was a silent observer of the complete thing..he walks to her and keeps his hand on her shoulder..she just looks at him blankly...

"aisha.."

"strange naa bhai..along with shree and Chotu I used to mourn for their friend Riya as they were very close to each other,it used to hurt them...but I didn't know unknowingly I was mourning for my Friend,my sis itself..."she tells and hugs her brother tightly...

Sameer just stood there..numb..again he lost something...he hopes raised a little but it came down crashing and god even snatched the last chance the last hope they had...and man it hurted bad..more than a gunshot could have hurted him...but he knows now isn't the time to be weak..he needs to be strong for two people...Aisha and Shree...shree?

He looks around for shree but he doesn't find him anywhere...

When he didn't he see Shree he rushed out and couldn't find him..all now were aware that he missing..Sam was about to go and search for him...even Aisha joined...Sam stopped her but she said her bhai will be fine..right now Shree was important..they followed him and was shocked to see he stopped at the last place they could have expected...

Sameer didn't have energy to leave the suv and go now...he was emotionally drained...he gets down and takes support of the SUV..Aisha stands beside him and look at a tired chief.."be strong..for Shree,be strong.."Sameer looks at her and hugs her tightly breaking down lastly...!

On the other hand...

Shree couldn't believe that once again he was feeling like that...again someone important was calling for him to hold on to them but he failed them... so he rushed..where he was going he didn't know but he just wanted to leave form there...

Shree rushes to one place where he could find solace where he can find peace and feels more connected to Riya...

He just stopped his bike...and he was in front of the place he thinks might give him strength...

Her home...

he drags himself inside..as he steps inside,he sees moonlight falling on her portrait which was gifted by him and chotu...

that did it..that broke him completely..!!!

he falls down on his knees in front of her portrait...crying his heart out...tears are running down his eyes,his head bowed down...

he didn't know how everything changed again..he was sure now everything will be fine...but fate played a cruel game...he was not able to take it...he just thinks...how and why did it happen again..."riya Riya I'm sorry" was all that he could mutter...

From a hidden place a guy watches all this...

As soon as he saw someone was entering the house he gets up infront of the portrait and hides himself and looks at the person who have entered so broken..and feels sad. he can feel his tears even running down his cheeks...he too missed her..badly!!!

Arjun just whispers "waapis aajo Riya please..." and closes his eyes...

yes the guy who was hiding was none other than Arjun..it was his habit now a days,before heading to Lodge,he would go to Riya's place and sits in front of her portrait for hours and speaks his heart out to her in this manner..something which he missed doing when Riya was alive..

Some other place...

Riya's sleep again gets disturbed and she finds herself crying...she feels like something isn't right...

Seeing her cry... her friend her companion comes up...

"hey sweetie.. what happened?are you okay? aise kyu ro rhi hai??" and starts patting her back.. "dekho sab thik ho jayga.. plz don't cry relax...!!"her friend tries to console her..

"zo.. zoya... zoya.. plz call Abhi na.. ask him if everything is alright .. plz.."Riya was talking and hiccupping at the same time...

Zoya,Riya Companion and Abhi's love just nods and dials Abhi no.

"han Zoya bolo..."Abhi asks...

"wo abhi "before she could complete Riya snatches the phone away...

"abhi..abhi tum kaise ho? and baki sab wo thik hai na?? I feel really bad.. did something happen?? btao na.. abhi"she speaks everything in one go...

Abhi was shocked listening..more of shock to him was how this people even though were together for short time,knew each other well,can sense each other pain so well..."hey babes chill relax.. bolne dogi tabhi to bolunga na.. han baba sab thik hai.. mai bhi aur baki sab bhi..."He tells trying to assure her..

"tum bas tension na lo.. and everything will be alright I promise...now just relax.. and take rest..!!" he tells when hear her relief sigh...

After few days...

Suddenly something changed between two people...

Something changed between Liza and shree...it was sudden thing..one day Shree was down after the harsh truth again..no one knows how Liza ended up at the same place and she was damn good at consoling..and from that moment something changed..Shree found a very good friend and more in her..

they became close... they had their fare share of moments...both the couples were feeling something different for each other but couldn't pinpoint to what...

Shree and Liza spend more time by going out on regular basis and Sameer and Aisha loved to spend more and more time with each other going on dinner dates...

In short everything was getting normal...the ETF was the same yet not the same but still living on...

A few days later...

They were returning after solving a case.. and their car broke down infront of a dargah.. and the team decided to rest inside till the car gets repaired...

As usual our Arjun was hell bent on not going.. but something attracted him,he felt that something was pulling him inside...

Arjun felt like someone was watching over them.. but who..? he tried searching but couldn't find anyone...

Few moments before,on the other side of Daragah...Riya had come to pray for well beings of her closedone..for him..for her Arjun..she had left without informing anyone..she had reach back to her place before Abhi takes the whole world on his head...but something caught her eyes...

Riya saw them..after many months she saw them...as in whole group together..she noticed some new additions in them but was damn happy that she atleast got a glance...she just wanted to go and hug them.. hug him ,her Arjun..but couldn't... with great difficulty she convinced herself to leave before it was too late...and was just leaving when suddenly..

BOOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

A blast was heard..!!

ETF got in action... and tried to find the cause and prevent further damage..!!!

All of them were running around to get things under controlled...Liza and Aisha were tending to injured..!!!

Whereas Shree & Chotu were bringing people to safety and Arjun and Sam were trying to find some clue to what triggered this...

Arjun was scanning the whole area and as he was turning his eyes went on one girl... who was picking up a red hair clip from the ground.. he tried to look at her but couldn't see her face...that red clip looked like a pair to the red clip which he had of Riya..he was reminded of Riya...he closes his eyes to calm himself down..since now wasn't that right time or Place...

He opened his eyes and the girl too got up and her scarf blew...and what he saw shocked him...he could only whisper

.

.

.

.

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"RIYA...!"

He didn't know if he was dreaming or what...his legs rooted to spot for some moments..he could hear Sam calls for him...

He just ignores him and just stands there looking at her but suddenly someone crashed on him and he his trance broke..when he again looked up she was nowhere to be found... like she vanished into the thin air...

It was just like a dream...

He couldn't believe what he saw was real or imagination..!!

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Finally done...!!

bakwaass chappals???

Sorry for typo errors,,

Do drop ur comments:)

Edited by rocking_gal - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res
unres
yay me firzst
di please dont tell its boring.
its interesting update.
continue soon.
and thanx for the pm.
please mujhe maff kardo my hand is paing very badly thats why short comment.
Edited by ll_megha_ll - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Super Duper Amazing update dr...!!!!

OMG Sam was so pissed where as Aisha looked confused coz of Shree's that act...!!!

Wow that guy is DIG...!!! Even Arnav didn't knw much about Riya or Lavs...!!!!!

Poor guy was in in fix to tell thm the truth or not but decided to ask thm directly n that shattered all his hopes to get back his friend...!!!!

Awww that aakdoon ke hisaab se made me reminded Riya...!!!

Wow Arnav got the shock of his life whn Shree told him about Riya's death n his reaction showed that he was shaken to the core coz of that horrible news...!!

Sameer, Aisha n Shree...thy were so broken after hearing that dreadful news ...!!!!! Feel really bad for all of thm...!!

OMG Shree broke down cmpltly in front of Riya's portrait...!!!

Wow Arjun daily visit Riya's place as he find solace there...!!!!

Awww thy all r connected through hearts... Riya had the intuition that there is something wrong with her loved ones... unbelievable...!!!!!

Oh gosh... Arjun saw Riya...!!! How will he react on this...?????

Is there any chance of there face-to-face meet in nxt update or so...!!!

Wow it's getting way too interesting dearies...!!

Thanks 4 pm both of u...!!!

Continue as soon as possible...

Edited by Aks13 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg he saw her
poor shree he is so broken
why is riya hiding
thanx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awwwsssmmly Awwssmmm... part loved it..
Beautifully written
cont sooon
thnks for PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update...
Feeling really bad for everyone...specially Shree...
Hawww...Arjun saw her...😲😲😲...want to know what will happen next????
Continue soon...Thanks for PM...
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Posted: 11 years ago
So riya and lav are same person
Riya and Ayesha are sisters loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
love it
arjun saw riya
waiting for next part
update soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update..
Loved it..
Continue..
Thanks for pm..

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