The Marriage And The Dream!! ( SS & TR OS )

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Guys another OS bye mehek !!!!
you all may known her as maggie also

i know she has done lots of stunts lately.. 😕
and she is really sorry about that 😊
please do give her a chance and read this OS
it's a simply request..

INDEX:
Post One: AUTHOR'S NOTE
Post Two: TR OS
Post Three: SS OS

enjoy!!!
do like and do leave the feedback 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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AuthorsNote:

helllo guys..
so i am here with the shortest OS which wont even take 6-7 minutes 2 read..
well it is a song based OS and u can skip the red parts..
they r song lyrics..

so this idea came in my mind when..
ummm when.. obviously when i was going 2 sleep and remembered D3 epi with this song..
well mohit chauhan is my all time favorite and his songs make me nostalgic..
so i wrote this..
it is short and i know nobody except isha will comment on this..
after all these days i hardly have any readers..
missing those days when my OS's reached 9-10 pages..

anyways..
i wanted 2 describe why and where this OS i will connect 2 in D3 but hell..
m not in a mood now..
VD is leaving the show and those rumors have made me lose my senses..

OK.. There is no KR version of this OS cos...--
SIMPLE- i dint imagine KR in this OS or scenes..-_-
but i imagined tanha vrushan and taarey...
so here i go..'


dedicated to:
deep_tanha

deep diii.. 🤗
my heartily apologies once again..
maybe this will help ya forgive me completely..


OK. one more thing..
m not at all in writing mood but had 2 write this as i had told isha and i am quite good at fulfilling my promises..

P.S- i will hardly get any comments as SS fans will skip this and TR fans aren't in a mood 2 read..
nor am i..
see.. even my smileys are missing..-_-


and yes..
if u read.
dont forget 2 give ur feedback.

will be waiting..

LOVE
-mehek for some and maggie for many..


Edited by mehek_luvD3nTBP - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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NOTE-
read at u'r own risk.. has turned out pathetic and it is tragic also..

The Marriage & The Dream
TaaReY Version-



[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yk2scbyHBfI&feature=player_detailpage[/YOUTUBE]

get the feel..
do listen the song..
my fav.. after all mohit chauhan stuff u see..

Ummm hmm umm hmm
Ummm hmm umm hmm

Tune jo na kaha

Mein woh sunta raha
Khamakha bewajah Khwaab Bunta raha


Tune jo na kaha

Mein woh sunta raha
Khamakha Bewajah Khwaab Bunta raha

Jaane kiski humein lag gayi hai nazar

Is Shehar mein Na apna thikana raha
door chahat se mein apni chalta raha
Khamakha bewajah Khwaab Bunta raha

Today I was in a marriage..

Marriage of two people who loved each other 2 death..

The whole crowd was giggling on the cuteness of this couple..

Decorations also were funny.. birds in love and below was written LOVE BIRDS FOREVER..

I smiled like an idiot when I saw that..

The aroma of food reached everywhere'

Kids were chirping like birds.. dancing and enjoying..

After all marriages are meant 2 be enjoyed.. aren't they??

Marriages are when aunty's buy new sarees and boast about them everywhere..

They buy gifts for the couple and leave the price tags so that they can be called great..

Uncles have no interest in the aunty activities.. they are busy at the cocktail bar..

And elderly women sit exactly in front of the stage gossiping ordering and blessing anyone and everyone ..

What people know is marriages are meant to be happy'

But they never know what lies beneath..

Why would they.?? Marriages are meant 2 be happy..

But there might be someone.. in the crowd.. cursing god.. shattered and unhappy.. or should I say devastated..

Dard phele se hai jyaaada
Khud se phir yeh vaada
Khamosh Nazrein Rahein Bezubaan


Abb Na pehli si baatein hai

Bolo to Lab thartharatein hai
Raaz yeh dil ka na ho baiyan
Hoga na ab asar humpe nahin
Hum safar mein to hai Humsafar hai nahi

Door jaata raha Paas aata raha

Khamakha bewajah Khwaab Bunta raha


I saw some kids..

They were running with balloons ..

There was chaos all over..

And my eyes caught something..

I saw a guy pull a girl in the corner..

Shouldn't have seen but they both were looking cute..

I peeped and saw that the guy was trying 2 tease the girl and make her blush..

I felt like awwwing..

But then something stroke my mind and my face went pale..

I looked up 2 my side where she was standing.. the bride was standing..


Aaya woh phir Nazar aise
Baat chidne lagi phir se
Aankhon mein chubhta kal ka dhuan

Haal tera na humsa hai

Is khushi mein kyon gumsa hai
Basne laga kyon phir woh jahan
Woh jahan dur jis se gaye the nikal
Phir se aankhon mein karti hai jaise pehal

Lamha beeta hua ,Dil Dukhata raha


Khamakha bewajah Khwaab Bunta raha

And then I went closer 2 her..

Close.. close.. close.. closer..

and smiled widely..

so wide that my teeth were seen clear enough 2 spot the plaque.. though I had brushed my teeth 7 times before coming..
I looked like the colgate guy..


Tune jo na kaha
Mein woh sunta raha
Khamakha bewajah Khwaab Bunta raha


Jaane kiski humein lag gayi hai nazar

Is Shehar mein Na apna tikana raha
door chahat se abb apni chalta raha
Bhuj gai Aag thi Daag Jalta raha...

And then later..

Somebody called me from behind..

"chalo reyaansh.." deepika.. deep.. my friend said.. my only friend and my support system said..

"haan .. lets go.." I said taking a deep breath..

We left the hall/venue in a big car .. big enough..

And I turned back as I felt a weird feeling in my heart came again..

But the un-describe- able feeling rose more as I saw the big decorated board which said

***TaanI WEDSShivaM***

The girl I loved married the guy she loved..

I closed my eyes trying 2 let it out..

But no good happens..

Deep saw this and held my shoulder..

"sabh theek hojaenga.. trust me".. and I nodded in a yes'

I was foolish to love her..

I was mad to want her..

I was mad to dream that she will reciprocate my feelings..

I was stupid 2 imagine that she will love me..

I was mad..

But this marriage.. the worst one.. shattered me..

Left me dumbfound..

Left me shaken up..

This worst marriage shook me up and bought me out of my dreams.. my beautiful dreams..


..THE END..



SORRY FOR BORING YOU GUYS IF ANYBODY ACTUALLY READ.😳

Edited by mehek_luvD3nTBP - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#4
NOTE-
read at u'r own risk.. has turned out pathetic and it is tragic also..

The Marriage & The Dream
SwaRoN Version-



[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yk2scbyHBfI&feature=player_detailpage[/YOUTUBE]



get the feel..
do listen the song..
my fav.. after all mohit chauhan stuff u see..

Ummm hmm umm hmm
Ummm hmm umm hmm

Tune jo na kaha

Mein woh sunta raha
Khamakha bewajah Khwaab Bunta raha


Tune jo na kaha

Mein woh sunta raha
Khamakha Bewajah Khwaab Bunta raha

Jaane kiski humein lag gayi hai nazar

Is Shehar mein Na apna thikana raha
door chahat se mein apni chalta raha
Khamakha bewajah Khwaab Bunta raha

Today I was in a marriage..

Marriage of two people who loved each other 2 death..

The whole crowd was giggling on the cuteness of this couple..

Decorations also were funny.. birds in love and below was written LOVE BIRDS FOREVER..

I smiled like an idiot when I saw that..

The aroma of food reached everywhere…

Kids were chirping like birds.. dancing and enjoying..

After all marriages are meant 2 be enjoyed.. aren't they??

Marriages are when aunty's buy new sarees and boast about them everywhere..

They buy gifts for the couple and leave the price tags so that they can be called great..

Uncles have no interest in the aunty activities.. they are busy at the cocktail bar..

And elderly women sit exactly in front of the stage gossiping ordering and blessing anyone and everyone ..

What people know is marriages are meant to be happy…

But they never know what lies beneath..

Why would they.?? Marriages are meant 2 be happy..

But there might be someone.. in the crowd.. cursing god.. shattered and unhappy.. or should I say devastated..

Dard phele se hai jyaaada
Khud se phir yeh vaada
Khamosh Nazrein Rahein Bezubaan


Abb Na pehli si baatein hai

Bolo to Lab thartharatein hai
Raaz yeh dil ka na ho baiyan
Hoga na ab asar humpe nahin
Hum safar mein to hai Humsafar hai nahi

Door jaata raha Paas aata raha

Khamakha bewajah Khwaab Bunta raha


I saw some kids..

They were running with balloons ..

There was chaos all over..

And my eyes caught something..

I saw a guy pull a girl in the corner..

Shouldn't have seen but they both were looking cute..

I peeped and saw that the guy was trying 2 tease the girl and make her blush..

I felt like awwwing..

But then something stroke my mind and my face went pale..

I looked up 2 my side where she was standing.. the bride was standing..


Aaya woh phir Nazar aise
Baat chidne lagi phir se
Aankhon mein chubhta kal ka dhuan

Haal tera na humsa hai

Is khushi mein kyon gumsa hai
Basne laga kyon phir woh jahan
Woh jahan dur jis se gaye the nikal
Phir se aankhon mein karti hai jaise pehal

Lamha beeta hua ,Dil Dukhata raha


Khamakha bewajah Khwaab Bunta raha

And then I went closer 2 her..

Close.. close.. close.. closer..

and smiled widely..

so wide that my teeth were seen clear enough 2 spot the plaque.. though I had brushed my teeth 7 times before coming..
I looked like the colgate guy..


Tune jo na kaha
Mein woh sunta raha
Khamakha bewajah Khwaab Bunta raha


Jaane kiski humein lag gayi hai nazar

Is Shehar mein Na apna tikana raha
door chahat se abb apni chalta raha
Bhuj gai Aag thi Daag Jalta raha...

And then later..

Somebody called me from behind..

"chalo swayam.." deepika.. deep.. my friend said.. my only friend and my support system said..

"haan .. lets go.." I said taking a deep breath..

We left the hall/venue in a big car .. big enough..

And I turned back as I felt a weird feeling in my heart came again..

But the un- describe- able feeling rose more as I saw the big decorated board which said

***Sharon WEDSShivaM***

The girl I loved married the guy she loved..

I closed my eyes trying 2 let it out..

But no good happens..

Deep saw this and held my shoulder..

"sabh theek hojaenga.. trust me".. and I nodded in a yes…

I was foolish to love her..

I was mad to want her..

I was mad to dream that she will reciprocate my feelings..

I was stupid 2 imagine that she will love me..

I was mad..

But this marriage.. the worst one.. shattered me..

Left me dumbfound..

Left me shaken up..

This worst marriage shook me up and bought me out of my dreams.. my beautiful dreams..


..THE END..



SORRY FOR BORING YOU GUYS IF ANYBODY ACTUALLY READ.😳


Edited by mehek_luvD3nTBP - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res 😃
unres

me first again 😆😆
see main kitni halak hun...

ABOUT THE AUTHOR'S NOTE:

see mehek !!!
tune galti ki .. 😡
fine 😊
you apologized as well.. 😊
super fine 😊

so stop sounding like you have done a murder
i know many of us must have felt really bad and hate you bout that but it doesn't mean we breakt he friendship
would only like to say ki wapas aisa koi bhi stunt mat karna
situation ko dekh ke react kar !!!
be careful from now
because agar tune wapas kiya yeh toh baki sab ko chod main tujhe zinda nahi chodungi..


ABOUT THE OS...

i simply love this song...
i mean it has so many feelings together...
and the way you described the marriage was amazing 👏👏
really well written and so true 😉

it was simply beautiful
obviously bad ending thi and i guess that reflects our mood
but i loved the OS...

P.S. cheer up now...
😃😃
if not for you then for me...
meri baat toh maanegi na

Edited by -spongy- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg😲

reserve...i will read and comment tonight...i told u ..its ok...tu aise stunts mat mara kar..take care of urself ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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..Res
unres

. itna accha likh dala ! chotu sa tha . lekin ek dum dhamakedaar tha
Sheela munni aur babli ke taraf se bhi
acha accha ab apne weapons ander rakh de . ! 😆
Hayee ! tu kitna accha likhti hai naa
THIS IS IT ! MAARDAALA ! BATAMEEZ OS ! ... (agr samajh ni aya to jaake apna laptop utha aur apne sir par maar 🤣)
haayee main to ro hi padi thi 😭
tune rula diya mujhe😭
tune nahi tere os ne -.-
ab zyaada na chad !
tune nahi tere OS ne ! -.-
I love this song
ahh ! I will miss VD badly yaar .. 😭
coming to the os again .
You write it beautifully yaar
I love you yaar
Edited by .-Arpita-. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome and beautiful one Maggie.😃I love the song but ending acha likh deti😔.But i guess it reflects our moods at present.😭😭 good one but👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res...
magiiee itne stunts na kr...tere stunts ki bohot zyada hi charchaye ho rahi h which is really unbearlable for me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very emotional and heart touching OS...
Loved both the versions...

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