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Her desperate attempt to find him through the dense air made several more injuries to her already broken body no tears formed in her eyes no emotion run through her body it felt like someone had just taken her heart out and she was left to die any minute from now. Her breathing began to decrease her body began to vanish within the thick layer of mist and hot air. It felt like a million years to her while the mist slowly evaporated through the dark night her ability to see clearly became very limited the bright light from the street lamps hit straight into her eyes making her vision blurry and causing the pain in her head to increase making her concentration very minor.

While covering the tops of her two eyes she began to take baby steps with the little energy she had left. With great difficulty and determination she searched for him through empty Shadowy Street. After many attempts through her dehydrated mouth "ree eey yyy" she whispered but her voice sank into the silence of the dark night fighting against weakness within her she screamed as loud as she could with the remaining energy "rey" she shouted her voice echoed through the silence.

She became more desperate to hear a reply the silence began to heat away her mind began to think of the most unfortunate circumstances that have happened "no" she screamed. She tried to convince herself the he was going to be fine. Her weak body collapsed against a hard steel element causing her trip and collapse on the hard road causing more pain. She lay still on the road pushing herself up very slowly she open her eyes and saw that she collided with the door of the car that just a few hours ago rey had so lovingly opened for her to sit in the car. She pushed her arm onto the broken car door and very slowly dragged herself up from the floor. She pushed her up further so notice the broken elements of the car lay in front of hershe watched with a teary eye it was his favourite car that now it was scattered in piece through the never ending road.

Using the help from broken car door she stood up but all of a sudden she collapsed again her legs couldn't support her actions she lowered her gaze to her feet through her blurry vision she saw blood pour out of her body. She tired pressing it but her leg just like her body felt cold and emotionless.

She attention quickly diverted to her search for him she began to turn her head in a ll directions with considerable pain through her slight vision she recognised him. Her heart began to pound increasingly a million emotions run through her veins was he okay why isn't he moving.

With the view of his lying body her weak body filled with unknown energy. She tried to stand up but each time she collapsed back onto the road the helpless and helpless began to eat her away unable to understand what to do she bag to crawl her legs had long ago stopped working and blood poured out her feet's but she pushed herself with her hand . Little by little she got closer to him the happiness of seeing slowly faded away he was moving tears formed in her eyes but she kept pushing herself toward him.

Just inches before reaching she realised his body lay still on the road emotionless and lifeless droplets of blood continued to drop out of fleshly formed wounds. She pushed herself closer to him. She sat next to him with a unknown feeling. She wanted touch him hug him put what if he dosnt respond she analysed his body he way still no movment what so ever his eyes were shut and his body was covered in many bruises and scares. With all her effort she touched his soft skin to her his body felt like ice he was cold and emotionless.

She felt no physical as the pain of watching him lying from him overtook her sense she was silent just like the dark night. Her breathing felt heavly like I forced and not natural. Pain was the word she felt at the moment it felt like she had just died and everything around her became an illusion.

All the moment with rey flashed through her eyes she tears began to down her face covering his shirt. She stayed in her placed a flash of anger appeared in her eyes with all her remaining eyes she pushed as screamed "you can't do this to me wake up" she screamed no response angry grew within her he can't leave me not like this she aging pushed him his time with extra energy a light movement emerged in his body with little effort he breathed in and out.

She anxiously watched him for few seconds and then ripped out part of her duppata and took the blood of his forehead she genteelly kissed him and whispered "thank you" in his year.she straightened her seld so that she was lying next to him . After sometime her head automatically dropped in his chest she began to fall in deep sleep hearing his heartbeat. She became more relaxed hearing the sound of the ambulance approached closer.

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iheartVD thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey v emotional os😭
thank god end mein ambulance aa gayi😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aimen its so emotional. Perfect ending.. Taani slipping to deep sleep hearing his heartbeat.. Wow magical.
...Natasha... thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aims u did a fab job
Its very emotional...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aimen, 😭😭
Kitna beautifully likha ye OS...
It was very emotional, Aimen..
Really..This is what True love is all about..
The way you described Taani's pain yet her desire to see whether HE is save or not..
And then the way she screamed his name on noticing no movement..
She was so scared to even hug Rey expecting that he would not respond..
And the ending was SO BEAUTIFUL..
Really that was a perfect ending..
The Ambulance came at last..
thank GOD!!!
Again Beautifully written, dear..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsome!! dis ws so good!! thnx for d pm 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Really Touching and Heart-Breaking OS !! Beautifully Written !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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senti bana diya yr tune 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very emotional os
i just loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#10
omg such a emotional os dear I love it

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