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Tithi

@Tirtharupa

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Welcome Back :) And congrats for the New Thread :)
Suraj tries to rectify his mistake,what he done to Lavanya...Hope she will stay with him...
Viren and Tayaji is really a massive headache 😡
Hope Arnav and Mamaji handle them together .
Wonderful update👏
Waiting for more...

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PSharada

@PSharada

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#112

WOW - the way you weave your story, it is nothing short of a gripping novel. So finally Suraj is now knowing that doing things in haste will cause you harm in the long run. I felt so bad for Lavanya - to be used by Suraj till now and then Vijayendra targeting Lavanya to settle his scores with Suraj. I will not be surprised if Lavanya walks away from Suraj just as Suraj is realizing that what he feels for Lavanya is indeed love at some level. Need to see how will Tayaji use Arjun as the pawn and what will KBV do and how will Suraj and Arnav tackle this problem. Damn good update.

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Cest.la.vie

@Cest.la.vie

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#113

I find men like vijeyandra worse than psychopaths. Stopping to unknown lows...to save their honour? He says all hell shall break loose because they messed with his family. I doubt that. I find with people like him...its their own selfish reasons.

At the same time KBV scares me too. He will surely go to any extent too to save his meethi and her family.

The war that'll soon wage... Oh the casualties. Poor Lavanya!!

Target where it hurts most.

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SIMI

@dieforasr

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#114

ohhh...God...I am feeling really bad for Lavanya...Suraj, an idiot forever...😡😡😡😡

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Jessie

@jessjazz

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#115

The dirty game has begun... now that Lavanya was targeted, Arnav will definitely take this and ensure that Khushi is kept safe!

Awesome!

Let's see if this pound of flesh is sufficient?

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#116

the stakes have become higher..Vijayendra has started his tricks...& now because of Suraj's schemes it has now put Lavanya, Arnav's family on Vijayendra's radar...Suraj was rather impulsive..I wish Suraj had at least given KBV a hint of what he was planning..& now this has brought a halt in KBV and Arnav's plans to bring down Vijayendra and Viren...this is getting way to interesting..I'am literally biting my nails in anticipation..and thinking what is to follow next in the fanfic...I'am sure Vijayendra will stoop down to any level..& I'am worried for Khushi; as Vijayendra knows that khushi is KBV and Arnav's lifeline so my gut feel says that Vijayendra will try to harm Khushi...anyway I'am sure KBV and Arnav will soon bounce back with a counter-attack and punish the guilty..I really felt bad for Lavanya..at least now I hope Suraj will be beside Lavanya while she is dealing with the aftermath of the humiliation...very interesting and intriguing update Kalyaani..keep up the good work going...please do continue soon...waiting for the next update eagerly..😊

Edited by Surya.Ravi - 12 years ago

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faffy

@faffy

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#117

Gripping, nerve wrecking, unpredictable - this is fast turning into an A-1 thriller.

Brilliantly drafted!!

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Raadhiya

@Raadhiyaaa

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#118

interesting
looking forward for d next chap

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starsarun

@starsarun

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#119

Hmm Interesting update Di. Well this Vijandra always rub me off whenever he has role in ur update. Arghh!! So much cunning he is. Still he just want to save his son.
What the?! Attack on Lavanya. Poor La, always just wanted Suraj's Love and attention and when she got this happened.
They too much dirty, why don't direct attack to person?! Thats just a dirty way of vengeance.
That creeper man was sent to kill her and huh!! Betrayed vijayendra and try to play with her life.
Suraj have also the same temper as Arnav almost means Suraj will gonna kill him. Hope Arnie or KBV able to stop him.
KBV have too much sharp brain. He thinks from every aspect.
Hey Bhagwaan mujhe bhi esa hi brain dete Thode Marks aur zyada aaya karte!! :p :p
loved the update.
Hey La don't worry plzz try to Happy now, aapke Suraj ji aa gaye hain. ;)

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#120

What a dhamkedar chapter...the fight is begin in open.
Feeling bad for Lavanya...hope Khushi will be safe.
It will definately alert Arnav and KBV
Viren and Vijayendra are playing a very dirty game
Hope KBV will able to know the source who is giving information to Vijayendra.
KBV has a very sharp mind I believe he will be able to handle tayaji