Liquorice Burning#2 [ArHi] Part 13-21 - Page 24

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Posted: 12 years ago
He just assumes she wants him back?!! He loves her and cares for her..but is still high-handed in his behavior. Kushi tried to stand up to him desperately...and was partly successful. And she is the same impulsive Kushi when Arnav challenges her..:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
I really despo..ly wish their convo continues.. It was brilliant in this update!

I am surprised at myself that inspite of all atrocities he has unleashed on Khushi, when he looks at her like that with honesty , his mask down.. you almost wish she would forgive him.. and then their happily ever after begins!
But he needs to earn that, toil for it.. There shouldn't e easy way like show!

the part that touche dme most is Khushi's silent question when he asked "Tum theek ho?" He can see that but he couldn't see the pain she went earlier??


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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update...been waiting for a while but 'asli Zindagi' happens...I know.

Arnav has made his move with quite a confidence that Khushi will fall into his lap like a ripe fruit with no problem...alas it did't happen like that and enraged and jealous Arnav could't help but challenge Khushi to drink some more...personally i did't understand what was he trying to prove but there you go with enigmatic Arnav you don't know half the time what is going in his brain...may be he was challenging her to see that the impulsive and spunky girl he knew before exists or not and she did't surprise him...she proved him right that she hast changed where it matters.
I am so proud of my girl she gave as good as she got and told him in clear words that nothing doing she has moved on and she does't care anymore lioking right in Arnav's eyes but he has taken no notice of her and he is out to get her back.
Only thing in Arnav's favour is that he has got the facts anout their realation where as Khushi has misconception...she believes that she is not married anymore and when and how he will tell her only he knows.
I think he is going to accuse her of running away rather than facing the problems and talking things through with him.
Khushi has got all past pain and anguish to give her courage to stand up to him and tell him where to go if that's what she wants.
It won't be easy as he is equally determined to get her back by hook or by crook as he does't want his wife to have any association with Raul who in his mind is after Khushi and Khushi is his.
Let's see how these two protagonists do the duel.
I love this story to bits, it's beautifully written and taken forward with lot of thought and care about the characterisation and storyline.
Please continue soon.
Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG...that was amazing Aria!!

Both Arnav and Khushi so true to their characters...I loved khushi's defiance and the way she talked him off...I loved Arnav's desparation and how much he just wants to whisk her away...

U so aptly showed Natasha of being everything that Arnav accused Khushi of not being. .. I wonder what she thinks about seeing the two of them together... And little does she know that Arnav just wants to kiss her, talk to her and take her away...!
I did wonder why Arnav did not tell her that they were still legally married😲

And I didnt quite get what natasha said in the end...probably because like arnav my mind too was occupied by Arnav and khushi!
This was a good one Aria! Please update soon...!
(Btw i did not get d PM for part 13! But got it for part 14 so thats how I read both parts...)
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Posted: 12 years ago
I SO wish they could talk peacefully...I know it will be difficult but I SO want that to happen..

What Arnav did was VERY WRONG but I wish Khushi can at least acknowledge his pain too in the next updates...

I am loving it :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Can't take this jerk Arnav😡. He made Kushi like this and acting as a saint.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Just came across once started could not stop till I read all chapters amazing waiting how arnav will convince her to come back
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Posted: 12 years ago
I love that khushi didn't give him an easier time but that probably led to me having to feel sorry for him. Wise mrs. silvio I gotta say!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderfull update! I belive it will be more than hard task to whisk his wife away...but considering Khushi's drinking adventure..lets see...😉

Can't wait to read more
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Posted: 12 years ago
Arnav's right. I don't recognize this Khushi because it's not the Khushi we know. It's the Khushi that time and circumstances has molded. But I am very proud Khushi. Arnav understands that he should not have let her go but I don't think he's ever acknowledged just what he asked of Khushi by making her enter a contract marriage.

God, that "Tum theek ho, Khushi?" just about killed me! So, so, so, so many memories and all so pure.

Khushi has to be strong but she is not surrounded by weak people...Mrs. Silvio and Raul don't seem to be the type to be intimidated easily and that's the only language ASR knows to destroy people in his way. He is going to have to earn back Khushi and a simple sorry will not do. Which he hasn't even said yet. *face palm* Stupid man.

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