FF: Unspoken PART 26 PG 141 *new thread!!!

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bewakoofLadki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#851

Originally posted by: cheesemad
Farah update kar..!!

ohh her name is farah..nyc name

aye farah update kar chal jaldi 😆

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Farah

@LuvArnavKhushi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#852

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srya

@srya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#853

arnav please dont believe vijay blindly...listen to ur wife and mother's advice...

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Mari

@mizzle_pizz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#854

"He wondered if it was the burning feeling that those silly couples felt when sparks flew between them in those silly movies then he almost laughed when he realized the pain was in his forearm, from holding her head up for so long."

This made me LAUGH! 😆😆 That is so typically characteristic of Arnav, to discount any feeling that might account to flirtatious or remotely sexual! Enjoying the story so far Farah!

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Mari

@mizzle_pizz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#855

Poor Sonam, I felt so sorry for her. Arnav when riled can be a bas***d, so you really do't want to be on the wrong side of him. Loving the story as its unfolding, I am hoping though you have finished it or will DEFINITELY intend to finish it. Or else...

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Mari

@mizzle_pizz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#856

Finally the f**ker actually feels at fault, his snappiness made me wanna slap him... Hard btw!

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Mari

@mizzle_pizz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#857

I didn't know you hated super long updates... What were mine then? LOL

OHHH snap, btw I just realised that as conniving as you probably are that Khushi is a sadasyan... Arnav possibly could take her behaviour from start to finish as a way to to manipulate him... Hmm will have to keep reading further to find out if my theories are right or am just sprouting tutti...

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Mari

@mizzle_pizz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#858

So... He's a laird huh!!

I was smirking as I read that part, don't know why but I had the most ridiculous smirk on my face... ⭐️

Yippeee so Arnav "proposed..." Well its something atleast!

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Mari

@mizzle_pizz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#859

Sooo... here's an awkward question... After reading that beautiful, seductive yet completely innocent scene, how will I be able to go back to writing these scenes the way I do?! I am sort of embarrassed by my own ff's HEAVY intimate descriptions and whatnot! But that is only due to frustration with IPKKND's depiction of Arnav's and Khushi's love scenes. And SP seriously peed me off and drove me nuts with the interruptions during their "love scenes."

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Mari

@mizzle_pizz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#860

I had tears when reading how she tried to keep her emotions bottled up, it was painful and as a reader you made me feel her pain. Am glad the misunderstanding is over with. I am however worried knowing that that vijay is still out there looming away at large. Kill him off ASAP please!