*Awarded* FF: A New Khushi #7 Ch 66-72 *COMPLETED*

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PhoenixTears

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Posted: 12 years ago

#561

Awesome update Sami, loved the fact you made Arnav reveal the truth to her rather than someone else telling her because I think that would have worse than the current situation. The way you you wrote all the sequences of Khushi hiding her appointment, La's phone call, Arnav reaching to doctor before her was amazing and ofcourse the confession was heart breaking, no doubt he was wrong but the way he revealed his insecurities in front of Khushi, made me think, aww was he that wrong??? And it was one blasting excerpt, as expected as a normal human being reaction. Eagerly waiting for the update now! Overall a fantastic update, thanks for the PM too!

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bkamber

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Posted: 12 years ago

#562

Like the teaser excerpt.
I am happy Arnav told her the truth before she finds out from someone else.
Khushi's anger is justified.
No matter what this reason for lying cannot be justifed to satisfy his point of view. A discussion no matter how painful would have been better and he had a choice...abstain.
I know this is just a story...but still..."abstain" would have sparked a conversation of reason.

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Asrkkgsr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#563

nice part.i personally dont agree with arnavs method.but liked when he confess his crime to khushi.what will happen next?will khushk understand arnavs pov?continue soon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#564

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Divya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#565

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Finally caught up with updates :)
Emotional update 😭
Arnav is over protective !! !! He shouldn't have messed the medicines !!! I can't see thm in pain 😭 !!! "Feeling unwanted is the worst feeling in the world and I simply can't think about having a baby who may be unwanted as well" Khushi revealed !!!!! I had tears while reading this part 😭 !! Thanks for the pm 😳

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Divya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#566

Omg 😲 !!! After a long time m first 😃 😆

Edited by ..Divya.. - 12 years ago

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Shamz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#567

Emotional part feel sorry for both of them hope they over come this and make the right choice

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S.B.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#568

emotional part... lets see what happens next ... loved the update<3

Edited by -Xpress- - 12 years ago

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Nidsubh007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#569

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Sami I have repeatedly told you that I was waiting for this chapter. Honestly I wasn't sure which direction you were going to take (regardless of teaser). But the way you portrayed Khushi's thought process & emotions was just magnificent. One of the best emotional chapters you have written to date.

I loved how you presented both of there sides. What Arnav did was horribly wrong, but the way you wrote it I didn't get mad at him. Because even during the wrong doings I could feel his love for her.

Please update soon! Really waiting to see what happens next.

Great job! 👏

Edited by Nidsubh007 - 12 years ago