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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

Lovely!

It was really heart breaking and touching...

These are all the things that should have been said...

Awesome! 👏

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pree2605

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

wowww amazinggg story...
really luking forwrd fr d stry...
thnxx fr pm

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magss24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

wow a new story from u...loved it..

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Deepa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

wow an heart wrenching and an emotional start!!!

I literally cried remembering those days!! awww how painful!!! but your adds on's like arnav realizing that he cant live without kushi anall were awesome!!

So so so so so awesome!!!! that my heart was also crying!!

Please cont soon!!

I know this will be very interesting!!!

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OmNaMaSteOm

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

I so hate Anjali's character to bits.

I hate the Chottey role of ASR.

This update has more of IPK which was telecasted... I mean no difference. Just the ending.

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saarah96

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

amazing start
love your version of the episode
cant wait to read more=]

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afsha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Awesum strt

Plz add me to ur PM list

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Divya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

What an awesome start... Loved it.. This arnav alwayz hurts her.. Loved khushi's outburst too.. Hope that provide some sense to arnav.. Can't wait to read more.. Update soon...

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Hetal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Smitaji, you n your brilliant ideas...

very touchy scene, you chose it for your FF,
I am happy for it and want to give you Badhaiyan ji.
the whole conversation between Arshi,
the hurt,the pain,the concern and the love..
both are ziddi,egoistic yet love each other more than they Know..
I would love to read, how you put your thoughts regarding this situation and the turmoil of their mind.

Loving Khushi perfect title...
but I agree with Ishu regarding Anjali's part...

thanks for the pm Reshu..
love you my Queens...😛
take care of yourselves.

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Megha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#50

Wow !!

Congo Shongo for the new story Di...🥳

I am sorry for being very irregular in commenting...Was busy these days with the classes...But whenever I come online, I open Rashmi Di's PM and read the update...😃

What can I say about the new story?...It is A.M.A.Z.I.N.G..👏

Loved every bit of it...😳

Poor Khushi...😭

Arnav don't be so rude to her...😕..I know Di, you will turn him into a lover boy soon😳..

Now mission wooing Khushi starts from here...

Wanna read next part...Greedy for your stories..😉

Huggs for the new story and thanks for sharing it with us...🤗

Rashmi Di, thanks for posting this story here and tightwala huggswa for the PMs...Waiting for your interpretation...🤗

Love you both...❤️

These pics suits this part...