Be-intehaan virman ff #1 - Page 47

Originally posted by: anu0555

outstanding update as alwyas...!! i'm loving it to the core...

awsome part...good work yrr...

brilliant..super !!!!

i'm sad for manvi...!!! she is broken into zillion pieces..n now karan's appearance made her sick..viren's care n love was making her strong but coz of karan..she once again met wid her cruel fate n past...!!!

but i hope manvi will come to know abt truth very soon...

yaarr..really missing virman's scene.. n i hope dat virat will also come to know dat manvi is innocent...

manvi is hurt very much..she cutted her wrist..thnk God viren reached...

when manvi n virat will meet again..???

btw i was really desperately waitng for nxt part..!! n finally u updated..!! thnku soo much lara for PM!!

plzz cntnue soon waiting eagerly for nxt update..!!! don't get late..

love yea

-anu aka rouza..

Originally posted by: iluviratmanvi

nice update and next update soon

Originally posted by: iluviratmanvi

nice update and next update soon

Originally posted by: virmanxyz

I fefl really sad for me she tried to suicide and it is good that viren reachd there on time viren is so sweet,virat is so lonely i feel bad for him,cntinue sn

Originally posted by: virman.lover

awesome update

</div>poor karan...
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hope manvi come to know truth soon

loved viren concern for manvi

update soon

thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: nahaananya

lara u r really an amazing writter
ur updates r a treat to read
it was fab update
the inner turmoil of the 4 souls is so well described
karan ... omg manvi dint beliv him,,,,,,, feeling so bad
but i am happy dat he is doing so much fr his bestie... he is determined to find out the truth
and on the other hand... instead of finding the truth virat is just... arghh leave it
i really want manvi to move on wid viren
he is so nice caring considerate...i so much love him
plzzz continue soon and pm me
love take care
anne

Originally posted by: maclean

poor manvi and nyc karans entry... her dialogues where so touching.. its full of deep sorrows,, waise viren luks like a gud frnd,,want to see virats reation after hearing all the truth ,, nyc update yar,,, waiting,,,

Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri

Wonderful update Lara!!! This is so emotional.. Can't see Manvi in pain .. She is so broken.. Loved Manvi-Karan confrontation part.. Poor Karan .. Manvi didn't trust him but still he is determined to find out the truth and he even tried to find her but here Virat is least bothered about her.. I just hate Virat in this one .. Viren is an awesome friend .. I hope Manvi tells him everything and she should move on in her life with Viren.. Loved the update .. You have portrayed every emotion beautifully.. Amazing!! Will be waiting for the next part.. Thank you for the pm.. Take care

Originally posted by: shaalivirman

tis ff is making me damn emotional...manvi...she is making me cry...and i feel lyk killing virat and tat karan is sooo poorrr...

But still...i cant cum out of tis ff im luving it...its just awsm and awsm...!!! dont knw y i like tis a lot...but plz make virat realise his mistake soon!!

u r such an awsm writer... fr tis luvly ff!!

Originally posted by: Rachel19

Hey very nice and emotional update
I liked it
Karan and manvis meeting was awesome
Hope that Karan will succeed on proving himself innocent
Manvi missed her appointment with the doctor
And virat he is suffering very much
I really loved virens caring attitude towards manvi
He cares so much for her
How come manvis hand is bleeding
Does she hurts herself on purpose?
Thank you so much for the pm
Please continue soon
Will be waiting for your update