FF: Unspoken PART 26 PG 141 *new thread!!!

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

ajoop

@ajoop

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#201

Loved it.
Arnav's mom is so cute😊

Flashback was interesting must say 😊😊

Quote

Loads of names

@Chocolate_barun

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#202

awesome dear
the flashbacks in every update is good idea
arnav's pain of loosing his dad and taking revenge
khushi praying to god for arnav
she got mad at arnav and feels not welcomed
arnav thinking he is at fault
update soon
thanks for pm

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

amita

@star_fan1

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#203

lovely and beautiful

flash back part was really nice

Dav and Arnav's heated convo and Arnav;'s pain and anger for his father's death

you mantion it that they didn't call each other by their name i was just thinking about it when i was reading this part

waiting for that special moment when call each other by their name

loved the way Khushi make him laugh

now Arnav is feeling a bit for Khushi

looking forward for more

plz continue it soon

Quote

Darshini

@IPKKNDfan4ever

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#204

i cant stop saying dat i'm in love with this story !!!❤️❤️

each update of yours makes me crave for more !...

its really very different from all stories i've read so far...its really refreshing👏👏

again this update was BRILLIANT !!!...

starting with the flashback...i felt sooo sad for Arnav !...

he s reallly very hurt from his father s death😭😭

thankfully the people around have been supportive😊

Arnav isnt wanting to show his concern for Khushi...and doesnt want to talk about him going away in front of Khushi...

i just love his mother!!...her teasing was very very cute!..

and when Arnav said dat he s said so in Khushi s favor and immediately after he said his!😆😆

i simply Love this Arnav !..

can imagine Khushi in dat outfit

cant blame Arnav for admiring her😉

dat was soo Beautiful when Khushi sent a prayer for Arnav❤️

every part of Arshi is really very beautifully writtenn!!...

the way Arnav was looking at Khushi and she was shying away...😳😳

i always love this despo Arnav who really wants to look at Khushi 😆 ...but his "willpower" 😡

lol the guys were soo cute when they laughed among themselves when Khushi was looking at them😆😆😆

hehe Arnav considers 28 to be an old age !😆

i'm surprised at how Arnav actually told his age to Khushi ..i thought he would be angry !...

dats very true dat wisdom comes with maturity and not with age...

was Khushi pointing at someone when she said from an old wise man who died falling in a well ??

😕😕

ufff Arnav s laugh !!...🤢🤢

surely he does brighten everyone s heart with his laugh...

if not everyone then surely mine☺️

ooppss Jealous Arnie was back when dat guy sat near Khushi !😆

poor Sid...😔

Arnav actually hurt Khushi with his rude talks..

loved Khushi s answering back👍🏼

Arnav is soo after Khushi..he even gave his brother s responsibility to someone else while he was busy running after Khushi😆

can see how much he doesnt care about others😉😉

i guess Khushi felt a sharp pain when she said dat she s surely staying there but doesnt feel welcomed

hope Arnav rectifies his mistake...

reallly i dint notice dat Arshi havent said each other s names yet ...😳

really eager for dat Special moment😳😳

Edited by IPKKNDfan4ever - 12 years ago

Quote

Suchi

@ChitraF

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#205

Awesome part.. waiting for that special update..

Quote

Neen

@nnsunn

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#206

Amazing update.
Arnav seems deeply affected by his father's death, but are sadasyas real culprit? Khushi being excited about her new dress was really cute. Liked arshi conversation.
Thanks 4 pm