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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

WOW... that was a superb start
looking forward to it

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Iman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Awesome Start...
Can't Wait 4 d Next Part...
Update Soon...

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rana5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

You have brought that scene again, I wish Khushi would leave. There is nothing better than Arnav repenting. He can only do that when she makes him see how much she means to him.

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ruark_22

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

I am sooo happy that you started this new story!!!! Absolutely love your writing!!!

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Newbiesoapfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

A new story !!! YAAAY!! So you will handle the winning back differently!! One more SKD satisfied.

One question -- the convo on the terrace has happened right --- and Arnav did talk of "chap gayi mere dimaag mein"!

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Sarah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Wow a new story from you, I'm very excited to read further.

Love the intense scene you have recaptured from the serial, superb.

The update was Fantastic and absolutely amazing,

Brilliant writing and the update was written exceptionally well,

Love how you wrote down the scene, but added your own version with Khushi actually speaking up the truth about how she met Shyam.

Wow, Khushi actually questioned Arnav why he stills wants to be remained married to her.

I hope Khushi does leave after the 12 days, i so wanted that in the serial and then Arnav realising how much he misses her.

Loved the update, it was a wonderful read.

Eagerly waiting to read the next part,

Continue soon please and thanks for the PM xx

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Amrita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Awesome one.. loved it.. Would love to read more😊

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lujainshaikh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Congo for new story!!!! 😊... but it ws almost d same as d original one ..i thought d concept would b completely different lyk dat of his "smiling girl" or "keeping khushi"...anyways i know as usual u wil add ur twist to it... 😃

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Akorshi Oroni

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

smita di ur new ss...

wow! like it...

the point u started one of my fav epi...

arnav will win her back...

update soon...

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ara_000

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Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Was waiting for this new story since wen smita di told us abt it...!

nd finally an update

nd as xpected di is back wit a bang 👏 👏 👏 👏

i love it how she picked up d story from d show..!

i love it how each nd evry dialouges of the show has been written wit sumthng new punched wit it making the whole scene all d more beautiful 👍🏼

finally arnav came to knw abt the terrace scene nd how much he wrng he is nd also that even if his di is not happy he can b happy or should i say content wit khushi by his side...

he can win over d wrld wen khushi is wit him nd her goingv awazy from his life will make him stop his breathe...! ❤️

awsum chappy 👏 👏 👏 👏

i am waiting to see how will arnav singh raizada win khushi back witin these 12 days 😳 😳 😳 😳