l~TaaRey Os: Stolen Hearts~l - Page 4

Originally posted by: ajaved

I loved it was amazing pehle baar mein purpose kar diya ur such a great writer plz do write more stories

Originally posted by: chand91

lvd da os

tu aavi kaisi hai?

Originally posted by: --Suhani--

Res!!!
Sorry will comment tomorrow...too too too tired :(

Unres-

OMG :O

Really!!! its just written like some famous writer must have written :D

and kya concept hai!!! ek dum hatke bilkul tere tarah 😉

Too Good...Amazing Yaar!!!

WOW love at first sight ❤️

and yay tani was doing it for some good cause :)

and awe rey was tani's collage crush!!! not bad lucky girl!!!

In short It was just too Good :D

🤗

PS- It didn't look like u were writing OS for first time <3

Originally posted by: rakhiankita

res/unres😳
Sanz my god phele toh i must say yaar hatts offs to you are u serious matlabb yeh tune sachi mein 15 mins mein likha😲 i must say yaar you a great and a fabolus writer😃.. i liked.the way you potrayed the whole story ...Jab meine starting se padna shuru kiya toh i swear i was like its too boring lekin jaise jaise padhti gyi my godness yeh itni intresting ho gyi kya batun it was powerpact os believe me sachi mein👍🏼...THE SONG SEQUENCE WAS THE SOUL OF THIS OS AND IT WAS JUST PERFECT👏👏👏 and Taani's dress😛 and the coz for which she stole the diamond was too the highlight yaara😭 and amazing and lastly the heart touching confesion it was so so beautiful yaar sachi mein😳...i was like imagining the two only...
Seriously sanz you made my day by this for you ur so called boring os😆 par mere liye i tell u it was it was amazing and just superbb...yaaar it was so so natural and haan seductive too😆 but great work yaar love u tons ...😳😳😳 im proud of u yaara🤗

Originally posted by: toshi_ta

Ress!!

unres...

rey and taani are thief??!!! gosh!! that was so different!! tuje bada wala comment chaiye?? kaha se du.. itna acha likha ki bolti band kar dii.. from where do you get such brilliant ideas??

gosh.. rey running to have just a glimpse of taani.. fab..

loved the song.. perfect for the situation.

the last scene.. rey's proposal... and he is taani's college time crush??!! your mind works!! pagal nahi h tu.. hehehe...

so i am signing off here.. dont expect a big comment from me.. itna acha likhti h ki kuch h hi nahi bolne k liye.. just to say you describe every scene and surrounding beautifully... keep it up...❤️

Originally posted by: lakshluvsD3nHHL

You are simply a fantastic writer!! You have a good command over your language and explain situations really well.Loved this story.😳😳 Please do write more stories.😃😃

Originally posted by: asha_TAAREY

Ha ha ha,wt a lv stry! I'm yet gring wit d lst part.Evrytng ws so much irony.I lvd it,it ws freaking unique & fantastic.

Originally posted by: tharu01

its just so..beautiful...amazing..loved it...😊

Originally posted by: tinniecrazy

great great great os! tHE STORY IS FABULOUS!!😊

Originally posted by: -Fam_TaaReY-

awesome OS 👏

loved it yaar 👏

I fell for this OS 😆