Virman FF: Unexpected Love ~ Updated Chapter 5: Page 78!!

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Jannat

@Jannat94

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Hey Zainab
superb amazing update dear
loved it to the core
seriously I like the cat an dog fighting of virman
U write so well, everything u write is totally perfect.
hope MY MANVI WON IN THE END
thank u so much 4 pm dear
waiting 4 next part
update soon

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Aasha singh

@Aashalovevirman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Ops.. Im late.. Actuly i coundn't find ur ff soon so.. M the 2nd one.. Cm to the update.. Its subarb fab.. So virat already knew manvi is his new employ n he is egrly waiting for her arival.. N think that she is late asusual Bt she is on time n this surprize virat.. Bt then his challenge for kiss only to make her uncmfortable n then that in meeting virat hold her hand bt she still try to mange her strongness in frnt of her boss.. Bt boss is in diffrnent mood.. N that challege of kiss on that day was amezing

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Aasha singh

@Aashalovevirman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Hi.. Its me again.. N i tell, i read it again 2nd time.. N eventually n besically i m the 1st one who actualy cmment 1st... So now forgive me.. N i must say ur dailouges were jst bang on n virat is too egoitic n hv so many 'khushfemi' abt himself.. Bt manvi is too tough to break.. N i think manvi will kiss him n win the bet bt its a win win situation for virat also.. N maya n manvi in one team that's smthing more intrsting..May b maya n virat were in sm kind of reletionsip mor then boss n employ..I lv it..

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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

woww finally manvi started her work with the Vadhera...virat really is such a jerk wats wrng with him he is going on saying middle class gal its annoying.but then their nok jhok and challenges are fun ...and specially the answers which manvi gives him he least expects them but that mannu expect the unexpectd 😉
and the kiss thing am sure manvi will surely find out a way and win every challenge coz she is no less vadhera 😛...
yu have written it soo perfectly and soo interesting,...😃😃

update next part soon and do pm me 😊

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prathe

@prathe

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#115

wow superb...waiting to read more of virat manvi's fight...and ultimately their love story...
super yaar👏 do update soon dear waiting for your updates... 😊

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mridula

@-Minion-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

love the update.virat was so mean,he was danger also.love manvi attitude.the way she talk with virat that was awesome.waiting for next part what was virat plan for her.thanks for pm

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paddu503

@paddu503

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#117

Amazing update.,...loved manvi attitude...,...she stands against virats challenge...ff was different...so the concept...good update...continue soon...take care...

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

Superb update!! 👍🏼 Virman fight is on.. Virat is so mean and a complete jerk.. So full of himself 😳.. But I loved Manvi's attitude.. She is ready to face every challenge.. Amazing 😃.. Hope she will be able to teach him a proper lesson .. She has to kiss him now to fulfill the first challenge.. Eager to know how she will handle the situation.. Please continue soon.. Thanks a lot for the pm.. Take care 😊