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Deepa jha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar

Better late than never...hmm have I read that ?

Certainly not😛 But you must read...
I ❤️ her works...IMTBE specially...sigh ☺️
Ok no more commenting on this thread😃

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CrazyAbtTV18

@CrazyAbtTV18

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

wowww,, u re truly amazing writer. the scene which u described is my fav too

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Aryancha

@Aryancha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

😭😭tears of pain and happiness...it seriously was one of the best one shots I have ever read.It was so touching and beautiful...Khushi with a heart disease and Arnav realising it..loved it...read it twice already..

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Sj236

@Sj236

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Beautiful OS! :)
it really touched my heart ;)

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Kalyaani B Rao

@Kalyaani

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+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare

Idhar nahi
Udhar nahi
Teri Ore Chale

Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare

Idhar nahi
Udhar nahi
Teri Ore Chale

Zara der main
Yeh kya ho gaya
Nazar milte hi
Kahan kho gaya

Zara der main
Yeh kya ho gaya
Nazar milte hi
Kahan kho gaya
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Bheed mein logo ki woh hain wahan
Aur pyaar ki mele mein akela Kitna hoon mein yahan

Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Idhar nahi
Udhar nahi
Teri ore chale

Shuru ho gai kahani meri
Mere dil ne baat na mani meri

Shuru ho gai kahani meri
Mere dil ne baat na mani meri

Had se bhi aaghe yeh guzar hi gaya
Khud bhi pareshan hua
Aur mujhko bhi yeh kar gaya
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Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Idhar nahi
Udhar nahi
Teri ore chale

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mahrusweety

@mahrusweety

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

marvellous and mindblowing

OS 👏 👏 👏

it was written so beautifully and emotionally

one dialogue HAMARI DHARKANEY AIK HO JATI HAIN

is potrayed sooo fabulously

awesome writing

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aquagal

@aquagal

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+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#77

This was beautiful and you gave the whole "Hamari dhadkanein ek ho jati hai" a complete different set-up and feeling. I mean feelings were same but it was still very different.

Arnav took quite some time in knowing and acknowledging his feelings but as always love found its way!!!
Beautiful OS :)

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abcdefg1234567

@abcdefg1234567

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Posted: 11 years ago

#78

Beautifully build story. You have created very romantic plot in hospital environment. That's awesome. Thanks.

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arshisimple

@arshisimple

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Posted: 11 years ago

#79

Beautifully written. 👏 . The Holi scene was my favorite scene too but you took the dhak dhak to completely new level. And in the hospital setting, just amazing 😊 👏

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JesiC

@JesiC

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Posted: 11 years ago

#80

very beautifully written.. lover ur writing

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