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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#71

shantelle dear please continue soon..me waiting for the next part eagerly.. 😃

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Chantelle

@Bolly*_Crazed

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Posted: 18 years ago

#72

OMG!..U Guyz Im Soooo Teriibly Sorry!...And thanks for the wonderful commment rajeev1..and sun_423..your wait is over.. 😆 ..you guyz plz tell me your names....i feel akward calling you with your usrnames!...(I Noe Its Wierd!)...

PART12

Sujal knocks on the door

and kashish doesnt answer fooor a long time..when finally Sujal decides to go in himself!(which he wanted to do like a hour bak(being sarcastic by hour)...OK..ill bequiet nowww!)..)

Kashish whoze face was in the pillow..now gets up!..

K-Tum??

Sujal says while closing the door

S-Yes Me!

K-What do u want?

S-...Im i just seeing things or are you crying

K-Your seeing things(kashish says trying to hide her face)

Now kashish gets off her bed!..and goes upto Sujal!..

K-Tum...Yahaan Kya Lenai Aaeeyho!

S-Nothing!

K-Then?..

S-Im just here..to ...what ppl may call .."rub it in"..

K-Yah..Ok!..Then "rub it in"..and leave!

K-Yah..Yah..I understand...You dont want to show me..that your feeling weak!..

K-Weak My FOOT!...Im not scared od you!..the only time i was scared..of YOU!..Waz prolly when I Saw your face!(ya right)....

S-ShutUp!...(unfolds his arms that he had crossed)...this si just a little glimps of what you get...when u mess with me!....(and after all you have done alooot of damage....and to pay that off...it may take you your life

Kashish gives him a discusted...look!

Sujals says while opening...the door...and i will take your whole life to...pay that off..and he slams the door!

Kashish to herself!(whatever)

Sujal goes into the living room!

M-Ow..Beta....

S-Nahin..Uncle Ab Mujhe jaana hoga!..mama mera rahaa dekrhi hogi(more like Esha)

T-Acha Beta.

S-Namaste!

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When He leaves

T-Kitna acha hain naa
A-Hmmmmm

And that scence ends there

Then we see a pb!..and Sujal enters!

And he goes upto a girl....whoz wearing!...a mini skirt with a halter top!.......and she turns around and its NOT ESHA!....

😆 Just joking its her..lolz!

Esha-E

E-Sujall...Where were you?

Sujal to waiter-One drink!plz

S-Dont ask!...

E-Dont tell me!...you were with that b****

Sujal to herself-no im with her rite now

E-What?!!

S-Oh Nothing

S-Ok Quickly..tell me what you needed..to....Im very tired..and i have a meeting tomoz!..EARLY!

E-Sujall...We never spend n e time with eachother!..whats wrong??.

S-Nothing Esha!!

E-YOU HAVE TO TELL ME!!!(She says loudly!)
And everyone starts staring(see shez a little drunk)

E-everytime you avoid me...whats the point of this relationship...if no one is happy!

S-Ok Esha!..calm down!..

E-No!!!..she sayz..a little unstable!

Sujal gets irratated!

And He pulls her out of there!

Outside in the parking lot!

S-What are you trying to prove???..by performing...infront of everybody??

Esha grabs her arm out of Sujals hand!

E-Your calling this a performance??.....If you cared a little about me!..you woodnt be seeing this performance!

S-Ok..Ok....Calm..Down..We can talk about this tomoz!

E-Why tomoz why not todai?...

S-Eshaaa try to understand!

Esha turns the other way!

S-Ok...Esha if i didnt care about you...wood....i have made the decision to spend the rest of mi life with you?

Esha kinda calms down!..and turns her face towards..Sujal!

S-Im Tired rite now...thats why i wanted to sort this out tomoz...So can we pllzzz go!

Esha looks around..a little...

E-Ok!....They both get into the car!..and lve

And all of a sudden...someone comes out!....of the bushes...and smiles widely

And its non other than Kashish

K-I Didnt even have to pay!...and I just watched..a drama filled...ACTION movie..!!...wow!(she says it in the kind a way...Mohini..acts..in Kyunki Saas..With all the face expressions and all ..lolz)

Kashish thinking to herself-Ub Iyga Mazaa!

And she leaves from there!

Ok I Tried to make it long..sorry if it wasnt....

plz...comment...thankx!

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group_1223

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Posted: 18 years ago

#73

kewl part....wonder wut kash's up 2....

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Chantelle

@Bolly*_Crazed

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Posted: 18 years ago

#74

PART13!....I thot Id make the most of my available time..since school is starting on Tuesday!....(but dont worry!..that wont hold me bak(only sometimes!)..)...

Recap-Sujal and Esha get into a little fight,argument or whatever you may call it..all i know is..that it wasnt normal 😕 😆 ...justjoking

Kashish gets into her car and leaves

The Next Day....

Mihir and Kavya..are in the meeting with Sujal..about there new being partners and all!...

And Tulsi is gone to the mandhir!

and only Anjali and Kashish are home...and its around 12pm!...

Kashish to Anjali

K-Bhabhi Im going out!...will be bak around a hour!(she yells while running down the stairs..fixing her shoes..and hair!)

A-Ab Tum kahaan Jareee ho?
K-Somewhere bhabhi..ake(when i return)..battown gee!
A-But then ill be alone at home..and Mihir papa..nein..ok nm u go!
K-Ok...Bhabhi not an hour..ill be bak in 1/2 an hour..or maybe earlier than that!
K-Okay?
A-Okay!!..lolz..

Kashish quickly gives her bhabhi a hug..and leaves the Virani Mansion!<<Ill Call it that(if I Dont forget!) 😆

Kashish quickly leaves...and is looking at a napkin while driving

Kashish to herself!

K-Shit...I Cant read N E of this!!..God!..Now what do i do?...She stops the car!
K-I Knew...That I Shoodnt have followed..that fool!..and Midnight!...Ok Let me see....(she continues on driving..and I Think she finally reaches her destination!)

And she stops the car!...infront of a mansion!...she gets out of her car and looks around!....wow for one person living in it..this place is pretty BIG!...

Finally.....She wraps...a scarf around her face...and goes upto the door..entrance door of the mansion..and places a basket like ...thing on the door step..and she rings the bell

Ding!...Dong!...Ding....Etc!

And she quickly hides herself behind the bushes!

And someone opens the door!...its one of those Ragu,Ramu Kakaz! 😆 .....

Kaka-K

K-Are yahaan tho koi bhi nahin hai...he looks around..when his eyes fall on the basket..he takes it and goes inside!

K-Beta...yeh baar para hua tha...

Voice-Mujhe dijea

He gives the basket to someone

Voice-Thankx..Aap Jyee(you can go)

K-Jee

The person observes the basket..and then finally looks in .....duh! 😆 ....

And she finds a letter which reads

Dear,Esha(Yes its her)

Dear,Esha
This letter will be one of your lives most important

letters,as you will find out the truth about,someone you have chosen to spend your whole life

with,there is a casstte..inside...plz..listen to it!..and you will understand what Iam talking about!

Yours truly,
Someone who Cares

Esha quickly puts the cassatte in and listens!

Hello,Esha I Noe you will feel akward listening to this...as you dont noe me..and I Just found out about you
,But I Request you..plzzzzz...dont marrry..Sujall...It will not only make your life hell...but mine..and my..my...Babies..who hasnt even taken a step into the world!..yes...Im pregnant with Sujalz...Baby!.....I Noe he loves me but he is only marrying you for some dirty reason of his own!.......so i request you...again...to save not only 3(Sujal,Esha,And the woman who is talking..which is Kashish..lolz...shez not relly pregnant..shez just getting revenge...i hope ya all noe this).......But to save 4 lives including..my to be born baby...and the cassatte ends there...........

E-😲 😲 😲 ..LOLZ...And she falls on the ground!..crying!!

The End!...I Mean of this part!

Tell me how you liked it!...thankx....and take care!

Edited by Bolly*_Crazed - 18 years ago

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#75

shantelle zabardast..tooooooo goodddddddddddd....... 👏
please post the next part soon...me waiting for the next part eagerly... 😃

Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago

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Chantelle

@Bolly*_Crazed

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Posted: 18 years ago

#76

PART14.....Herez the next part!

Recap-Kashish tells esha..that Sujal.got another woman pregnant and he loves her(not Kashish..but some1 else...) not her(esha)

Esha Falls on the ground crying...And after when she manages to control herself!

Over at Kashish place...Kashish reaches home!

A-You here?...ANd sooo fast!

K-Yes Bhabhi!...Im here!..she says while taking her kardigan off..and hugging Anjali

A-do you want anything to eat!?

K-No Thanx Bhabhi..Im Too excited to eat!

A-Excited?

K-OOoOooH....Bhabhi You wont understand!

A-Lets go in the garden!

K-Sure!!...

They go to the garden....and just chill..when finally Tulsi..comes bak from the Mandhir...

K-Lagta Hai Mama Agay!...

A-hmmmmn...Chalo!

K&A-Hi Mama!

T-Hi Guyz...guess who I Saw...at thre Mandhir!

A-Kaun?

S-Vo Sujal Ki Mama!..Hai..Naa..Une.....Bohut Achi Hain ...Phele tho mujhe patha nahin that key vo Sujal ki maa..hain...aur hum tho aisi hi bathe kerne lagi...Par fir use Sujal lene ayatha!..

A-Ohh....Wow!

K-Yah..Cool...(Trying to put on a fake smile)

T-Are!..Agar Sujal Wahaan Paey Agaya Tho Kavya Aur Tumare Papa Nahin Ayai?....

A-Athai Hi Hoga!!...Palen un ko apne office bhi ponchna that..kyunki meeting tho Sujal key Office pey thi!

T-Oh Haan!..Chalo Mein Khana lagathi hoon!

A-Jee

K-Mama..Mujhe Bhook Nahin Hai!...Mah Upar jarr rahin hoon!

T-acha..owe Anjali

A-Aie..Mama...(she sed while looking at Kashish wierd!)

Kashish goes upstairs..and starts to talk to her friends on msn..and downloads some songs on her i-pod!nano

And now its like around 6pm!..and Kashishz phone rings

And Its Kisna-KI

K-Hello

KI-Yoh Kashish

K-Hey Kisna!!..How are you?

KI-Good Good!..Hey you want to go out...we have never gone out...since Ive came bak!

K-Aewwwnn...Yaar..I Noe..Sure!!..Who else Iz Coming?

KI-Obviously The Same..Me,You,Simone,Shantelle..and Simones Other friend..Whats her name..oh Kripa!!

K-Oh Ok!!....Umm Where ..and when?

Kisna tells Kashish about where and when..and Kashish Hangs up!

Kashish Takes a show..and curls up her hair...she puts on a high mini skirt...thats pink!..and she puts on a white halter top!..with a black..leather Kardigan!...and she puts on whitle flat fli-flops..and puts on matching looong and detalailed..black earings..and a black purse!(bebe)..and she puts on some light make-up..and dark-eyeshadow!

..and she is looooking hott!...and shez off to downstairs!

Ok Thats it for today!..too find out what happens at the bar(thats where there going)..and beforre that 😉 ...wait and watch!!...plz comment!

and take care! 😛

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Chantelle

@Bolly*_Crazed

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Posted: 18 years ago

#77

PART15!...Im Bored So I Thought Id Continue!!.........

Kashish comes downstairs...and tells Mihir that!...shez going out!

K-Papa!..Mein bahar jarahee..hoon..vo kisna jubse aya hai hum use waqt hi nahin deh payai!

M-Oh IC...Ucha ...Have Fun!

K-Thanx Papa!...She hugs her dad...and yells bye to everyone else!

Before she steps out..Anjali comes upto her...

A-Kashish...I Dont now if its just me...but I THink your upto something....youve been acting strange all day!!

K-Arey!..Bhabhi!..Theres nothing like that..dont worry!

A-Ok!!...But If there is something...just be careful....kahin tum itnee garbar mein naa peh jaho..key baar..nikla muskil ke barabhir ho jaye!

K-Ok Bhabhi!...Bye..

A-Have fun!

K-Luv Ya!!....She yells while running out!!....

Kisna guyz..all came to pick her...up!!

Shantelle-SH!....Simone-S Kisna-KI

KI-Hey..Yaar!

K-Hey Guyz!!

SH-Lets Go!!

Then they Zoom Off!!...

S-Oh..Kashish..Hum...Kripa Ko Bhio Pik Up Kurna Hay!

KI-Here..we are!....

SH-Wow...Nice House!!

Kisna Honks a few times..but noone comes!...

KI-Hey Simone..Go And Get her!!

S-Ok..Hey Kashish Cum With me!!

K-Aww...Ok!!'

They both go into the house

And they ring the bell...and Kripa answers...

Kripa-KR

KR-Oh Guyz Im So Sorry!!..I Was in the shower..and..

Kashish cuts her off!

K-Oh Its Ok!!..Im Kashish!

KR-Oh Hi!..Kashish!..

KR-Umm...U guyz Can wait in the living room...and ill just be out!

S&K-Ok!

They both go and sit down!...

K-Hey Yaar!..I Need to go check out mi make-up!..Wheres the bathroom?

S-I Dont noe...just look around!

K=Ok!....Kashish is looking around and she enters a room!..when all of a sudden she bumps into somone...and shez about to fall..when that personz muscular arms save her..and she is in his arms rite now!???

K-Ahhhhh!

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They keep staring at eachother...thinking**

The Guy-Wow!....Shez So Gorgeous!..isnt she the girl..that messed with sujal?

Kashish-omg!..Hez So Cute!

Umm..All of a sudden!..they flashbak to real life

Guy-Oh Im Sorry!

K-Uhh..No....You saved me!..ha..I Shood say sorry!

Guy-No...Umm..By The Way!..Im Prithvi..Prithvi Khanna

K-Oh ..Hi..Im Kashish...

P-Nice..Name!

k-Thankx!...She says..Fixing her hair!..and blushing a little

K-Umm...Wherez the bathroom?

P-Too The Right.end of this hall way!

K-Thanx!...

Kashish begins to walk!..

P-Umm...Excuse Me!

K-Umm..Yah?...she says..as she turns around?

P-Your purse..he says while holding it up!

K-Oh Sorry!...

She takes her purse..and goes to the washroom

While Prithvi smiles!..at her!

After the washroom...Kashish goes bak to....Simone!....

K-Omg!..Simone..your never going to believe...(when all of a sudden...Kripa walks in!)...

And they go to the car!...and they drive off!!..

I Noe..Not alot happened..in this part!..but the next part will have Sujal in!!... 😉 ..dont worry!...

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#78

tooooooo goodddddddddddd........... 👏
now why prithvi that too for kashish...
but no problem i think now sujal will play foul as kashish played foul with him & esha so now i think it is sujal's turn to pay back the same coin.. what say ????😉
you please post the next part soon , me waiting for it eagerly... 😃

Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago

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Chantelle

@Bolly*_Crazed

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Posted: 18 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: sun_423

tooooooo goodddddddddddd........... 
now why prithvi that too for kashish... 
but no problem
i think now sujal will play foul as kashish played foul with him &
esha so now i think it is sujal's turn to pay back the same coin.. what
say ???? 
 
you please post the next part soon , me waiting for it eagerly...

Thank-you!...Umm...Your name is suri rite?...and if it isnt im terribly sorry...becuz..I Luv the comments you leave...but i dont noe your name ..so plz tell me...thanks once again..and keep reading 😃

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Originally posted by: Bolly*_Crazed
] Thank-you!...Umm...Your name is suri rite?...and if it isnt im terribly sorry...becuz..I Luv the comments you leave...but i dont noe your name ..so plz tell me...thanks once again..and keep reading 😃

shantelle dear my name is surya...& my pet name is suri...you can call me what ever you want..surya or suri..is ok with me...😃