Virman FF : Tere Aane Se...NOTE pg 104 - Page 3

Helloo guys .OMG!! so many comments for a first timer commendable ryt??🥳 Hehehehe. this topic I posted on 21 july at 5 pm or so ..and within 2 hrs this topic had become a hot topic..!! im shocked this was nt possible without u guyz .so a big THANK U to u guys .. many of u said they liked the FF's name thns fr tht also ..i wanted to reply to each and every1's cmmnt ..but it doesn't allow me to ..it says newbie cannot post more than 10 posts a day😡 ..oh btw this story is my first story ever..!! so mistakes maaf kardena (puppy face..)

So here it goes a promo of my FF

Virman FF : Tere Aane Se

Promo :

Driving rashly with high speed he was going to his favourite place. Where he goes when he is happy n even when he is sad .. but today he was sad . he was broken. His eyes were red in anger or in sorrow he himself didn't know .. He was not in his senses to think anything. To avoid thinking about what happnd .he tried to concentrate sum where else so switched on loud music but all in vain. He was not able to forget the scene .

i will update 2mmrw or day aftr 2mmrw for sure...!!😊...until then issey kaam chala lena...😆 byeee if any 1 didnt receive pm srry..

Helloo'guys'.OMG!! so many comments for a first timer'commendable ryt?? Hehehehe. this topic I posted on 21 july at 5 pm or so ..and within 2 hrs this topic had become a hot topic..!!🥳 im shocked'this was nt possible without u guyz'.so a big THANK U to u guys'.. many of u said they liked the FF's name thns fr tht also'..i wanted to reply to each and every1's cmmnt ..but it doesn't allow me to ..it says newbie cannot post more than 10 posts a day😡'..oh btw this story is my first story ever..!! so mistakes maaf kardena'(puppy face..)

So here it goes...

Virman FF : Tere Aane Se...

Part 1 (a):

Behte aashkon ki zubaan nahi hoti'..

Lafzon mai mohabat bayan nhi hoti'.

Mile jo pyar to kadar karna uski'''.

Kismat har kisi par maherban nahi hoti'

Driving rashly with high speed he was going to his favourite place. Where he goes when he is happy n even when he is sad'.. but today he was sad '. he was broken. His eyes were red in anger or in sorrow he himself didn't know'.. He was not in his senses to think anything. To avoid thinking about what happnd '.he tried to concentrate sum where else so switched on loud music but all in vain. He was not able to forget the scene'.

He reached his favourite spot ...

This place was nowhere else but near his bunglow which is away from all the city noise n pollution ..it is environment of green'..

He rushed to the pergola over there and started crying his heart out'.he cried very loudly 'he kept on crying for minutes 'he was not able to control 'n then he collapsed on floor crying catching his head '.

Her words were still echoing in his ears'.he closed his ears to stop them '..but in vain ,instead it was becoming louder n louder.

He controlled his emotions n got up'.went to the railing n stood there facing the sea'.n still crying he managed saying '.

Virat : kyun kia tumne aisa mere saath'.. kyun??mai toh tumhe apne ji jaaan se pyaar karta tha '..aur tumne bhi toh yahi kaha tha'.phir aisa kya hua ki tumne keh dia ki "MAI TUMHARE SAATH SIRF FAMOUS HONE KE LIE THI'SIRF PAISO KE LIYE 'KI'MAI TUMSE PYAR NHI KARTI'.. MAI ADI SE PYAR KARTI HU'."'..mujhe kuch samaj nhi aa raha hai '.mujhe toh tumpe to gussa hona chahiye kyunki tumne mujhe maarne ka plan banaya '.sirf paiso ke liye'..!! par mai tumpe gussa hone ke bajaye ye dhund raha hu 'ki tumne aisa kyu kia ??...shayad isiliye kyunki mai tumse bahut pyar karta tha ''mere saath aisa kyu kia tumne 'kyun???maine tumhara kya bigaada tha??

And then his anger took over him'.n he started xpressing it'

Virat : uhhh ..maine tumse pyar karke bahut badi galti ki'.mujhe samaj jana chahiye tha ki iss duniya mai koi kisika nhi hota'.. ye pyar sirf kehne ke liye hota hai ..asal zindagi mai aisa kuch nhi hota'. Mai ye baat samaj gaya hunn'.mujhe ye samjhane ke liye thanks '.thnk u ' Ma'

N he stoped ..n decided sumthin..

Virat : nhi mai tumhara naam apne zubaan par kabhi nhi laaunga ..kabhi nhi '.mai tumhari wajah se apni zindagi nhi kharab karunga 'mai tumhe mere aur mere career par haavi nhi hone dunga ..tum mujhe zara bhi affect nhi karti '.mere dil mai tumhare liye koi feelings nhi hai ' maine aaj se tumhe apne zindagi aur yaado se nikaal penkha'..

Who could have imagined that the person who was happy few hours ago ..nw wud be heart broken'..

Yes our virat was very happy few hours ago '..he was on cloud 9 ..cz he was going to be engaged to his love his life'..but fate had sum other plans'.sach mai kab kya ho jaye kise pata'!!

*****FLASHBACK

Vanshika maa'.viren n virat wer sitting in the hall discussing the arrangements of the engagement'.only virats face was lighted 'n viren n vanshika maa face was was slightly sulken'.

When vanshika maa goes to attend a important cal'.

Convo betwn v & v:

Vi ' viren

V ' virat

Vm- vanshika maa

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V : bhai ..aapka chehra itna uthra hua kyu hai ?? BHABI ki yaad aa ri hai kya (giggle)???

Vi: virat yaar tu bhi na aisa kuch nhi hai (sighing+blushing) '!!

V: bhai on serious note '.kya hua ?? koi pareshaani??

Vi: nhi virat aisi koi khaas baat nhi hai '.bas mai tujhse kuch puchna chahata tha'

V: bhai ye bhi koi puchne waali baat hai?? (giggle) puchiye na'.

Vi: virat dekh shaadi ek bahut bada decision hai'.tu iss bare mai sure toh hai na?? I mean tujhe sach me lagta hai ki ye tu nibha payega'!!(he asked this coz he was not sure what his brother was gonna do')

V: bhai 'meri engagement hone waalii hai'!! Shaadi ko abhi tym hai ..mai tab tak apne aap ko prepare kar lunga '.waisey bhi mai aapke jitna tension nhi leta''

Vi: matlab??

V: bhai ..aapka shakal maine aapke engagement ke din dekha tha'!! Aap toh tension ke mare subah se kuch khaaye bhi nhi the'.!! Aur bhabi ko dekhte hi aapka ..chehera jaise..khil khil sa gaya ho'. (Laugh)

Vi: chup kar virat!! Beshharm ''(BLUSH)

V: bhai 'aap BLUSH kyu kar rahe ho?? Blush toh ladkiya karti hai na''

Vm: (lovingly) viraaat ..apne bhai ki khichai karna band karo'.!!

V: maa par'

Vm: mujhe kuch nhi sun na hai!! Mere pyare bte ..ki khichai karna band karo bass

V: ha ryt!! Apka toh sirf ek hi pyara beta hai'!! Mujhe toh aap kachre ke dabbe mai se utha ke laayi thi hai na'.!! (making grumpy face)

Vanshika maa and viren laugh out loud just to irritate him more'..!!

N suddenly all of there sights go to the door '..

Vm: aao beta 'waha kyu khadi ho?? Kuch dino mai toh ye ghar tumhara hi hoga'.

Girl: ha'

she was not comfortable today 'oviously how she could be'man mai khot jot tha '.and viren got suspicious on her'..(lawyer's daily routine u c..)

Girl: virat mai tumse kuch baat karna chahati hu'

Vm and viren started moving from there when she intrupted

Girl : aap sabse mujhe baat karni hai'

N they stop n return to their place'

Girl : vo actually virat 'mujhe ..vo actually ..urhmm ..mujhe vo..

Virat :ha bolo hum sunn rahe hai..

Girl : VIRAT MUJHE TUMSE SHAADI NHI KARNI.!!!!

Virat : heheeh accha mazak kar leti ho..!!

So guysss hw was it???? This was my first part..of story '...do leave ur opininos...byee until next update...😊 SRRY if missed to pm any1...

Originally posted by: sabs...

oups u updated already 😆
yippie 😃

Originally posted by: sabs...

oups u updates already 😆
yippie [:D/]