FF: Unspoken PART 26 PG 141 *new thread!!!

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#491

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Awesome update

Frankly speaking I wasn't expecting marriage to take place this soon, not that I am complaining. It was a treat to read ASR and Khushi's marriage.

I have to say a lot many things today about the update.

First of all Khushi shouldn't have done this. She should have told him the truth. Hey Farah, khushi must be knowing about Arnav's hatred and the reason behind it, right? She will have have to face the consequences.

About ASR, I am feeling sad for him. He loves Khushi so much. Poor guy😭

Sonam didn't tell anything to anyone but how long they would keep khushi's real identity hidden.

Okay, I said a lot about future, time for present.

I loved the update totally. ASR is so in love with Khushi. He was acting like a teenager all the time and I loved this avatar of Akdoo Singh Raizada.

Waiting for the next chapter eagerly.😃

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vittoriA Giardano

@kbtr

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#492

B..R.I.L.L.I.A.N.T!!!! My friend, you have outdone yourself. I thought the last update was intense. But the tempo of this update - it's a whirlwind.

Loved the wedding, the reception, and finally, the consummation. You don't believe in beating around the bush, and I love you for that. As a reader, you have my complete and rapt attention!

My God! I am now, so, so, so, so, so, afraid. Of what will happen when Arnav finds out. On the one hand, I'm thinking Kushi should have told him. On the other, I'm thinking, how could she have? He would have kicked her out right away! But I would like to know exactly what it was that created the hatred between these two clans? How did Arnav's dad die at the hands of the Sadasyan. And probably, it might have been at the hands Kushi's dad!

I have only one complaint. Please update now!!!!!!!

(Yeah, yeah I know, you have a life!)

Waiting...

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arnshi

@arnshi

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#493

beautiful and yes the love part was subtly and beautifully shown...awesome...so happy for them but I think its the beginning of the tough journey...just arnav remain by her side always.

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amita

@star_fan1

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#494

Wow its really a big surprise

I had doubt what will be Khushi's decision she accept Arnav's proposal or she tell him the truth

But you directly made them married in one update

Loved this update too much

Now they are married and become one in every way

Thanks for such a sweet and cute and lovely update

So what's coming for us next

Waiting for next update

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@momo121

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#495

Amazing update!!
Thnks for the pm

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#496

Wow, that was an amazing and brilliant update.

Loved the update it was written beautifully,

Wow, they got married, so sweet.

You wrote all aspects of the wedding perfectly,

So sonam knows the real identity of Khushi, wonder if she will tell vijay.

Awww loved the last part, it was so intimate, beautiful and sensual.

They have finally become one in every sense, love it.

The update from start to finish was a brilliant read,

Eagerly waiting for the next part,

Continue soon and thanks for the PM xx

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ShikhaKhushi

@ShikhaKhushi

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#497

hayye!!!!! That was just tooo beautiful!

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Sona257

@Sona257

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#498

OMG they got married and become one 😳
I'm kinda scared when arnav knows the truth about khushi.. how wil he react.. man he definitely feel betrayed 😕
Hope that to have some arshi romance before the truth comes out 😉
Really Loved the update! The story is just going Wow! Great job dear.. 👍🏼

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Pari

@-.Pari.-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#499

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Lo Another Shock for Me ... First you shocked me with an update where they kiss ... then an update where he proposes her and now an update where they get Married 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

WOW ... They actually got married ... let me pinch myself ... Cant believe its a reality!

Ok I should stop my drama ... Gosh now even I have become one like you ... lol 😆

Anywz back to the Update ...

Yaaay they got married

Thank god Sonam did not tell anyone ... so nice of her 😳

But now I am really sacred re! What will happen when Arnav comes to know the truth???? When is she gona tell him????? I am so sacred of his reaction!!!!

Should I get ready to be shocked for the next update????

Update Soon ... Cant wait for long!!!

Love ❤️ Pari

Edited by pari162 - 12 years ago