TR OS- You , Me and Rain

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

deepkriti

@..Deepkriti..

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

thoda zyada nahi ho gaya. but it is damn sexy yaar!! written very well.

Quote

chandrima

@chand91

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

res

unres

sry i m lt

sooo hot

kas d3 me v yea hota

Edited by chand91 - 12 years ago

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

aparajita

@aparabosecarmel

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

yaar di
itna hot os
rey aur tani kitna straight forward hai tani zyada
jab tani ne bola rey imeon aapki pyaar ko feel karna chahti hoon
my eyes were widened
lappy jalte jalte bach gaya di
agar thodi aur likhte na to surely jal jata
the took off their jeans
ky yaar kya din dekhne parenge
loved it di

aisi or bhi likha kariyo

Quote

Shweta

@2111_shweta

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Baarish mein itna romance...maar hi dala...☺️

Taani ki yeh naughty side bohot atchi lagi😉

passionate Taarey ke hopes jo mar gaye the unhe fir se jaga diya😆

Aisa toh hoga nahi..Taani ruk jaye utna hi kaafi hai😛😆

but i guess yeh wish bhi fulfill nahi hogi😭

anyways

I suggest you should write such hot stuffs😉😆

Quote

Viji.Chandran

@Viji.Chandran

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

meri cute cheetah ithni hot os likh sakti hai...
ye toh mujhe nahi pata tha...
vaise it ws too hawt to handle...
agar meri pc kharab hua toh u r responsible...
my poor pc cant tolerate ths much hotness...
aur itna naughty taani...😲
bechara rey ko toh shock mil gaya hoga...
i really wish ki aisa kuch d3 mein ho...

Quote

Akshita Taneja

@AkshitaWrites.

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Yashi i dint know dat u can b that vulgure. Btw nicely writen . Im sure u might b blushing while writing it ;)

Quote

Natasha

@...Natasha...

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Yashi omg!!! I can't believe u wrote such a hot and sizzling OS... lol
I love it 😳 love the way u expresses Taarey emotions and them feeling the rain on themselves was amazing
Yahhh Taani not leaving her Rey
Hmm naughty Taani is so much fun, their romance was smoking hot
U did a superb job Yashi, I know how difficult it must of been to write this OS but u did excellent

Quote

Lavender_Luna

@Lavender_Luna

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

ohmygod!!!

kya yaar...?

itna hot?

q roz mujhe bigaad rahe ho??

hehehe... chill

main mazaak kr rhi thi...

bt seriously dear...

*dead* reading this os...

m feeling happy coz...

taani ka present track se upset hu...

and love u so much 4 this os...

keep it up!

Quote

NSohi13

@NSohi13

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Res ginger :)... Sorry sweety for the late reply...

It was an awesome OS yaar ... Hott ... Romantic and emotional ... Thanks dear ... Their pain in the starting... Then their Happiness and after that at the end their romance and the naughtiness ... Mindblowing ... Loved it totally :)

Edited by NSohi13 - 12 years ago