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shaimah

@shaimah

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#181

This is getting interesting
Awesome update.
Viren Is the new entry...excited
Hope manvi gets well
Continue very soon and thanks for the pm!!!

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Huma

@Huma0301

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#182

Another awesome update
so many omg moments like viren finding manvi
virat with this evil girl too
this is just getting too interesting
im very excited for next update
continue soon plz 😉

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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#183

yayyy its viren now virat jaye bhaad mein have fun with yur chudail watever manvi has viren besides her am the happiest person knowing that the guy who saved manvi is viren 😃
feeling really bad for manvi knowing she lost her baby is gonna kill her dunno how will viren manage her then and viren such a selfless guy even though he lost such an important contract he is still sooo caring about her and there her hubby is least bothered about her he even used that word for her and is buzzi romancing with sum watever so now what shud he call himself ...😡
excited for the next update wanna see how manvi reacts after gaining consciousness...
update net partt sooon and than alott for the pm 😃

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hangok

@hangok

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#184

ohh myy god,
im speechless...
at first to virat right now i hate him, how he can misunderstand his wife, his love and then with this girl...😡

oww viren as everytime a sweetheart, hope he success in his business he deserves a present, he saved manvi,👏

and manvi how bad luck can she have, even in this condition she can feel about virat...

right now i want to see a great bonding between manvi and viren , hope they success together...

dont want manvi to forgive virat, even he apologized 100times...

amazing part and thanks for pm

Edited by hangok - 12 years ago

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virumanu

@virumanu

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#185

loved this update..

virat making out...oh no...

is the girl character maya type or wat..

continue sooonnn

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vamps1996

@vamps1996

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#186

once again devil amazing update

was beautifully written and their condition was perfectly potrayed

the song was fab and fit for the update loved it to the core

so the girl is behind virat all the time

really liked the connection u brought when virat touched the other girl manvi's condition got worse felt bad for her...viren doesnt seem to be good coz he just thinks about his luck hope that wont make him do anything bad with manvi...karan's dialogues were amazing sure virat will regret what he had already lost

lots of love ❤️

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Tuba KHAn

@Tuba_KSG

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#187

dead 🤢 .. have no words for ur update .. kind of speechless .. 👏🤢 ..
u r "" THE QUEEN OF EMOTIONS "" 👏👍🏼 thats itt ...

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Mannia

@Mannia

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#188

Wonderful update yar ⭐️ very good 😊

poor mannu,feel sad for her 😔

yeh virat nd that girl..😡.

thanks for pm... 👍🏼

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Rachel19

@Rachel19

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#189

hey amazing update😊

viren saved manvi but she lost the baby that was so sad😭

i loved karan and his dialogues😃

i just hated that virat was making out with that girl

that girl was behind him all the time😡

really liked how you explained all those emotions

just awesome👏

please continue soon

will be waiting for your update😳

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.Yamin.

@.Yamin.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#190

OMG Lara this was superb awesome👏👏👏 u juz nailed it !!!! 👍🏼 it was so intense !!! gosh n tat girl !!! aargh😡😡 virat bhi apne nashe main khoyaa howaa hai ;( poor mannu !!! :'( she lost her baby too😭😭haww viren ki entry :DDD he is such a sweetheart !!! he is caring !!! this is getting more n more interesting !!! n karan seem to be innocent !!! loved the update ❤️ looking forward for next !!! continue soon if possible !!! thanks for the pm Lara :D

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