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kristin

@sweet_5

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#171

Wow Arnav loved your take on a bible verse! Ahahahahaha

I'm so in love with these Arhi moments that it breaks my heart knowing that we might see a few less as we go on. So know Arnav has two truths he has to spill. God knows how Khushi will think of herself when she sees Lavanya. I mean she's been kissing and fallen in love with a man who has another. Of course dadi would be pissed, I can see how Arnav's character has fallen in dadi's eyes

I think physical intimacy is always going to be a problem with these two just because of what Khushi went through the first time. You can't blame Khushi for that, I think in a physical relationship it might take Khushi some time to not shy away from her desire

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Aysha

@ayshaomar

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#172

Wonderful chapter

there is a lot going on, between them as a couple, individually and what not

urghh Lavanya is back!! Dadi is angry as she is cares for Khushi and well Khushi, god knows what she will feel like when she sees and hears about Lavanya

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Atyay

@Atyay

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#173

The first trouble in the series of trouble is now before Arnav finally... Lavanya.

Liked the convo between Khushi & Ranvijay and Arnav & Khushi. Am curious now to know Khushi's thoughts and feelings after Arnav makes the mistake to be intimate with her. And it was a mistake, coz she can't be ready for THAT side of relationship after what had happened with her & Arnav has never tried to sooth that part of her painful past.

Will wait & watch...

Nice update!!!

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meera06

@meera06

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#174

Wonderful update as always!

I love Ranvijay..he is fun to read...

Khushi and Arnav ...what to do I say of them..when I read about them it gives me a warm feeling...their childhood days are a treat to read...

Khushi's fear is understandable...with the past still lurking in the present it is not easy for her to move forward...

And now Lavanya has come...😡.

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katunkka

@katunkka

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#175

They are so in love I hope they pass their hurdle smoothly

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cherryteacake

@cherryteacake

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#176

Aaannndd all arise the wicked witch has arrived! Hope that along with dissapproval that Dadi has an intuition on Lavanya's bad intentions and works upon it. Wonder how Arnav's going to deal with this, society including his whole family bar Dadi and Ranvijay will be all for the Lavanya and Arnav pairing. Just wish Khushi doesn't get hurt anymore, she's been through too much already. Great update, thank you so much, hope you're keeping well xx

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rozina

@rozinab

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#177

No need to apologise, the chapter was wonderful and the fact that you updated when your so busy is amazing in itself! Hate lavanya but she had to pop up somewhere! Will wait for the next update patiently so take your time. Xxx

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710617

Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#178

Loved it... U showed their intimate encounter very well. The dead eyes of khushi revealed her pain.

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SaRunHolicc

@SaRunHolicc

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#179

another amazing chap by u.. <3 it soo..

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jojo21

@jojo21

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#180

Hmm It's so heartwarming to have them share moments from the past and when you describe them riding together you couldn't help but smile with them and tear up with Khushi for finally feeling that elation and happiness with Arnav that she has so been seeking.

The section in his room made me cringe not because for their relationship but out of fear for how Khushi would react to that situation given the past you have alluded to. I don't know if there was anything Arnav could have done to bring her out of her shell. What I have to say is that the one thing I appreciate is while you allow Khushi to move towards a physicality in their relationship you bring her past into it, to remind us that it happened, and it's not easily forgotten.

Lavanya's here...not good. Poor Khushi. That's all I have to say.

On a personal note, hope your craziness ends soon and look forward to any update you can provide when you can provide it.