ARSHI SS: Between the Lines-CHP 9-PG 133/Link 2 Th2!

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Anjali

@AnjuRish

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#731

yummy ...

now will they acknowledge the attraction or fight it

i guess fight it ??

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momoahmd

@momoahmd

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#732

ahaan...so they kissed...
update was just perfect...awsm...
eagerly waiting to know what will be their reaction to the first kiss...

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Amina Mahmood

@Amina87

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#733

Ahem ahem! (just clearing my throat nothing else 😉 )
i'm sad... I got the place on next page...
But never mind...
The update was truly mindbloking...
Ek dum chakkass...
So finally the attraction wins...
And landed them in their first kiss...
It was beautiful...
I loved Khushi's caring nature for Arnav as well as the boy...
They were sooo much attracted to each other...
It was impossible to be away from eac other any longer...
This kiss was pending since long...
And rain helped them to come out of their hesitence...
I think they will not fight with their desires anymore...
But let's wait what Aarti dear has in store for us...
Let's just wait and watch...
I hope they realise their feeings soon and not fight against them...
Overall it was aperfect update...
Update next part soon also plz...
I'll be waiting for SOI...
See you there dear...

Edited by Amina87 - 11 years ago

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vibha92

@vibha92

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#734

Aaahh!!...u jst cant do tht!!...

i was waiting for it from d starting of d update n whn it happend u ended d chappy der...😔

fab part...

cant wait for nxt one...😉

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kajal511

@kajal511

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#735

awesome update👍🏼
u r such a devil leaving us with cliff hanger😆

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annie2007

@annie2007

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#736

wow..really amazing..i like all of your stories..you are a gifted writer

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.ButterCup.

@.ButterCup.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#737

awww sooo romantic update..

i really love the way u write out , the whole atmosphere was so romantic...❤️

I loved how Khushi doesn't hesitate or shy away from her desires...and the way you have written about their escalating desires is mindblowing!...finally he kissed her..☺️

lovely update...!!!

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Suchi

@ChitraF

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#738

Awesome part.. but how could you end it at that point...

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aashi12

@aashi12

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#739

this is not done! leaving us all high and dry! hey devi maiyya.. such sinful thoughts running in mind!

ab you'll have to update this jaldi jaldi.. or else we might all will die of anticipation..

what a way to bring themm close.. both of them refused to the bait at first but the second time, it wasn't easy to let go,, as if both of them were just waiting for something like this to happpen!