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Fatima Faiq

@-Fam_TaaReY-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

Hey guys ... Shock to see me ?? 😆 😆 Don't get shock and read this new OS from me 😆 😆This OS is specially written for MITWA SPECIAL ... One year is completed to such an amazing scene 😊 Enjoy this OS and do comment and hit like 😊

Tum bin meri zaat adhoori ,

Jaise koi baat adhoori ,

Chaahe hain saare din poore ,

Lekin hai har raat adhoori ,

Lafzon ki gehraaye mein jhaanko ,

Samjho hai har baat adhoori ,

Nam aankhein aur sookhi palkein ,

Hoti hai barsaat adhoori ,

Mujh se ,

Mujh ko ,

Cheen gaye tum ,

Reh gaye meri zaat adhoori ... !

P.S.This shayari is written by me and is specially dedicated to Sami(Samiha_TaaRey) as she wanted me to use my shayaries in my stories 😊

Rey was standing in the kitchen of Shekhawat house totally broken and shattered as his life is leaving him may be forever ... He was crying his heart out ... Taani came and put her hand on his shoulder ... He turned to her and was stunned to see her ... Taani said while having tears in her eyes :

Taani:Rey aap ro rahay hain ?

Rey remove her hand from his shoulder and held it tightly in between his two palms .. He said :

Rey:Taani please don't go away from me ...

Taani:Rey promise me k aap mere jaane k baad apni life mein move on karengay ...

Rey:Aur kitna punish karogi mujhay Taani ? It's not fair ... !

He blurted out his heart ... She pulled him in a bone crashing hug ... He hug her back and cried even more ... He said :

Rey:I am sorry for everything Taani ... Please don't leave me like this ... Main mar jaaounga tumhare baghair ... I will die Taani ... I love you and only you ... !

She broke the hug and cup his face and said while wiping the tears from his cheeks :

Taani:I love you too Rey ... But please app aisa mat kahiyay ... !
He was not believing his ears ... He heard right ? she said I love you too ? several questions were running in his mind ... She shook him and said :

Taani:Aapne suna Rey ? I love you too and we are together now once again ..

His lips curved in a broad smile ... He hug her with same love and passion which they use to do before ... She hug him back ... Soon they broke the hug and join the farewell party and inform the gang about their patch-up ... The farewell party was now turned in a celebration party ... Because the two separated love birds were together now ... They all cheer in glee ... Everyone's faces were showing happiness .. They all share a group hug ...

They all move out of the house and rain starts ... They were in the garden of Shekhawat house ... Rey was so happy that he start dancing ...

P.S Do play the song in the background to feel the update ... I also wrote this OS by listening the song ... Here is the link of the song ...

Song Mitwa
Jaaniye Heeriye
Jaaniye Heeriye
Mere Mann Ye Bata De Tu
Kis Or Chala Hai Tu
Kya Paya Nahi Tune
Kya Dhundh Raha Hai Tu
Jo Hai Ankahee Jo Hai Ansuni
Woh Baat Kya Hai Bata
Mitwa Kahe Dhadkan Hai Tujhse Pyar
Mitwa Yeh Khudse Toh Na Tu Chhupa

He danced around her ... He hug her with all his strength and twirl her round ... His friends also join him in dancing and dance along the rhythm of the song ... Taani was also enjoying seeing the scene in front of her ...

Mere Mann Ye Bata De Tu
Kis Or Chala Hai Tu
Kya Paya Nahi Tune
Kya Dhundh Raha Hai Tu
Jo Hai Ankahee Jo Hai Ansuni
Woh Baat Kya Hai Bata
Mitwa Kahe Dhadkan Hain Tujhse Pyar
Mitwa Yeh Khudse Toh Na Tu Chhupa

She was standing near the plant of roses and was adoring the beauty of flowers in rain .. He came to her and made her dance with her ... He was dancing with her with all love and passion that he will never get any chance to dance with her ...

Jeevan Dagar Mein Prem Nagar Mein - 2
Aaya Nazar Mein Jab Se Koi Hain
Tu Sochta Hain Tu Puchata Hain
Jiski Kami Thi Kya Yeh Wohi Hain
Haa Yeh Wohi Hain - 2
Tu Ek Pyasa Aur Yeh Nadi Hain
Kaahe Nahi Isko Tu Khulke Bataye
Jo Hai Ankahee Jo Hai Ansuni
Woh Baat Kya Hai Bata
Mitwa Kahe Dhadkan Hai Tujhse Pyar
Mitwa Yeh Khudse Toh Na Tu Chhupa

Everyone were in college atrium ... They all were doing some hiphop steps ... All the boys were dancing behind and Rey and Swayam in front of all ... The girls were standing on the staircase ... Taani was smiling seeing her love so happy ... All the girls were teasing her that he loves her so much ...

Teri Nigaahen
Par Tu Yeh Soche Jaaun Na Jaaun
Yeh Zindagi Jo Hai Naachti Toh
Kyon Bediyon Mein Hai Tere Paanv
Preet Ki Dhun Par Naach Le Paagal
Udta Agar Hai Udne De Aanchal
Kaahe Koi Apne Ko Aaise Tarsaaye
Jo Hai Ankahee Jo Hai Ansuni
Woh Baat Kya Hai Bata
Mitwa Kahe Dhadkan Hai Tujhse Pyar
Mitwa Yeh Khudse Toh Na Tu Chhupa
Mere Mann Ye Bata De Tu
Kis Or Chala Hai Tu
Kya Paya Nahi Tune
Kya Dhundh Raha Hai Tu
Mitwa...

They pull their girls with them in the last para of the song and danced with them ... Rey was dancing like mad ... He has no intension to stop because he got his life back ... After passing all the hurdles of their lives they are together ...

They ended the song by hugging their partners ... Now Taani anad Rey were in projector room ... They both were holding each other's hands ... Rey was sitting on the desk and Taani was standing in front of him ... He squeezed her hand more tightly and said :

Rey:Thanks for coming back in my life Taani ... I love you ... !
He hug her and she hug him back ... She said :
Taani:i love you too Rey ... I will always live with you..!

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So here it ends ... I know this one is not that good ... But please send your feedback by commenting ... Tab tak tata 😆 Take care 😊

Edited by -Fam_TaaReY- - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome and cute os
loved it

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karan

@Karan_TaaRey

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

Res.

Me 2nd...Yeah Jinga lalalala 😃 🥳 🤗

Will Read nd unres..

-Unres.-

🤗 🤗 🤗

Mitwa...

Kahe Dhadkane Tujse Kya ? 😆 I really Mean it di..coz my heartbeats r totally speechless after reading this 😳

Short,sweet, nd best OS ever 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

It was amazing...Just simply superb..

and the edit u made is super awesome 😳 😉 👏

And The Shayari at the top .. Sami di is so right...u should totally use it 👏 😳

The Shayari was the catch of this OS 👏 👏 👏

And The song .. 👍🏼 👏 Totally worth it 😃

Very Nice di 👍🏼

Keep it up 😳

Edited by Karan_TaaRey - 12 years ago

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lakshmi

@ShasthaaPriyaa

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

it was a nice one.😃 I loved the edits and the shayari too.😳But it could have been a little more longer and detailed i feel.🤔 I liked the OS but it could have been better i feel.I don't want to hurt you please.If i said anything that hurt you i am sorry.😭😭I really loved the song part.😳

Edited by lakshluvsD3nHHL - 12 years ago

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dh19

@dh19

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

nice and cute
show me bhi aisa hi kuchh hona chahiye tha

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Priyanka Datta

@taani.priya1997

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

i loved it and liked it.

kash ayesa show me hota

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Goonies4Ever

@Goonies4Ever

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

awsum os👍🏼 y cudnt dis hpn in d shw

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anzana

@Bista-anzana

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

Os is superb i liked syari nd edit.they r damn gud.. I felt dt Taani she is convinced so fast...plzz dun get sad or angry..i dun want to hurt u plz sry its jz mah feeling...