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Chantelle

@Bolly*_Crazed

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#91

Attention....Since Skool Has Started..I Need a good reason to continue!..and I Need to feel that ppl are reading mi fan-fic..so im not just contining for none.....SO FROM NOW ONN....I Wont continue My Fic Unless I Have atleast 5 comments before I Do Continue.....

Thankx And tell me what you think?..(tell me if you think dis is too drastic 😆 )..will be waiting

Regards,
Shantelle

Take Care! 😛

Edited by Bolly*_Crazed - 18 years ago

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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+ 10

Posted: 18 years ago

#92

shantelle dear the part totally rocked..i liked it very very much.....toooooo goooddddddd.... 👏
please continue soon..me waiting for the next part eagerly... 😃

Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago

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golu_1677

@golu_1677

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#93

hi! ur story is really good. Sorry couldnt write to u earlier. Pls continue soon

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group_1223

@group_1223

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#94

awesome parts yaar....i jus read da prev. parts....i was away on mi vacation....n guess wut...mi skewl starts too....but trust me...alot of ppl read ur fan fic....so u shud continue it no matter wut....

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KulBin

@KulBin

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#95

HEY superb parts.... 👏 👏
gr8 gng.... 👏 dear...
waiting for the next part.... 😊

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Tanasha

@tanasha1993

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#96

i just love ur fanfic...pls cont soon... 👏

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Chantelle

@Bolly*_Crazed

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#97

PART17!.......Ok I Guess..Everyone read the message...and there were 5 comments..so Im Continuing..lolz....So here it is........

Recap-Sujal hurts Kashish...and Sujal gets pissed..cuz he noes his happened cuz of him!

Sujal quickly pickes Kashish up in his arms!..and put her into his car....and after like 10 minutes..they reach this house!...

Sujal goes in carrys kashish onto the door way(oh and kashish has fainted)....

He rings the bell...Ding..Dong!..

and Prithvi answers!...(Yes this is Pritviz house...Him And Sujal are like Best friend...If you guyz dont remember this..go and read the intro..of Sujal..Pyc)

P-Yaar Tu?...Aur..(Sujal cuts him off)

K-Shut-up yaar...I Didnt noe where to take her...And you took the medical course!..so hurry up ..and fix her!

P-What!?!..why didnt you take her to a hospital?...

S-Becuz if they asked how it happened?...Then I Coodnt say that I Did this to her..they wood have threw me in jail..and I Dont think I Wood do too well..in Jail!!

P-Ok!..Ok!...Just chill....first tell me how this all happened!

Everything is silent..but Sujalz lips are moving..as in hez telling him!(Like in serials..when the explaining is to long 😆 )

P-Burst out in laughter..WHAT??.....She told Esha that you have an affair...

S-Shut-up!..Prithvi.!!! 😡 (He sed in a seriose voice)........But I Didnt care about that much..I Coodve controlled Esha there..But She also told her that!..I Got the woman I Have a affair with pregnant!...(He told him putting his hand ontop of his head!).....God I Wish I Cood just!!!!!

P-Ok...Ok!..Chill...I Understand..That you hate her..and want to do all this bad stuff to her...than why are you bringing her to me..when she only has a little wound!..when you wanna cause her all the pain..in the world!

S-Buddy!!..(He sed all of a sudden)...Just fx her up!..and Ill Drop her off home(but there was a reason why Sujal was helping Kashish..No No!!..Not cuz they were falling in luv!..but a nother dirty plan....which.I Will tell you guyz later!)

...Prithvi looks at Kashish..and her inoccence..

P-Yaar...But she is gorgeous!

S-Shut-up and do your job!..

P-Ok Bring her to my room!

S-Ok!..(so he picked her up..and took her to his room..beucz thats were all the medical care stuff was)

By the time when Sujal!....Put her down on the bed!..Kashish started coming out to her scenses!..
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K-Sujal?....Tum Nein??....(She started looking around)..

K-Where did u bring me??...(this time Prithvi was outside..getting his other stuff ready!)

k-Why did u bring..ahhhh(he bak was begining to hurrt).

P-Dont worry!..Kashish

K-Prithvi Mein Yahaan Kaisey?

Sujal was confused as how do they noe..eachother

S-Vo Mein Laya

K-Kyun?????

P-Vo Tumare..Beet(Back) Mein..Paher Ki Vajaah Sein Zukam{Wound) Hua Hein..

K-Zanteen Hoon..(She sed while looking at Sujal...who then looked bak at her...

P-But Were going to fix it!..(Prithvi sed..putting his gloves on)...

K-Thankx Prithiv...(she smiled)

Sujal Just listened to thier convo..and got annoyed!

P-Kashish I Need you to stand up facing the wall...incase you need to put your hands upto supposrt yourself..becuz this wound is on your bak!

K-Ok!

Prithvi came in from behind...and lifted up...Kashish Shirt to her mid bak!..

Sujal felt akward...And he wanted to leave..but didnt...just incase Prithvi came tooo close to Kashish(But why does he care...This maybe cood be becuz he doesnt want any other guy near Kashish..since hez starting to like her..But Im Not Sure 😕 😉 )

Kashish Closed her eyes..as Prithvi lifted her shurt..and then cleaned the wound..and finally bandaged it!

P-There you go!..your done!

K-Thanks....Kashish sed...as he gave him a peck on the cheek

Sujal was discusted...lolz

Sujal grabbed Kashish and..

S-Lets go Kashish!

K-first let go off me!!...

Sujal let go off her

P-Hey Kashish I waz Thinking...Maybe you and I Cood Go Out sometime..

Sujal to himself...yah rite!

K-Sureeee!!...I Wood Love that!

S-IS LIKE 😲 .......( 😆 )

Ok Thats it for today!...Will Be waiting for comments 😛 ..

take care!..and luv ya all! 😃

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Chantelle

@Bolly*_Crazed

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#98

IGNORE THIS POST! 😛

Edited by Bolly*_Crazed - 18 years ago

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Chantelle

@Bolly*_Crazed

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: Bolly*_Crazed
Thanks Ayesha...sorry if i spelled your name wrong! 😕 ! 😛

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 18 years ago

#100

👏
toooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
goodddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd
i loved the part totally....... 👏 please post the next part soon..me will be waiting... 😃

Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago

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