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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

oh that was a nice one tooo

both the OSs were super cute and awesome - loved it

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Hetal

@Divyahet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

awww,that's a beautiful os,
friendship, love,ignorance,and finally confession...
lovely os...

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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

wow...beautiful OS 😊

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Sasha

@sarunsashasingh

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Awww that was really adorable.

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Camlin

@Camlin

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Love stories of any form give me goose bumps and this one particularly did. And you say you cannot write well? *narrows eyes*

You have very beautifully brought the full circle of their life to completion. Khushi's initial pain, Arnav's confusion and then Sheetal's brainwave., everything was so apt, so convincing!

You know it is so difficult to summarize a life time of events in a few words; telling the important and skipping the rest. And I admire you for that perfectly in this.

Finally, a pregnant Khushi. I love happily ever afters and this one just gave me that.😳

Amazing job👏