Be-intehaan virman ff #1 - Page 20

superb update
loved it
poor maanvi
hope she become fine soon
loved viren a lot in this update
thanks a lot for the pm

awesome update

Hey Lara nice name huh! 😊
the update was just freaking awesome and extremely mindblowing!! *claps* ❤️
atlast someone saved manvi and thats Viren..
Karan said a very correct thing to Virat... Believing some pictures he has lost the most precious thing of his life and moreover his baby too [:'(] and he is fu*king making out with someone thinking her to be manvi waow amazing! >.<
update asap 😊 waiting for the next part eagerly 😃

Thanks for pm
superb
awesome update
liked it very much...

Originally posted by: nimi00

I am going to murder this girl, first she frames Manvi and now she is trying to sleep with Virat . She needs to listen once and for all, Virat is Manvi's and only Manvi's. Beechara mera Viru, he was saying Manvi's name the entire time. Not that I am too happy with him, he said Manvi betrayed him, what is he doing with another girl . Haww, Viren ne Manvi ko apni patni bola. . Don't judge me from my happiness, I love Manvir, I know I won't get it for long in your story but yay for Viren and Manvi. And Viren is so loving in the story, he even saved her, yay for Manvir, sach mein dil kush kardiya tumne . Thank you for the update, update again soon.

Oye first comment kardi... ...COngrats... 👏 ...Tu happy toh main bhi happy... 😃...And I couldnt guess anyone more eligible as the saviour that viren... 😊...And no need to mention yaar... it gives me imense pleasure when you guys like my updts and give me so wonderful comments... so you deserve pms yaar... love you muahhh... 😃...

Originally posted by: Aenna

OMGGG WHAT IS THIS...
Arggg how cud virat do dis????
Poor manvii..I cant see her lyk dat..nd virat
He will pay for dis...
Plzzz update asap I cant wait for d next update...
Plzzz do it...

Yes you are right .. he will obviously pay for his sins...🤢...Will try to updt soon and thnks for your comment... take care...😊...

Originally posted by: Syed695

Superb Update..!!! Maanvi saved by Viren which is interesting but Virat gotten nice from Karan...waiting for Dhamaka..when he finds out nothing of that sort actually happened..Superb Lara..Waiting for next...!!

Thanks dear 😊...And hold on a little bit, dhamaka will happen soon or not ?? Armmm... even i dont know..😆 😉...Will try to updt soon...

Originally posted by: jannat89

hey Laura
amazing update but seriously speaking girl I'm shaking at yet
maybe my comment don't like you a lot but if Virat cross his boundry whether in unconscious state it was wrong, its story but no girl iin this world forget it pllz hook manvi with karan or viren whatever, and let her cross her boundary with him, then its justify with manvi.
I wanna kill virat in this... sorry if I hurt you but what to do I'm a girl.
thanx 4 the PM
waiting for either viren and manvi or karan & manvi jodi... plz make it na sweetu
update soon

Virat has recieved so many hate notes after chap 3...😲 😲... Eureka... 👏...And feelings daphan karke updts likh rahi hu... so dont worry... 😆 😆...Aah tune mujhe sweetu bola... 😛... ok pweetu... will think about it or maybe I have already thought something... 😉 😉

Originally posted by: anu0555

w0w yaarrr !!!!

Lvd et !!!

n thnx 4 PM !!

update ss00n !!

<3 ya !!

Thanks a lot dear... 😊...Am so glad that you have liked it... 😃 😃...Will try to be back soon... tada...

Originally posted by: pink1

nice update new entry viren taken her hospital
and what virat done when he will get to know
truth what he will do update soon

Thanks a lot pink... 😊...Will try to updt soon.. take care...