ArShiFF: The Dawn of the Dawn - Thread 2 - COMPLETED - Page 9

Congrats on the new thread

Wow!!! Thanks for the super long update & the PM 🤗

Part 1

Akash surprised to see Arnav sleeping without the usual nervousness faced by the grooms & the former all set to take his friend to enjoy the last day of his bachelor life was an awesome scene

Initially when Akash was pestering Arnav to enjoy their day at the club I thought Akash wanted to very badly make Arnav enjoy his day but he did all this coaxing to enjoy at the cost of Arnav ………… hmmm ……….. smart fellow 😃

Khushi irritated by the Haldi ceremony & mentally scolding Arnav for not telling her dad to not carry out all the rasams, then she learning from Payal about the hangout that even the more worsened her mood was well laid down

The scene were Shashi becomes emotional on seeing Khushi & thinks that she will be leaving for her husband's house after the wedding on the other hand Khushi feeling upset that her doings might shatter her father was a lovely one laying down the father & daughter's thoughts parallely

Arnav thinking the message to be for Akash on the contrary Arnav mesmerized on seeing Khushi's picture her flawless beauty but he upset on seeing her adorable smile missing & worried on not being able to bring back the magical bond which Arshi shared during their college days showed how badly Arnav wanted things to be good between them & he experiencing her pain & confused for few seconds whether he was doing a mistake of marrying her forcefully but he consoling his heart the next instance about the hard past & that he was doing right in order to revive his property back was a wonderful scene bringing out the various thoughts & emotions that he was experiencing

Khushi irked by the haldi & trying to reach Arnav & angered on not able to contact him & leaving behind an angry msg & blurting out to Payal but immediately handling the situation was so smart of her

Khushi refusing to accompany Payal but then she desperate to confront Arnav on knowing from Payal that he was going to enjoy his night at the strip club & Khushi making Payal to agree to go to the club was written brilliantly showing Khushi's possessiveness over him that lies deep down in her little heart that's oblivious to her

Part 2

The little convo between the two friends was amazing - Akash by all means trying to make Arnav accompany him; the duo starting off to the place, Arnav seeing the missed calls & angered on hearing her voice msg & then he apologizing to Akash for being rude

NK is a total looser 😡 I liked the part where Khushi asked NK to back off the fight with Arnav in case if he had planned for on insisting that Arnav has got brains 😊

Khushi all the while making plans to ruin Arnav's fun time, Arnav seeing her picture & mesmerized by the ethereal beauty of his to be wife but then shutting down all his thoughts by realizing that she doesn't belong to him clearly brought out the battle that's he is facing between his heart showing that though he has a liking for her since college he not wanting to take advantage of her & pacifying his heart that she belonged to someone else

Though Arshi had an argument Arnav not wanting her to go alone & concerned about her while Khushi also not wanting to show her face as per custom & tongue tied when he asked her why she was concerned about bad omen when this marriage meant nothing was mind blowing ………….. loved it ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Part 3

Arnav emotional on looking at his dad's photo brought out the emptiness that he was facing all these years & yearning he had for his parents & sister not being with him on his big day 😭

Hmmm so Khushi had dreams & unable to come over it & to top it her wedding jitters. Wonder how she'll resist him after they are married 😉

I'm lovin this Akash & his talks "…….Have fun with the oldies, …………? I accidentally entered an old lady's room and she was changing, ………." 😆 😆 😆 Dude u cracked me up. True this smarty pants need to be grounded 😉 😃

Arnav holding her by her waist & suddenly posing the question about what if NK wasn't there would she have allowed him & he backing off the instance he heard her saying that she loved NK was a fabulously laid scene

Khushi's dream……….. seeing Arnav with tears …….. guess something is going to happen which will stop Khushi from going with NK. Eagerly waiting to know what happens further

Originally posted by: lalarukh

wow wow and wow deep...love u loads for creating such magical,beautiful, out of this world ambiance:)...u r superb ,just speechless

starting from akash kiss on arnav cheek to arnav unbelievable,uff yar wah :)

haldi,mehndi,engagement and that club scene u have done more then justice to it,by adding beauty to these using awesome pics and arnav's emotions getting attach to her after each ritual...hats off deep...i am over whelmed by ur writing :)

it seems both khushi and arnav were taking a step forward towards each other by these simple cute rituals...

whether its haldi pic,or the mehndi on her feet,the eyes inside the veil,or red saree,love u dear for using such beautiful pics...

loving payal and akash here a lot:)

dont want to say anything regarding nk as my mood is some dream world right now ,just beacuse of ur writing i am again in love with arnav and khushi:)❤️

excellent vm that surely brought kuch kuch hota hay factor here blended beautifully with the story...loved it to the core...i think i need to stop here otherwise i can write infinity lines in ur praise 🤗