SS: Life Love Fate- the connection Part 3,4,5 (page 5 &6) the end

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sri91

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

lovely ss.

Nice justice to the story..

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rulama

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

That was interesting Deepa!

As promised I read it and here is what I have to say.

It looks very real and its a nice one.

Liked the way you have written but could have given a more detailed description of Arnav's life.

Of course an epilogue is needed dear!

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Hina malik

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

I didnt know you have written a story deepa!

I remember maybe you have sent a pm to me about this and thats how i have saved this link in my folder 'to be read'..Now I opened it and saw it...

As i dont have much time to read all so i am gonna reserve in the next post to coment in detail when i'll be back:)

If i forgot to unres than plz do remind me...I kinda have a habit of forgetiing things sometimes..hehe..:D

Ok bye for now..:)

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Hina malik

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Res

UNres Finally😆

Whole story took me to a dreamy world

Aww they were so sweet in school days!!😳;They understood eachother feelings without confronting...so heart touching!!⭐️

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The moment kushi's eyes found him he lifted his eyes to stare at her. Rohini brought her back to the world with a giggle and pooja started. For the rest of the time kushi didn't even know why she was turning her head every five minutes to look at him and he stared back at him with equal intensity.❤️
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She was continuously murmuring a sorry and looked up to see his beautiful face with his cute smirk that touched those beautiful eyes which was staring at her and asking her
"suddenly, why are you always coming on my way, why do you want to hit me always?"😆😆
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K: Ro you know nowadays I feel very weird about certain things and facts. (Ro just waited raising her eyebrows, giving a suspicious look to her when kushi continued) I mean yaar whenever I see arnav, you know who na who am talking about?? (There was another nod from Ro) I feel full of energy, my heart beats very fastly as if going for a running race, my stomach feels with full of butterflies and I feel like am having some kind of acidity like am going to fall sick soon. Also to top it I feel like laughing like mad and my cheeks are becoming red.(Aww khushi confession..😳)
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He immediately came to have look at her and that whole day he was following her. All she could do was blush, blush and blush.☺️
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The next day he came to school and in the evening he followed her half the way with his friends in the name of going to his friends house. The whole walk was a sweet torture for her as all he did was to walk very slowly staring at her and stumbling the way to earn a teasing from his friend the whole way.😳😳
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The next act shook her to the core. He pulled her towards him and hugged her in a bone crushing hug along with continuous sorry from his mouth.
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Overall a very awesome story with amazing ending!!👏👏👏

PS.Hope my comment made up for my late..uh oh..very late unres😳

Edited by Hina69 - 11 years ago

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gifttag

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Bookmarking. Found the link from Jagruti's thread. will definiltly read it and come back and comment.
Looks really interesting and I love the story of Arhi when they are in school.