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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
update nxt part soon
loved it
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
awww... I can't see him going away... 😵

kriya is so obsessed with him... 😔

she'll be in so much pain... 😭

her frnds r trying to understand... but any sane person will think.. she's lost it... 😳

usse salvation de kar vapas human bana de... 😃

kriya bhi khush ... aur main bhi... 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update :)
I feel bad for Kriya but at least Rey will get peace
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Posted: 11 years ago
Kindly update ur INDEX __/\__
m highly confused seeing it -_-
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Posted: 11 years ago
INDEX
Chap 1 - Page 1
Chap 2 - Page 8
Chap 3 - Page 14
Chap 4 - Page 18
Chap 5 - Page 24
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ok.. So main khud mehnat kerke paure chaps dhund liye h n upper ^ Index post kerdiya h..
Kindly Update it -_____-
So, now cuming to d story..
Gossshhh Rashi.. Tujhe yeh supernatural story likhne mein majja aata h na? Jaise mujhe read kerne mein majja aata h ^_^ ..
Awwsssmmm story it ijjj..
Rey is urrmmm a spirit. Joh kriya ko sone nahi deta tha.. N used to torture her..Kyu.. Coz he was super excited to talk to her 🤣🤣
matlab kuch bhi haan.. 🤣
after meeting Rey.. Kriya turns chubby n gets normal.. Wowww n is obssessd if rey n loves him a lot.. N same is Rey.. Ok.. Rey ki dhukh bhari daastaan was not at all touchy 🤣
Ok.. Chal zada muh naa bigaad.. Sach hi bola h.. 🤣
so.. Finall rey ko jaana h bt cant go till sumone gives d chain to his Mother.. N yeh kaam kriya karegi.. N if kriya n yeh kria toh Rey will foever.. N kriya akeli reh jayegi..
She knows it bt still wanna help him..
Wooww
so cutteee...^_^
I realy loved d way dtory is moving.. Everything is crystal clear n read kerne mein majja bhi aaying..
"love with a spirit" wala concept it damm interesting yaar.. Plz update sooninsh..
Me waiting waiting...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Dis is A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!!!!
Seriously yaar!!! Supernatural love!!!
A depressed gal in love wid a spirit!!!
Dats horrifyingly beautiful!!! 😆
I knw esa koi phrase nahi hota haii...bt its beautiful n at d same tym its results...d reality horrifies to no extent!!!
So initially kriya is a depressed loner!!!
N d whispers...OMG!!! Dey were real!!!! N nt hallucinations 😲
K rey ki death wali story wasnt much mushy mushy kind...bt it made sense!!
N nw both of dem r extremely obsessed wid each oder!!!
Here der love has made dem obsessed i think!!!
Bt nw wat!!!
How did kriya's parents die??? Accident okay...bt wid whom was dis accident??.
N is rey by ny chance involved in all dis???
Dis salvation thing...okay i get it!!! Bt nw wat???
Will rey's mom believe her???
N y r aveek n tina taking it as smthng nt so serious???
Plz just update soon!!!
N pm me plz!!! 😊 😊
Edited by kreya204 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 6

She cried herself to sleep, even when his presence was there, her pillow was all wet due to the tears she had cried, and she could feel his hand touching her, she didn't know.

"Don't cry please" he mumbled

"Shut Up" she sobbed more

"Don't Cry" he again said

"Don't speak, just let me be" she said

"It hurts Kriya. Its hurtful to see you like this" he said "Please don't cry"

She looked at him with wondering eyes, with a pinch of hope inside her "Please don't go" her words were hardly a whisper

"I wish" he said "But I have to, I have been waiting for salvation since forever, and then you happened"

She was still looking at him "What do you mean?"

"I don't need a reason to be angry with God." He explained

"You happened" she repeated. "Is that all Reyansh? Or do you want to hurt me even more now? Here, i'm shredding tears for you, and you're telling me that I'm regret?"

She pushed him away and dug her face in the pillow.

"Its just that, I know, that you deserve someone way better. It's your life, you're alive, and you're in your teens. You never had to be with me, a guy who would be fifty or much more if only he was.." she interjected

"What If I want to spend it with you?" she reasoned. Her brown eyes pierced into his "And when things come to being alive, you already are very"

"You don't have to spend it with me!" he snapped "Kriya, Just let me go to hell. Do you ever realize who or what I am? I'm a spirit Kriya, people are scared of me. I'm no angel"

"You're my angel." Her words were soft "If only it weren't you, I would be spending my life pale and as depressed as ever, but i'm not that now, I'm not that person now, I've changed, you've changed me"

He pulled her closer as she traced her hand on his face "Youre my angel Reyaansh"

"Don't do this Kriya" he said

"Don't do what Reyaansh?" she asked

"You're making this harder for me" he gulped

"Maybe, but if it is. Then i like it this way" she said

He pulled her into a long passionate kiss, and it was then when she realized his lips on her skin, they have always been hugging and kissing but never continued. And all he wanted now, was to savour her.

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"She's psychologically weak" Aveek remarked

"Yeah! Being girlfriend of a ghost, that is pretty crazy" Tina commented

"We need to get her a doctor" he wrote

"Definitely" she wrote and threw the chit to him.

"Guys, the entire period I saw you two passing chits, are you in a relationship or what?" Kriya asked

"Naah.. we just had to talk about some stuff" Tina said

"And what stuff?" Kriya raised a brow.

"Stuff related to.." Aveek said "Economics"

"We're maths students" Kriya said

"Aveek kissed me, last night. I mean, we've always been best friends but, it was a spur-of-the-moment act. So.. we thought of, talking about it and dealing with that" Tina said, then turned to Aveek and found him staring.

"Oh my god, is that so?"Kriya asked "Well, good for you"

Kriya smirked

After a while Kriya told them about what had happened

"So, Making out with your ghost boyfriend, eh? Not bad" Tina teased

"Shutt up" Kriya instructed

"Girl, has he got some brother or something?" Tina asked

"Ughhh, Admit it Tina. You're sexual orientation is not straight" Aveek said keeping a hand on her shoulder

Tina hit him playfully.

"You can't say that, Tina was hitting on my boyfriend just yesterday" Kriya remarked

"Yeah, her gender changes from who is on the other side" Aveek Hung out his tongue as Tina kept slapping his hard biceps.

"Do you mean that I'm bisexual?" she asked

"Who Knows" Aveek said.

An hour later, She stood at the doorstep of Rey's mother.

Tina and Aveek asked whether they could come in, but Kriya forced that she could do it herself.

She rang the doorbell again and stepped out a old aged woman, her skin was hanging and was wrinkled. Her hands were really puffy. She had a round spectacle on, and her eyes looked bawled out.

"Good Morning" she said

"Sorry I have a terrible memory! Who are you?" The lady asked

"i'm kriya" Kriya said "Actually, Reyaansh.."

The old woman went stiff, then spoke quietly and discreetly "He is not here, you can leave"

Before she could close the door Kriya said

"I know its your birthday today" Tthe old woman looked surprised "There was something your son wanted to give you"

The Lady gasped, "who are you?"

"I might have been your daughter in law if he was alive" she flushed "I wanted to give you this"

The lady's name was carved on it in big beautiful letters and there was a slight kiddish writing which said Rey'

The woman looked at her and her eyes shone, her eyes were teary and rigid.

"He wants you to know, that he is not angry with you, stop living with the regret. this was what he wanted to give you, I hope you like it" Kriya smiled "He loved me, maybe still does"

"What else did he say?" his mother asked

"They could be a little private" Kriya chuckled as the old woman laughed

And all she knew was later that day, The two most important women in his life, were sobbing in the mere loss of him.

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Edited by Painted_Sky - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Epilogue

"Dear Reyaansh,"
She wrote
"I miss you alot, I just want to tell you how great my day went. I miss you every moment though. There's this cute guy in my class who somehow resembles you alot, But yeah, no one can ever replace you.
I imagine you saying now its your life kriya, you deserve someone better' so let me tell you that since its my life you have no right to say that, and I only wanna spend it with you.
I saw the hockey stick moving and when I turned back it wasn't there, Also, I remember you stroking my hair last night thinking that I'm fast asleep. Gotcha! I know in one way or another, you're always around.
Aveek and Tina are soon getting me a psychologist. I don't wanna go there, he's scary Dr Deadhead.
I know you're going to read this and smile, so anywh**e, please know that I'm not moving on or dating someone else thinking that you're forever gone, coz you're not.
And you'll always stick around. You're the only one (No matter how many cute boys get in my class)
You know na what I say, Standing still is way better than moving on.
There's nothing I'm running from.
I miss you all the time, I miss you every moment now. Come Back na!
I know, one day you're gonna come and stop this hide and seek. Don't try to fool me Reyaansh, Ii know, once a spirit is attached to you, they can never leave.
So stop fooling me
Also, Aveek kissed Tina truthfully and honestly this time, and they're together. They remind me of the things we could do.
I know you'll be back, so don't make me wait because i am ready to wait forever.
Please know that I Love You.
Yours and Only Yours.
Kriya xoxo ( more hugs and kisses than these xx's' can identify. And maybe a bit more than that too)
P.s- How can I forget to say this, You're My Angel.
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Posted: 11 years ago
tnat was a teally nice end...

the letter part was very nice.. :-)

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