Arakshi SS: Bechain dil mera Pg 50

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

@MRD1692020

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Lovely , Superb i dn't have words DI..

Aisa laga ki Arjun dekh rahi hue..

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neeraja

@life93

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

hi vidya di🤗... awesome idea payal👏👏...n awesome execution di👏👏... no doubt u made every work more beaurtifull with ur writing n this one is not an exception😃... as i was reading i felt it really emotional😊...arjun's full life...was written... his dad's ingnorance...n his frnship with sam and his mom's memory...😃😃...everything written beautifully👏👏👏... n ya his lady love roshani how i can i miss her😃...their pure bliss...was destroy by sikki😡...when u wrote he was smiiten with her beauty i remebered that scene ...😉...first time ACP ke chehere ki hawaaye uddi hui thi😉... and now see how sakshi will bring him back to life...n which song?...update soon di🤗

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Deleted_Account

@Deleted_Account

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

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yas23

@yas23

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

awesome start
loved it
it was really emotional
had tears in my eyes
feeling bad for him
waiting for more
thanks for pm
continue soon

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Shobhit18
Marvelous OS, Vidya!!
👏 👏

Now, I know the true reason behind your story being mentioned in Forum32. 😃

You deserve a standing obation for sure!! 👍🏼

so you had a false reason in mind before reading this, is it? 😉🤣

If possible, i would want to know that reason! 😆

thanks!

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pravallika

@prava55663

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

itni emotional one.. Arjun's past.. And his childhood.. Really painfull..
Upon roshni being killed best friends got seperated.. Hope their is new beginning now

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pravallika

@prava55663

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

toda busy hoon isiliye chota comment

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

THIS IS A "MEMBERS ONLY" POST
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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

unres
vidya di u made me cry!
very hard nw!
seriously wat bhaiya said sam ne mujhe hamesha akela choda h!
dat line made me very much :'(
sakshi pov...
was excelent writen!
superb
as sakshi ne janbujkar galat kiya so dat bhaiya wapis aa jae
like in epi yes!
very much awesum
lov it
sng <3
gng to teribly mis u n ur writing
hats off to u di 🤗 Thank u so much di
nw in shw sik part remain d main!
bt in writen stories after sik track i love arakshi
bt for nw i love arni...
like arakshi
thanku di
do cont!

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

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Posted: 12 years ago

#60

Another wonderful installment in this emotional dastaan.

So Arjun actually let her in and was expecting her. Awe...I felt bad for his lonely state and I am glad that Sakshi defied all and came to visit him.

So they are not even close frineds yet, but they have reached some sort of comfort level with each other, Arjun is unable to voice out a need to be with at least one friend and I am glad that Sakshi understood his lonliness.

I love that they both behave normal with each other, the nok jhok you displayed is so Arjun and Sakshi.

😆 Love that she made the tea just the way he liked it.😉 And so Ms. Anand is familiarizing herself with his kitchen, what's next?

Please do continue soon, and thanks for the PM.

Edited by ll-Shilpa-ll - 12 years ago