Virman FF : Tere Aane Se...NOTE pg 104

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Huma

@Huma0301

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Posted: 12 years ago

#321

Tum wrong place pe kyuuu stop kar deti hi yaar
wow waala upsate tha
loved it
hope they confess soon but knowing you
tum tho iss story mein bhi do pyaar karne waalo ko milne nahi digi
samjh gayi hongi tum mein kya keh rahi hu

line nahi but woh part acha laga jahan virika ko dono ke pyaar ke baare mein pata hai
aur virat ko bhi pata chal jaataa hai
kaaash kisi aur ko bhi SACH pata chal jaaye
tho i will be sooo happy kyu ki hogi pyaar ki jeet
i kno tum samajh gayi wat i mean 😉

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virmanfan013

@virmanfan013

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#322

oye hoye lavanya ji this was definately a one of superb update trust me nd i love the whole part. Each nd everything was written so perfectly. U described virat's feeling very well. Finally virat realize his love for her nd the intresting thing is manvi too loves him bt scare to confess her feeling. Nw waiting eagerly for the next part. Do cont soon nd thanx for the pm

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Laveniya.

@Zion.Writings

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#323

Originally posted by: Huma0301
Tum wrong place pe kyuuu stop kar deti hi yaar
wow waala upsate tha
loved it
hope they confess soon but knowing you
tum tho iss story mein bhi do pyaar karne waalo ko milne nahi digi
samjh gayi hongi tum mein kya keh rahi hu

line nahi but woh part acha laga jahan virika ko dono ke pyaar ke baare mein pata hai
aur virat ko bhi pata chal jaataa hai
kaaash kisi aur ko bhi SACH pata chal jaaye
tho i will be sooo happy kyu ki hogi pyaar ki jeet
i kno tum samajh gayi wat i mean 😉

hahahhahhahaha!!! u knw me so welll !!!!...par dont worry mai thode time baad virman ko phir se mila dungi ...aur tum jiski baat kar rahi ho ...mujhe uska pata nahi 🤢

"SACH" mai pata chalne hi nahi dungi !!!! 😊

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Laveniya.

@Zion.Writings

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#324

Originally posted by: virmanfan013
oye hoye lavanya ji this was definately a one of superb update trust me nd i love the whole part. Each nd everything was written so perfectly. U described virat's feeling very well. Finally virat realize his love for her nd the intresting thing is manvi too loves him bt scare to confess her feeling. Nw waiting eagerly for the next part. Do cont soon nd thanx for the pm

HAYEEE!!! mujhe shock laga aapka comment dekh kar anyhow thank you !!! 😃

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#325

Superb updt...both aware abt each others feeling but indirectly...waiting fr confession...cont soon

my fvrt dlg is virats convo with himself after virika left his room

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manahil arif

@innocentmanvi1

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#326

lovely yar continue sooon plz waiting

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Laveniya.

@Zion.Writings

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#327

hello TASians ...how r u all ?? so u all must be exicited to see me...na...u shud be ...cz im gonna update the promo of my next chappie😊... before tht thanks for all ur comments...and likes...it is very encouraging for a first timer like me😃😳...ok nw i will stop giving bhashan ...and let my story speak a volumes...

Promo :
be ready guyzz...

* sucess party ...

They reach the success party ...and all the cameras on virat and maanvi

* sweet romance...

heels slip due to the mishap ovr there...and she falls in virats arms

cheeks wer red due to embarrassment...but actually she was blushing...and virat noticed this...

V: kaha tha heels mat pehna karo...

* song sequence... (much awaited ryt??? 😃...)

TASians pls download the song/keep the song ready... I FEEL GOOD from the movie anjaana anjaani cz u will need it in next update...already have it?? Thn just chill...😆😆

* something evil cooking... 😈

hamare story evil kya ho sakta hai guys ?? guess guyzzz!! Pata hai ...kar liya hoga guess...so he is back with a BANG and now the roller coaster and twist and turn starts...and my story starts in real sense...TERE AANE SE...soorrry for bringing the evil but necessary hai na...!! so hw he is gonna make his plan lets see...

wanna know wat's next??? to know stay tuned to Virman FF :Tere Aane Se...

so thats it for promo...!!! leave ur opinions...aur ha dnt forget to hit like...so see u soon with next update till thn bye , see u , take care and keep loving ... !!😳

Edited by lavanya_sweet - 12 years ago