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mankhush

@mankhush

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Oh yes. Any work of yours is beautiful. Can't wait to read this one

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hilly

@hilly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Pearl ! : )
... had a lovely feeling reading your work after a long while !

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seriously, loved the prologue .. the imagery and the characterization, loved how you penned it all down. it gave such an authentic, olden style touch. ASR at a train station hunting his Khush down ? I would SO love to certainly read more ! bring it on !

and yes, do PM me. thaanks !

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shutter

@shutter

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

welcome back...

the prologue sounded really good to me... The detailing about a very rich man searching for somebody At the railway was fantastic...

i read half of it and it was great... Will catch up with the last part later in d day...:)

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N0306

@N0306

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

very very interesting..

what do you mean when you said the show is returning.. are they going to air IPK again?

loved the prologue.. your detailing of the surrounding is so well.. you make it sound so real..

can't wait for next episodes..

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

This sounds pretty interesting...the emotions were all there and so was the secrecy, the mystery.

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yongshin

@yongshin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Great!! cant wait for story to unfold

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ASRphanki

@ASRphanki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Welcome back...it feels soo good to see old writers comin back...
Gr8 start...:)

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PSharada

@PSharada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Very nice prologue. I love the fact that the forum has such amazing writers who understood the characters and the love story much better than the creatives. Looking forward to how you take this story ahead. Can you please pm me when you update.

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Param

@pup03

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

interesting prologue !!! do continue soon.. hope arnav found his khushi singh raizada.. HAPPY WRITING 😃

thanks for pm 😊

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ItsPearl

@ItsPearl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: -LiveCrazily-
it left heartache...sachi prologue shows what arnav singh raizada felt that moment.
Please don't leave the story in midway

u still not update tangles

Hey - I'm so happy to know that the emotions I wanted to portray were conveyed the same way! Your small-ey-viley reply meant a lot!

And ohh - I'm definitely not leaving this story midway! And about tangles - well - I'm sorry, I was so horribly stuck with my thesis work... But now that I'm free, I'll probably write more about Tangles!

Thank you for reading!