ARSHI SS: || My Saviour|| part 6 page 80

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PaRud_AddicT

@PaRud_AddicT

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Posted: 12 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: Akorshi
awesome parts...
arnav saved khushi from goons...
arnav very smart...
khushi was scared...
her scared removed by arnav...
khushi really trust him...
hw arnav knows her name?
wow! tht pond scene was cute...
khushi is in arnav's arm...so lovely...
update soon...

missed u 😭

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anu

@anu17

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#202

wow this is awesome... update..

I feel Arnav soo love in Khushi

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zayana khan

@zayana123

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#203

That was awesome update...

truly love dis part...😊😊

How arnav know her & y khushi was in trouble...

curious to know about dis... post soon...

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Mishti,mish,mishtu, mt

@mishree

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#204

Wonderful ,amazing ,awesome update

Ohhh khushi scared 4m water and darkness

I love the way hw Arjun handle her

Arnav u r best

Love it ❤️

Thanx4 pm me

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please6

@please6

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#205

love the update and arnav is so sweet

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#206

Oh my I got myself a Dedication? Here is what I am thinking right at this moment:

Itniii Khushiii! Seriously you are just the sweetest, you totally made my day! I am just so touched love! *sniff *sniff

Before I get carried let me comment on the update, it was super special because you took us through a journey of Arnav's and Khushi's struggles, trust building which was shown mostly through Khushi getting to know Arnav and the kind of character he has via his actions. The way you showcased his character through his protectiveness and attentive behaviour towards Khushi was brilliant. He not only saved his damsel, he also treated her with respect by sensing her comfort and discomfort and her fears, he was totally there for her both emotionally and physically. I am quite sure that not only Khushi but all your readers are convinced about what a GEM of a person Arnav is. The element of mystery is still very cleverly intact, he is great but he is not being truthful about knowing her, so we are all yet to find out how he knows her.

At the same time Khushi's past is coming to light very slowly, we learned about her fears and her mom dying in a boat accident. She is yet to tell Arnav why the goons were following her and I suppose she would tell him when she can fully trust him and she is definitely coming to that. Like us she also isn't sure about how Arnav knows her. That last bit where Arnav just lifts her in his arms and carries her brought back so many old memories of IPK, but this lift was handled much better than the show. Can't wait to see what you have in store for them next!

PS. Thank you again for the love sweetheart and hope you have yourself a safe and fun camping trip! Here is a Big Giant wala Hug! ILY

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dis_arshi

@dis_arshi

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#207

thats awesome

but how does arnav know khushi?

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Param

@pup03

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#208

awesome !!!

thanks for pm 😊

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#209

awesome update loved it loved how he kept her safe so cute khushi did not even want him to leave her at all loved the update beautifully done thanks for the pm