Be-intehaan virman ff #1 - Page 22

Originally posted by: virman.lover

awesome update

continue soon

thanks for the pm

Hey... 😊 😊... thanks yaar...

Originally posted by: virumanu

loved this update..

virat making out...oh no...

is the girl character maya type or wat..

continue sooonnn

You will get to know who the girl is very soon... 😊...And thnks fr th pm dear...😃

Originally posted by: vamps1996

once again devil amazing update

was beautifully written and their condition was perfectly potrayed

the song was fab and fit for the update loved it to the core

so the girl is behind virat all the time

really liked the connection u brought when virat touched the other girl manvi's condition got worse felt bad for her...viren doesnt seem to be good coz he just thinks about his luck hope that wont make him do anything bad with manvi...karan's dialogues were amazing sure virat will regret what he had already lost

lots of love

Oye vampuu... 😃...Thanks a lot for your appreciation yaar...😊 😊...A small remider for you... meri khun nahi piegi ???...😆 😆...

Originally posted by: Tuba_KSG

dead .. have no words for ur update .. kind of speechless .. ..
u r "" THE QUEEN OF EMOTIONS "" thats itt ...

Ohh !!!... Thats so sweet of you... 😊 😊...Thanks dear... 😃... and pls dont die... 😕... stay alive to read more updts... 😉...

Originally posted by: Mannia

Wonderful update yar very good

poor mannu,feel sad for her

yeh virat nd that girl...

thanks for pm...

Thanks a lot dear... 😊...Will try to updt soon... tada...

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

<font color="#990066">Arre baprei... virat ko bhaad mein bhej dia... 😆...

</div>Three cheers for viren...Will try to come back soon with manvi as well as virats reaction too... 😉...<div>

Looks like virat ko next updt mein helmet pehenake lana parega... 🤢</font>

usko tu helmet pehna de ya bullet proof kuch bhi uska murder zaroor karke rahungi how dare he do that to my mannu haan apna ilzaam manvi pe saal diya aur khud maze loit raha hai ...*shoots virat and then feels peace * 😡 😡

Originally posted by: Rachel19

hey amazing update

viren saved manvi but she lost the baby that was so sad

i loved karan and his dialogues

i just hated that virat was making out with that girl

that girl was behind him all the time

really liked how you explained all those emotions

just awesome

please continue soon

will be waiting for your update

Thanks a lot rachel... 😊...You liked karans dialogues... ...Will try to cont soon... take care...

Originally posted by: .Yamin.

OMG Lara this was superb awesome u juz nailed it !!!! it was so intense !!! gosh n tat girl !!! aargh virat bhi apne nashe main khoyaa howaa hai ;( poor mannu !!! :'( she lost her baby toohaww viren ki entry :DDD he is such a sweetheart !!! he is caring !!! this is getting more n more interesting !!! n karan seem to be innocent !!! loved the update looking forward for next !!! continue soon if possible !!! thanks for the pm Lara :D

Thanks a lot dear... 😊...Yes dear karan is innocent... Will try to be back soon with the next updt... 😃

Originally posted by: Ankita1997

Hey Lara nice name huh!
the update was just freaking awesome and extremely mindblowing!! *claps*
atlast someone saved manvi and thats Viren..
Karan said a very correct thing to Virat... Believing some pictures he has lost the most precious thing of his life and moreover his baby too [:'(] and he is fu*king making out with someone thinking her to be manvi waow amazing! >.<
update asap waiting for the next part eagerly

Thanks yaar... 😊...You like my name... 😃...Will try to updt soon as am a bit busy nowadays...😕

Originally posted by: Mannia

Wonderful update yar very good

poor mannu,feel sad for her

yeh virat nd that girl...

thanks for pm...

Thanks a lot dear...😃...thanks for youe appreciation...