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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting!
continue soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow
great beginning and different concept
looking frwrd to it
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting startšŸ‘
continue soonšŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i am soo happy with the response , love you all my readers

thanks a lot for this lovely response
updating ahead , part 1 , just keep showering me like this forever with your comments ,
love you all
thanks again
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 1

MUMBAI


Wee see a huge office building around 10 floors...entering it we see a very well furnished and extremely beautifully designed with expensive interiors working area

Till 9th floor we can see many staff members working and busy with their work ...there r noises all around of people moving from here to there talking chatting working but as we come on floor 10 everything is quite extremely quite
No noise nothing

and then we see a beautiful huge cabin with all kind of expensive works interiors etc and we see a man in his late twenties standing in a corner seeing nowhere out of the window just lost in his thoughts

Yes it was ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA, away from the world in his own thoughts surrounded by only loneliness

Entered SHYAM [SHYAM JHA, arnav's best friend and works with him as a partner he is happily married to his wife ANJALI who is like a sister to arnav]

shyam: [engrossed in a file] arnav you have to sigh this contract now [looked up and saw arnav lost] [goes to him keeping hand on arnav shoulder] what happened what r you thinking ?

arnav : [still looking out of the window] if delivery had been on due date then today my baby would be of complete 1 year and 4 month , i m a father of a boy or a girl what do you think shyam , i think it would be a boy

shyam: [ a bit angry] arnav ,stop it ,for how long you r going to talk about the same

[understanding arnav state he calmed down again] look arnav why don't you just forget everything I mean
arnav: forget about it ! How can you say that shyam , i should forget about my child , i m a father dammit

shyam: [emotionally] why r you living this fake life arnav, i mean you r living in hope of meeting your child well the truth is that you don't even knew that your child was ever born or not , what if that girl never gave birth to your child she was free to go and have an abortion may be

arnav: no shyam this can't be possible i don't know why but my heart says that my baby is alive here in this world and i m sure one day i m going to have my baby with me

shyam: hope your trust wins arnav i really hope that


SCENE CHANGE
SHIMLA

MORNING

We see a small one bedroom house with cheap furniture and not much stuff around

Here we see a girl dressed in a blue plain indian suit standing in front of devi maiya idol kept in the corner of the living room in a small temple she was praying with her eyes closed and folded hands

Yes it was KHUSHI

khushi : hey devi maiya , just keep my baby safe from the evil eyes of the world, and keep your hands on his head always

Only then old lady of around 60 year's entered the house it was Madhumati Buaji

[khushi neighbor she lives alone don't have any family and treats khushi as her daughter and take care of krish when khushi goes to office so khushi calls her buaji , with love]
buaji: khushi beta you are not ready yet, go and get ready otherwise you will be late for office

khushi : yes buaji , I was just going to wake up krishu and then I will get ready

And she went to the bedroom there we can see a little beautiful angel sleeping peacefully surrounded by pillows, so that he don't fall down

It was KRISH; he was sleeping there with a cute smile on his face showing his charming dimple
khushi went near him and just kept on staring at that angel which was her life she got near her and kissed him exactly at the place where the dimple is formed which made the baby got disturbed in his sleep

khushi: good morning my sweetu

krish opened his dark brown eyes and saw his mother so close and showering all her love on him

krish instantly got close to her shifting himself completely in khushi lap and hugging her tightly as much as he can with his tiny fist ,

krish: ma ...ma ...buu buu

[in his babyish language asking for milk well all kids do feel hungry when they wake up and the first think they need is milk]
khushi then fed him with the milk from the bottle and after that the baby was all awake fresh and energetic for doing all masti and naughtiness

[sorry I m not soo good with describing about the baby and their activities so, bear with me for that I knew one think that babies of around this age only crawl and stands and can speak only few words that too with difficulty]



This was their daily routine

khushi got ready and after getting krish ready she left him with buaji and headed towards her office

ROSHAN'S it was the name of khushi's company where she worked as a secretary to the managing director Mr AAKASH MALHOTRA

khushi like always came to aakash cabin before aakash arranges all his files and made his to do list for the day

Entered aakash

aakash: good morning khushi


khushi: good morning sir

aakash: oh god ! How many time I have to tell you don't call me sir call me aakash this sir sounds so weird



khushi: [smiling] ok aakash good morning



aakash: yaa now its better well how is my champ



khushi: krish is doing fine aakash now shall we get back to work

aakash: yaa sure

[khushi was very reserved and aakash understand that soo he just don't try and get more friendly with her he was a good person at heart and at time try and became overfriendly with others]

khushi: aakash sir you have a meeting with clients in half an hour and later you have to give the presentation on our latest project

Working like this the whole day passed

Later in the evening

aakash: its closing time now , leave this work here we will continue with this tomorrow


khushi: aakash , actually I


aakash: yaa tell me what is it



khushi : I need an off for tomorrow

aakash: any problem , why do you need off [concerned]


khushi: [sadly] actually aakash ,its my dad's death anniversary tomorrow and

aakash: oh i m sorry for that , its ok ,you can take an off for tomorrow , see you later then

khushi went back home ,
and find her little angel playing joyfully with buaji

as krish saw his mom standing there on the door , he immediately crawled towards her legs trying to stand holding her duppatta and with his gesture telling her to pick him up


krish: maa mama maa [doing moments with hand asking her to lift him up in her arms]

khushi lifted him and he immediately hugged her with his small arms as tight as he can

khushi: hye my baby , did you miss mamma today [in babyish tone]

krish nodded his head to that and then moved ahead to kiss khushi cheek just like as khushi always do to him



khushi: oh my baby [kissing him back] what did you do today, hope didn't irritated buaji

buaji : irritate, now a days he is getting more and more naughty , full day only masti and masti ,now you are here just take care of him [smiling]

khushi: don't worry buaji , now krishu will stay with his mamma , and krishu and mamma will do lots of masti together , right krishu

krish happily nodded his head in approval , sparkling his dark brown eyes more
[i already told you that i m very bad when it comes to writing about these baby expressions , hope i m not so bad]

NEXT DAY

khushi organized a small pooja in her home , the priest was instructing her and she was performing all the rituals

she was sitting there in front of her fathers picture and she closed her eyes ,a lone tear escaped her eyes remembering all that had happened in the past

she closed her eyes and she sees flashes of all good time spend she and her father had together in there home town mumbai where she was used to live with her father , Mr. Shashi Gupta , a normal man , a clerk in a small bank , living a happy and satisfied life for his daughter , for whom he was mother as well as father , she remembered how he had struggled in his life to fulfill all the her needs she remember the day when she topped in her college , that day she had seen him so happy , he was looking like he was the happiest man in the world that day .



There life was full of happiness and joy and they both were happy and satisfied with what they had and living there life in that only, everythink was great until one day

she still remember she came back from her office in the evening , to find her father lying there on the floor of there small two bedroom hall flat , she was so scared , at that time ,when she rushed and took him to the hospital ,

she was feeling so helpless that the time when nurse said that he had a major heart attack and they need to operate him , soon otherwise there r no chances of his survival , that time she thought that her world was completely shattered ,

she became so helpless at that time the next 4 days were the living hell for her, when she had done all possible try to gather money for her father operation, but all her efforts gone in vein ,no one was ready to help her no one was there to support her , her father was her only family and there was nothing else with her in her life except for him

She still remember that day which changed her life forever

Khushi: please doctor please do something please

doctor: listen mam , your father is being lying here unconscious for the last 4 days , if you want to save him , we need to operate him soon and for that you need to deposit 4 lakhs rupees otherwise we r sorry we can't do anything for you

she pleaded in front of that doctor , but no use , but she didn't knew that all that was even seen by someone else

Later when she was sitting in front of her unconscious father, and all her hopes were over,

Only then there came a lady, no she was not an angel for her


Looking at that lady of around 50 but still very stylish wearing a sari definitely an expensive one,

khushi: yes how may I help you ?

lady: you can't but , I can help you . Well i know you want 4 lakhs rupees for your father operation, i can give you that

khushi got very excited hearing this that she can get money but suddenly she got confused that why this lady will help her like this

"I knew what you r thinking, that why will I give you so much of money , well you see young lady wee r people and we believe only in give and take relation" said that lady ,making khushi confused as to what she can give in return to this lady she don't have anything with her "but what can give you i mean " khushi said ;


and then after hearing the condition which that lady said to khushi , which changed khushi life forever , she was shocked to hear this ,at once she stood there numb ,digesting as to what that lady said , " but why mee" that was all khushi could ask her ,

"well you think over this and if you r ready for this just let me knew i will again come tomorrow morning" saying this that lady left the ward leaving khushi there still confused ,tensed as to what she shall do

She sat there in front of her father and was deep in her all thoughts for the whole night as to what she shall do, she has to make the decision, as it was her father life on stake

she opened her eyes when she felt something tugging her duppata , there she saw krish who was getting all bored in this pooja , trying his best to seek the attention from her by playing with her duppata , she smiled at him and shifted him in her lap , kissed his head while he hugged her tightly and then again started playing with her bangles

she while watching him ,again remembered about all the events in the past , the offer that lady had given her ,

she was not able to sleep for a single second that night , she was so much lost in that condition which that lady had offered her ,she didn't had any choice that time , it was for sake of her father's life ,next morning that lady came there again ,and she had no other choice but to accept that deal , she still remember

Lady: so r u ready for this

khushi: yes , [with teary voice] , yes I accept you offer , yes , I m ready to be a surrogate mother

she again opened her eyes fresh tears came out of her eyes ,yes that was her past ,her one decisions which she took 2 years back that had changed her life forever

PRECAP:
full khushi past ,as to why she needed to run away from there
and arnav part of story ,his life till now
hope you like part 1, its small i knew , will update the next part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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resd

unres

amazing startšŸ‘šŸ‘

loovveedd d intro of all d characters😊

d flashback part was sad

continue soon😊

waiting for d nxt part😳
Edited by aishu3003 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
Very nice ... Different concept
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing part
thanx 4 d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
Awesome Update. Please do continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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fabulous update
thanks for the pm
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