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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Payal_156

Awesum
thanx fr d pm
like butn nt wrking


thanx di.
koi ni
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sanalala1990

Wow just wow

awesome loved it


thanx dear.
i am glad you liked my update
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sharmaayushi

HEY PLZZZ DONT DISCONTINUE PLZZZ
WE LOVE THIS STORY PLZZZ UPDATE SOON


i am not discontinuing this dare.
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanx for comminting my ff
i am not discontinuing this ff

Edited by mastmegha22 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


PART-17

Arjun; thanx riya.

Riya: sir thanx to mujhe kehna chahiye aapne meri boring story jo suni.

Arjun: riya yeh story nahi tumhara past hai or tumhari baatein sunke mai kabhi bore nahi honga. Abh yeh samjhe ya samjhun???

Riya: samajh gaye.

Shree: sir rathore sir ne day off kar diya hai. Rii tu jaldi se apna saman bag mai rakhle main tera niche parking main wait kar raha hoon.

Riya: okzz

Riya is packing her things and arjun was staring at her and thinking yeh ladki itni ajeeb hain iske saath itna bura hua or tab bhi itni itni khush rehti hain. Amazing but why i am thinking of her??

Riya: sirr...

Arjun: haan riya

Riya: sir ap ghar nahi jayenge???

Arjun: haan bas abhi 5-10 minutes mai jayunga.

Riya: ok byee sir and thanx for once again.

Arjun: byee and dont be thanx please.

Riya: ok and she left from there and after sometimes arjun is also left from office.

NEXT MORNING

As usual riya is preparing breakfast and waiting kor shree and he comes there both take breakfast together and went towards there office. On the other hand rathore comes in arjun house and they also take breakfast together and went towards office.

In the mid road shree ki bike kharab ho jaati hain and riya was angry on shree and both are fighting.

Riya: yeh kya hai tu car nahi la sakta tha

Shree: mujhe kya pata tha yeh kharab ho jaye ghi.

Riya: teri bike or tujhe hi nahi pata yeh kab khrab hogi or kab theek?

Shree: mai kya koi doctor ya fir kio jyotshi(astrologer) hoon jo mujhe pata hoga kab meri bike sahi hai or kab kharab hogi.

Riya: but abh kya kare ek to tu late aaya or agar hum late ho gaye to.

Shree: haan riyu agar hum late ho gaye to vo damit or samjhe samjhun hame nahi chodenge.

Riya: haan yaar or upar se main to uss samjhe samjhun ke saath cabine share karti hoon.

Shree: abh kya kare yaar??

Suddenly one car is stop in front of them and car main se rathore or arjun bahar nikal kar aate hain.

Few Minutes before

Arjun and Sam are crosing road and arjun sees riya and feels happy but also feels she is angry when his eyes caught shree. He feels happy that riya is angry on shree but dont know why.

Rathore: arjunnn... arjun

Arjun: haan sam kya hua

Rathore: kuch nahi tumhe kya hua itni der se bula raha hoon.

Arjun: amm kuch nahi vo dekh riya

Rathore: kaha

Arjun: vaha

Rathore: haan yeh shree or riya kya kar rahe hai sadak ke bech main

Arjun: abh mujhe kya pata

Both goe towards shree and riya direction

Fb ends...

Edited by mastmegha22 - 12 years ago
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Arjun and rathore get outside from the car and shree riya didnt see them and both are listening patiently there talks.

Shree: abh kya kare ??

Riya: tera to pata nahi but aaj mai to mari

Shree: vo kaise??

Riya: statistically speaking 99% rathore sir tujhe or mujhe conference room main daatenge or 25% arjun sir hame unhi ke saath daatenge to teri daat to khatam but 100% mujhe arjun sir hamare joint cabine main bahut bada lecture denge with his famous dialog samjhe ya samjhun.

Both laughed and samjun also laugh silently.

Shree: haan yaar abh kya karen

Riya: sabh teri galti hain

Shree: fir tu mujhpe bhadak rahi hain maine sorry bola na late aane ke liye

Riya: kash mera bhai hota na tujhe chodta nahi.

Shree: vo to vaise bhi apni pehelvani mujh par hi dikhata hai

Riya: mere bhai ke bare main but riya was cut by rathore voice

Rathore: yeh kya ho raha hai??

Shre: sir aap dono

Arjun: haan hum

Riya: vo sir hamari bike kharab ho gaye hai

Rathore: hamare saath chalo

Shree: ok sir

All are sit in rathore car and went towards office. They reached office in time and thanx to rathore and all are present in conference room and riya goes towards cafe for making coffee.

In Conference Room

Rathore and arjun reading newspaper and shree, ayesha and liza are talking. Suddenly conference door open and chotu comes.

Chotu: hie i am back

All sees towards chotu voice and gets delighted first shree sprinted towards him and hug him then ayesha, liza, rathore and arjun.

Rathore: kaise ho chotu??

Chotu: theek hoon sir.

Arjun: mission kaisa raha.

Chotu: sir successful.

Ayesha: tu ghar kyun nahi gaya??

Chotu: mujhe aap sabki yaad aa rahi thi to socha aap sabse milloon. All sits in there seat.

Riya also comes there with the coffe

Riya: sir coffee and placed tray on the table

All turns towards there voice and chotu also turns and get shocked riya also sees towards him and get freezed and shocked. Tears comes both of there eyes. All are wondered what happen but shree understand this

Edited by mastmegha22 - 12 years ago
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BG MUSIC

Kitni Baatein Yaad Aati Hai
Tasveerein Si Ban Jaati Hain
Main Kaise Inhein Bhooloon
Dil Ko Kya Samjhaun

Riya and chotu take small steps and both have tears in there eyes and remebering there past
the flashback coming there eyes.

Kitni Baatein Kehne Ki Hai
Honton Par Jo Sehmi Si Hai
Ik Roz Inhein Sun Lo
Kyun Aise Gum-Sum Ho

They both were thinking when they fight with eachother, playing and dancing.

Kyun Poori Ho Na Paayi Daastaan


Kaise Aayi Hai Aisi Dooriyaan

Dono Ke Dilon Mein Chhupa Hai
Jo Ik Anjaana Sa Gham
Kya Ho Paayega Woh Kam
Koyi Kya Kahe

Remember that scene when there father dies and both are alone in the world


Dono Ne Kabhi Zindagi Ke
Ik Mod Pe Bhi Jo Paayi
Hai Kaisi Woh Tanhaai
Koyi Kya Kahe

when they dont have money and they both have less food and both are fedding eachother


Kitna Viraan Hai Ye Sama

Saanson Mein Jaise Ghulta Hai Dhuwaan
Kaisi Aayi Hai Aisi Dooriyaan


Kitni Baatein Yaad Aati Hai
Tasveerein Si Ban Jaati Hain
Main Kaise Inhein Bhooloon

remembering that scene when one says somthing wrong about chotu and riya fights for them and after that both bro- sis hug eachother.


Tumse Aaj Yun Milke Dil Ko
Yaad Aaye Lamhein Kal Ke
Ye Aansoon Kyun Hai Chhalke
Ab Kya Kahen

Remembering that scne one day riya got her hand burned and chotu scold her but aftersometime hug her and riya kissed him on his cheek.


Tumne Hamko Dekha Jo Aise
Toh Ik Umeed Hai Jaagi
Phir Tumse Pyaar Paane Ki
Ab Kya Kahen

Remember one day chotu comes late and riya waits for him after he comes she arranges dinner and both ate together.


Aa Gaye Ham Kahaan Se Kahaan

Hariharan:
Dekhe Mudke Ye Dil Ka Kaarvaan
Kaisi Aayi Hai Aisi Dooriyaan

remeber that scene when chotu says stay away from me dur chali jao wala flashback.


Kitni Baatein Kehne Ki Hai
Honton Par Jo Sehmi Si Hai
Ik Roz Inhein Sunlo
Kyun Aise Gum-Sum Ho

After that both didnt talk eachother


Kitni Baatein Yaad Aati Hai
Tasveerein Si Ban Jaati Hain
Main Kaise Inhein Bhooloon
Dil Ko Kya Samjhaun

tThey both came close to eachother

Chotu: riya

Riya: bhaiyaa...

Both hug eachother and started crying and all others are shocked accept shree because he knows everything.

Chotu: i missed you chutki.

Riya: i missed you to bhaiya.

All have tears in her eyes soon after some minutes both parted and riya

Riya: i hate you bhaiya aapne mujhe ek baar bhi yaad nahi kiya na.

Chotu: mai to tujhe bahut yad karta tha but tu apne bhai se itna naraz thi ki ek baar bhi milne nahi aaye.

Riya: vo main aapko vishvas dilana chahati thi ki aapke saath rehne se mujhe kuch nahi hoga

Chotu: to tu mujhse itna dur chali jayegi

Riya: sorry bhaiya

Again both hug eachother and all are happy.

Chotu: sir dekiye meri chutki meri behen.

All are happy and yet angry because riya didnt told them

Chotu: ri tu yaha kya kar rahi hain

Rathore: main batata hoon she is etf officer Senior officer riya mukherjee research and encounter specialist.

chotu shocked.

to be continues...

Precap same as chotu riya moments and etf masti.

I knkow this part is boring but next part full on masti.

or haan like button ke saath comment bhi kardiya karo or jo newbie hain jinhe pm chahiye vo mention kare apne comment ke saath
Edited by mastmegha22 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res😳*edited*
sorry for unreserving so late😳
superb meghu..
shree ko riya ne danta and sam and arjun iske mazze le rhe the😆
finally chottu back and met riya...!!
loved their reunion it was very emotional...!!!
continue soon...!!!
Edited by devildiva21 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome update dear..

love ariya conversation..
& love Riya & Shree's fight also..
wow..so arjun get happy to see riya..but also get angry to see Shree with her..
& get happy when ri fight with Shree..
aisa lagata he meghu ke kuch jal raha he..😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
hahahaah...
aur chotu's entry..wow..
the song is so beautifulll..& you describe their memeory with it is just fab..
precap is interesting..
waiting for more ariya scene..& etf masti...
plz..update soon..
& thanks for pm..
Edited by ariyabestfan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Fantastic update dr.

Loved Ariya convo n Arjun's mv about Riya.

Shree n Riya's nok-jhok was adorable.

OMG Arjun felt happy whn he saw that Riya was angry with Shree.

Her statistics wala dialogue about Samjun was funny.

Loved Riya n Chotu's reunion. It was so senti.

Thanks for pm dr.

Continue soon.

Edited by Aks13 - 12 years ago

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