Arshi FF: Entwined(T1) *Completed*

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@Sanaya.Barun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#491

Anjali!!!!😡

Now i cant wait for next chapter! Please update soon! Please?

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Shilpa

@HerFiction

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Posted: 11 years ago

#492

What is happening? When will khushi's past will cum out? Continue soon.

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pearl.b

@pearl.b

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Posted: 11 years ago

#493

Wow...that was bang on..mind blowing update..Like arnav even I'm desperate to know about khushi's past but this doesn't mean u disclose it to us before its time because ur managing this story perfectly dear especially when it comes to its pace...Let the mystery about khushi's past unfold when the time is right..ur a very talented writer dear coz ur updates are far beyond excellence and u just nail it every single time...I totally enjoyed reading this chapter...it was shorter than usual but the fact that u updated made me more than happy...so can we have an early update?? Pretty please...Thanks a lot for updating.

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spongebobchick

@spongebobchick

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#494

Unbelievable! Its actually amazing to see how Arnav and Khushis relationship is progressing. Its good to see Khushi trying to overcome her fears, but that mixed with her desire for Arnav is causing more turmoil and confusion too. I'm gutted that Anjali announced the engaement of Arnav and Sheetal - don't really know where she got that idea from really! Just hope Arnav can get outta the mess soon!!!

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..SunnYaara..

@..SunnYaara..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#495

omg damn this anjali arghhh...cant she discusswith her brother first dumb women...

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Amrita

@Amti4u

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#496

Areee yaar... ye kya hogaya...😔

Beautifull written deepya... Song selection was superb..

Loved how Arnav is trying to find out what happened in Khuhsi s life, and now after t=his marriage announcement, everything is back to square one..

Cant wait to read more.. Hope Arnav will be going looking for her and I really wish He will confess his feelings...😉

Do update soon...

Cant like as Im using Mob...😔

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shree10

@shree10

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Posted: 11 years ago

#497

Anjali was a certified blind and fool in the show but here she seems to be one notch above!!

Frustrated that you ended it there!!!

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kanika

@kank_dah

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#498

oh no...wat an announcement.hope everyone explains Anjali and clear the misunderstanding.great update.khushi needs to tell arnav abt her past so that he helps her to come out of it.

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Breath-Mark

@Breath-Mark

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#499

I'm a new reader. Read all the chapters.

I love the development of this story. The emotions, frustrations, everything has been explained so well.

Just when i thought they were moving ahead bit by bit, then Arnav's frustration for being helpless gets the better out of him. He uses his anger to pull out the details of her past.

Oh god, Anjali is blind as a bat. Seriously, woman she is the word for delusional.

Completely in her OWN dream world. Makes me so freaking frustrated that for all the adulation she has for her "Chotte", she seems to have no idea about what Arnav truly likes and feels.

Glad that Sheetal is not an as* like the show and hope they go about and do some damage control.

Can't wait for the next update. 😃

Edited by SilentShadow - 11 years ago