ArSh SS 'Badmaash Dill'#3

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Sriha

@Sriha

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#781

Originally posted by: sameera_12

The story will say it all by itself!😊

nd the story writer seems to enjoy making readers all agitated for her update...

seriously tadpane ka bahut shauk hai tumhe... 😔

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NEHA

@SacredLove

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#782

Nice part sam just love it
everything was awesome sivaye end ke ab pls
love triangle mat lana aur ridhima ko toh bilkul bhi mat lana
Ab pata nahi shilpa kaise react karegi yeh scene dekh kar??
Aur ladki ke expression se laga raha hai she like arman pls abhi toh dono
(arsh) ko pyar hua tha bich mein haddi nahi chahiye upar se ise hold pe rakh rahi hai tu thats not fair but exams bhi important hai so will wait for
next update best luck for exam and do cont as soon as possible

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cool_sri

@cool_sri

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#783

Awesome update..as always...everything superbbb except the end...

Who is dis new girl.plz don't get any new girl & no riddhima..as a much as I love AR..I don't want them in this story..it's ArSh always here..

Plz reveal this twist soon...can't wait.. Try to update this one too along mehendi..I do read that ff too..but love this baadmaash love ff more..so plz don't leave this for more time..

& all the best for ur exams do well!!!!!!

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cool_sri

@cool_sri

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#784

Hey can u the post the link of the ff my life my wife...wanna read it..

Edited by cool_sri - 11 years ago

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teenorchid

@teenorchid

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#785

Originally posted by: cool_sri
Hey can u the post the link of the ff my life my wife...wanna read it..

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1687901/arsh-ff-my-life-my-wife-1

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cool_sri

@cool_sri

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#786

Originally posted by: teenorchid

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1687901/arsh-ff-my-life-my-wife-1

Thank u..😊

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teenorchid

@teenorchid

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#787

Originally posted by: cool_sri

Thank u..😊

u are welcome nd do read it

its one ov my fav ffs

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Nandini_goyal

@Nandini_goyal

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#788

Sam!
This time I would like to start with my feelings about the banner...
On one side there is that basket ball sequence when Armaan had waited so long for riddhima (let's say Shilpa here) to arrive and then there is that sequence when Shilpa re-entered DMG but notice that their hands get separated and Armaan is left with only her bracelet, her memory in his heart.
Title is hit and miss.. Looking forward to read the part and find out the reference.

*edited*

Armaan emotional ho raha tha... He so loves his family na.
I liked the bond that he shares with his father, they talk and he is always in touch with him.
I hope that now that he is going so ke keeps in touch with Shilpa too.
Finally dinner pe woh agaya. Fun moments were fun to read..
Pehli baar I could picture Aliya and Rohail sequence.
I further liked emphasis on Rohail and Shilpa's interaction. It has to be one of the favorites of mine in not ArSh sequences.
Trust theory was also fab! And when Armaan comes to know that they are discussing this and he says ki "Shilpa ko main samajh agaya?" 😆
In the car when he pulls Shilpa to himself... Haye...so loved it.. So romantic .. Lost in each other's eyes.. Meri aankhe phati ki phati reh gayi thi. Kaash asli life mein aisa kuch hota.
Why was Shilpa so edgy? But am glad that Armaan noticed it all and was willing to talk. But the gang ki timing I tell you.
Armaan took her in a side hug in front of all.. Eeppp...!
End mein am sure it was Shilpa, because of moist eyes and the song reference too. Woh song us paper par likha tha na? But who had put it there?
But at the same time it suits well... They both want the other one to confess their feelings first but then there is this distance between them.
I think that this is where the leaving of hand and bracelet left with Armaan sequence is added to the banner.
Tell me if I am right.. And do tell me the relevance of the title please.. Not got it.. I think I will have to read it again to understand.

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Amita Patel

@KaShforever06

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#789

Armaan shares a lovely bonding with everyone. and that made him emotional.

Have to love his family who is not emotional and trying to cheer him up.

I hope Armaan keep in contact with Shilpa. I know he will 😉

Gang's dinner was awesome. they were having fun without Armaan.

I am so glad Armaan joined them. I love the bond Shilpa shares with Rohail.

You did amazing job explaining Armaan's trust theory.

The part where he pulls Shilpa close to him I thought he was going to kiss her at least on forehead. It was so romantic..

Yeh gang ki timing always galat hai..

Armaan gave her a side hug. so cute..

Armaan is leaving now.. 😭

Ending was awesome too.

I am guessing Shilpa put that piece of paper in Armaan's pocket.

The girl is Shilpa right? I hope so..

Continue soon.

ALL THE BEST for your exams..

Edited by KaShforever06 - 11 years ago

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Sameera

@sameera_12

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#790

Originally posted by: Pious_KaSh
Sam!
This time I would like to start with my feelings about the banner...
On one side there is that basket ball sequence when Armaan had waited so long for riddhima (let's say Shilpa here) to arrive and then there is that sequence when Shilpa re-entered DMG but notice that their hands get separated and Armaan is left with only her bracelet, her memory in his heart.
Title is hit and miss.. Looking forward to read the part and find out the reference.

*edited*

Armaan emotional ho raha tha... He so loves his family na.
I liked the bond that he shares with his father, they talk and he is always in touch with him.
I hope that now that he is going so ke keeps in touch with Shilpa too.
Finally dinner pe woh agaya. Fun moments were fun to read..
Pehli baar I could picture Aliya and Rohail sequence.
I further liked emphasis on Rohail and Shilpa's interaction. It has to be one of the favorites of mine in not ArSh sequences.
Trust theory was also fab! And when Armaan comes to know that they are discussing this and he says ki "Shilpa ko main samajh agaya?" 😆
In the car when he pulls Shilpa to himself... Haye...so loved it.. So romantic .. Lost in each other's eyes.. Meri aankhe phati ki phati reh gayi thi. Kaash asli life mein aisa kuch hota.
Why was Shilpa so edgy? But am glad that Armaan noticed it all and was willing to talk. But the gang ki timing I tell you.
Armaan took her in a side hug in front of all.. Eeppp...!
End mein am sure it was Shilpa, because of moist eyes and the song reference too. Woh song us paper par likha tha na? But who had put it there?
But at the same time it suits well... They both want the other one to confess their feelings first but then there is this distance between them.
I think that this is where the leaving of hand and bracelet left with Armaan sequence is added to the banner.
Tell me if I am right.. And do tell me the relevance of the title please.. Not got it.. I think I will have to read it again to understand.

The very first comment on this chapter which cracked me up!!! Tumhari positive thinking ki to daad deni paregi yaar!!!😉
let me explain hit and miss...

sab se pehle to he is already missing his family... Shilpa will be missing him too... Aurrr banner ko le kar chalun to jo pehla part hai basket ball court wala wo indicate karta hai k they were coming closer jesa k engagement k baad unke relationship ne progress kiya hai... And the second thing jo haath choot rahe hain...

He is going to haath to choot he rahe hain lekin haath chootne mein bracelet armaan k pass reh jata hai banner mein just the way he is taking that engagement ring with himself... so he is gona miss her and is taking loads of memories and responsibilities with himself...

Hits par atay hain...
separation is hitting both of them inside...
phir jis tarah wo donow baar baar kareeb aye aur baar baar kuch kehte kehte reh gaye...
trust theory bhi ajatai hai iss mein kyunki armaan ne shilpa ko bola tha " he don't trust anybody with HIMSELF" Wo tab bhi nahi samjhi, she missed it and now he explained, he hit that...

All in all the ending was the perfect hit and miss... Tum readers k liye kyunki wo ladki jo armaan pe giri shilpa nahi thi... aur uske aur armaan k beech ka scene!! kuch tha us mein i guess...

And if you have missed it then think again kyunki uss ladki ka description meine pehle bhi diya tha... chapter 18 Action Replay mein...