Liquorice Burning#2 [ArHi] Part 13-21

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IronButterfly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Both of them high on emotion after seeing each other.

Happy just to see the other.

You've written their emotions so well.

And the last line...

Amazing.

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sanam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

awesome update love it thank u for pm

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Sisbamboo1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Res...Thread two and you started it off with a bang! I'll unres as soon as I can.

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"He was my employer." Ouch. Burn, baby, burn! And then the knock-out punch "I was your contracted wife, wasn't I?"

Both Arnav and Khushi turned shades of green today and this did not escape Raul and Natasha's gazes. How serious is Raul about Khushi? It's always hard to gauge the level of interest when it comes to the natural flirts.

Awesome chapter!

Edited by Sisbamboo1 - 12 years ago

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Snoowfall

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Finally he found her, the muse really...

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neverbefore

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Congratulations for Thread 2.

Khushi really needs to stay strong!! She's had her moments of weakness...the chemistry is irresistible BUT she needs to resist!! He needs to work at winning her back...and he needs to work really, really hard on that. 😃

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frenzyy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

congrats on the new thread... whoa they met finally... waiting for the convo b//w dem...

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roseycheek

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

wow..that was amazing... I wonder how Arnav is going to react to her answer...

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Anupama

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

You know its amazing that you successfully got the readers hooked,entertaining us without making them meet! That too for 12 chapters! Kudos.! And when they meet! This has to be by far my most fav chapter for obvious reasons. And How much so ever the rain scene with Arnav in his car, longing for Khushi had me sad for him, this time his jealous possessive yet helplessness in the face of Raul and his muse s' ease with each other gave me pleasure. :D loved it!

And that part where Khushi sights sniff sips was very very well written!

Loved Raul again. Maybe for his perceptiveness this time.

'employer' barging in..and trapping and being pushed.. Oh m very eagerly waiting for the next one. =)

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arshina223

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

You know what you wrote about lucid dreams...i used to think that it only happens with me and that dreams are so scary...the more you try to fight to get out of the more it pull you back.

Khushi is again misunderstanding about natasha..again she felt that she does not belong in his world.

It was very clear to raul and natasha that arnav was not a mere employer. Natasha said that raul got a competition but was he ever in the competition...??

Arnav babua what you will do to woo khushi back..??

Awesome update that was..
update soon

Edited by arshina223 - 12 years ago