VIRMAN SS:WHAT NAME AM I GIVEN THIS LOVE DISCONTINUE - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank you 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

Superb ss yaar...Love the concept...Waiting eagerly for the 1st chap now... cont soon and thnks fr th pm...


Thanx alot dear
andi'll😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Syed695

Interesting Prologue..!! Maanvi likes no Loves Virat..he on other hand is a bad boy n Viren is aware of it...n his GF itself hitting on him...Nice...Waiting fir the Update..n tHnks for the Pm.>!!


hmmm thanx a lot dear
and i'll update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Huma0301

sounds very interestingreally liked the first part continue soon 😉



firstly congrats dear for being Goldie..i post on my ss hate and love story but
hope i'm bored u all with cont new ss or ff
thanx for the liking
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: jia123sagar

awesome prologue

nice character sketch
plz cont soon
thanks for pm me


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: manvilover18

wow really interesting story...

plzzz plzzz update it quick...
can't wait to read more...


thnax a lor dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: tanishalnk

Awesome concept jannat...
Update soon dear



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Niaksharma

Hey sorry for late dear..
I ill+ my study..
Thanks for pm..
Super inresting dear...
Looking great..
Waiting for nxt one...


Thanx a lot Khushi and first take care urself
hope u are fine now
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hiii sweet girlies hope u all are well.. Here I update 1st chapter.. Happy Reading

Virman ss: what name am i given to this love?

Chapter-1

Viren was shunned at the realisation. He knows Sheena is much in love with him but at least respect his love but reality is far away from true feeling.

How can she allowed herself, given to other knowing that she is engaged, how could she to stoop so low not only wore that dress, it ain't problem but expose herself to other guy but also talk dirty and and try to seduce him to do... Viren don't want to think anymore further, may be they cross their limit, their talk & comfortably telling that.

It has been 3 year they are in relation and 6 month ago when their engagement take place and he give her space to adjust herself in his world but she take it to wrong sense, ain't she don't know about his family or world. But she didn't care of him, society and do something low. A true relationship needs time develop it properly and he gave her time as well as freedom, but everything she ruined it for her pleasure sake.

He don't understand where his love is lacking or at which point he was wrong, his brain become numb at the sight on the other side for Jeevika knows his brother so well that how is he but can't be she caught her with Sheena, Viren fianc.

But she is sure Virat never ever through himself that the girl who threw herself and didn't think twice to cross their limits..

Poor soul Viren not understand what to do at this reality, he was in his revive. His biggest mistake is ignoring Manvi intuition about Sheena, Manvi tell him before, and Sheena ain't the girl for him. Manvi is never wrong in knowing the people but this time she is wrong at some point as to make Virat her Idol. But its not her mistake she don't know this cruel world and people intention. She is very much naive, sweet like a child whose worlds revolve around their family or friends.

In Manvi's case everything is same she don't know about herself, she is pure, naive, sweet and innocent whose little innocent brain never thought that ways.

She didn't even know that what a relationship between husband and wife or girlfriend and boyfriend. It limited only to kiss or hugs nothing else.

Her best buddy "he, himself" or in college, her music band group who treats her like their sister and all of us never intend to tell anything about this not wanting to snatch her innocence.

Her heart is like a child who sometimes likes some people perhaps doesn't. She likes Virat just because seeing his interviews, his loving n caring nature for other but reality is just opposite and Sheena whom she knows from back 3 year, she didn't like her nature. Her pure heart is somewhere right might wrong.

At the spot when he was ditched by so called fianc, he thought only about Manvi, she'll probably shatters once he comes out from this betrayal.

His trance is broke when Sheena came to him and hugs him tightly.

Viren was taken aback with sudden attack and pusher her away.

Viren: "everything is over" only he said or manages to say.

Sheena: Baby I was here only for autograph. How could you said like this.

Viren: smirk and says "Right", why u r here I can see that with my own eyes so don't explain anything to me.

Virat: dude, she is here for mere autograph, Just Chill.

Viren: Stay Out Mr Vadhera, (Virat was taken back with Viren Outraged) It none of your business.. He added, "Sheena why we stretch this topic, u doesn't love me and I think the same so why we continue this relationship further, stop this here. Nothing is wrong in that u enjoy ur life with whoever u want and same applies to me." He said very calmly

Sheena: I know u want that, long before because Manvi didn't like me. Says dramatically

Viren: little rudely "don't u dare to pull Manvi in this Matter, It is solely my decision.

Sheena: Manvi Manvi Manvi I hate her, I know she is only one the mere reason that's why u broke up with me. she said evilly and added

Oh now I understand u loves her and wants her in ur life and I'm the one between u two. And u very smartly through me out of ur lives, Great Idea mr…..

She can't complete her sentence before that Viren anger was out of Control and slapped very hard on her Cheek.

Viren: In full of Rage and loud... Sheena," U filthy girl, dare u say my Manvi names from ur filthy mouth and she is absolutely right about u. Am the one who is wrong.

But it's not ur fault, your dirty mind only think this. If u doesn't understand our relation then how can u understand mine and Manvi relationship that was so pure.

If u again said one word against her I swear I'll kill u on the spot.

And added again, "I regret the moment I choose u as my life partner.

Sheena: sorry Baby, I was wrong please Sorry, I know i commit a big mistake... Trying to Act with guilt on her face and shed tears, want to pacify him, he is very rich and good person.

"I don't wanna say anything about Manvi.

I'm sorry. Plz baby."

Viren: Sheena I Said It's Over and I Mean It. U Cross Ur Limit when u Take Manvi between Us. Focussing each word.

Sheena don't understand how to convinced him so she use Manvi again.

Sheena: Manvi is also big fan of Virat, If she do the same then u react the same way... In same tone

Viren: "She is not Fan; she made him as her idol but Not Virat, his caring and loving behaviour towards others, if she watched his true colour, she regretting it too. And she never does this in her bad dreams."

Virat: listen it and greeted his teeth, it is his Insult or hurt his Big Ego but not dare to say seeing Viren Wrath.

Sheena: "U can't do this to Me"... In bit irritated tone as she losing control. A rich guy slips from her hand.

Viren: "I can" and through his engagement ring on her face. . . It hit her forehead and gets little injured.

And dare to say anything to Manvi, if u do something like that I swear I'll make ur life hell and U know I'm capable of doing so.

Sheena: listen everything she can't say anything because she know Viren power but promised herself she take revenge for her insult and left the place.

Viren also left the place, he is hurt and heart broken, he can't say anything to Manvi as she is busy in upcoming exams after her exam they all shifted her so he can't say anything to her but

He wants to pour his emotion out if he don't do it. It outcome will be worst.

Later In night he called Bajaj House and tells everything to Pinky Bajaj her Mom and kept the promise, not to say anything or this incident to Manvi, if she gets to know that she'll worried for him and can't be concentrates on her studies.

Pinky: Console him and kept the promise but now she is hell worried for Viren.

In bedroom Pinky told everything to Madan and says she want to go, Viren are all alone and needs someone.

(How could a mother stay when she very well known that his son is in unbearable pain… she treat him like his own son, not because to show to something but she whole heartily adopt him.)

Pinky also said doesn't tell anything to Manvi before her exams.

Madan Agree after all they have to shift after her exams will over.

Madan agreed and booked her plane tickets so that she can left tomorrow Morning and made plan to convince Manvi. She easily gets to suspicious if anybody in her family tells her lie but they had to do so for her benefit.

That it for today

Hope u all enjoyed it

sorry for grammatical and other mistake

hope I give it justice

Take care

Love Jannat 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
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yayy am so happy that viren said all that to tht lady she is such dramatic watever ...
the way viren reacted on manvi's namr being used i loved it he is really her protector and true frend ...
virat came to know abt manvi taking him as her idol wanna know his reaction ...
really this is sooo interesting
update next part sooon 😊

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