Arranged Marriage (ArHi) Thread 9 (NEW THREAD Pg 1

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melonie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Hi Krani,

Wonderful update and it was quite long. I want to thank you for writing even though you were quite busy with exams.

They are taking baby steps. Things are changing. They are slowly acting more like a married couple.

I loved Khushi's concern for Arnav..1. She makes him coffee and I was waiting for the scene where she hands it to him and was waiting to see his reaction but that didn't come...another time maybe ;) 2. I loved how she placed her hand on his knee. That was quite intimate gesture.

Arnav's company is not fairing very well and this is a difficult time. I feel bad for Khushi...it must be terrible the way all gossip was revealed to her. She looked so shaken..sigh.

Now who is that creep who pushed to a wall 😡 I hope Arnav will reach her soon and give some good punches to that guy..how dare he! 😳

Pls cont soon

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crazy-ash

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

That was awesome k!!! I mean, there were some really special yet innocent moments which meant a lot! Like arnav for the 1st time suggesting to her abt what she should wear what not...and the way he reached out for her on the club...he is attracted to her for sure...and when khushi placed her palm on his knee scilently asking him to calm down...
It was gr8! But! But u left us with this horrible cliffhanger! WHY????
Oh dear K, now when will u update next...and when will we see what will happen...and till then, how do u thinl r we gonna deal with this cliff hanger!!???
Try to update a lil soon...please? Even a small , tinny-winny update will do! 😃

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sochanatha

@sochanatha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

what a fabulous update that was!!!
your writing style is so unique, and as you give detailed description of the scenes i always feel like i can see them happening in front of my eyes..every single and small instances.. be it Arnav entering the room with a blue-tooth tucked in a ear then averting his gaze to realize he disturbed her, or them walking side by side in the street, khushi's hair flowing in all directions, him placing a hand on her back over the stole.. every scene, just perfect!!! and you have done this chapter her chapter, yet you surprise me always with the perfection and your sense of adequacy in each scene!
Gosh!! the meeting scene was so gripping!! the slowly building tension, the scrutiny of Mr. Bruzzi, the pressure that was building upon Arnav, Khushi's tension, uneasiness, desperation and finally her breaking down and walking through the clouds, emerged in her own grief oblivious to the surrounding all were playing as a slide show in the eyes of my mind...
i absolutely adore and admire your writing style...
once again i am surprised at myself for starting reading this story this late... all the while the loss was all mine...
and dear you stopped at such a cliff hanger!!! sigh!!!
the wait is gonna kill us this time im sure...
but your every update is worth the wait...
so will be waiting eagerly... :)))

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faree

@faree

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

congrats on new thread and awesome update

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Aparamegha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

congrats on the new thread..

loved the way you have portrayed their journey so far..they are both trying in their own ways to make this work...

Feeling really sorry for poor Khushi..hope Arnav protects his wife's reputation and be a true gentleman...

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Nehasupnfan

@Nehasupnfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

You are MEAN to end it there!!!! UGH!!! When can we have the next update????? I'm dying to know what happens next!

This update made me horrified! For Khushi AND Arnav to find out like THAT what the media is saying about them! Its was hard to read...My heart went out to Khushi..she's so innocent and so pure hearted! Yet she was dealt a raw hand in life...I hope Arnav takes the media people to task..and look at Khushi! Even though Arnav hurt her so much...she still wants Arnav to land this deal..and so do I...

Please update soon!!!! All the best for your exams!! :)

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IPK..Jenny

@IPK.Jenny

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Congrats for the new thread...loved the update...feel for Khushi...love how there relationship is moving forward slowly...don't think Anjali's idea was good...what happened to Aman...o god who grabbed her...i hope it was Arnav and not anyone else...continue soon

Jenny x

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renee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Very well deserved thread 9... my god... Krani you should know it is a great story... 😊

Anjali's decision to keep things in media is good or not we will know later but for now I am sure Arnav will thrash the living daylights out of any man who misbehaves with Khushi... and seeing this side of Arnav maybe Mr. Bruzzi might change his mind...

You always keep on saying this is a slow paced story but my dear that is its USP... Rushing it will just take away the essence...
every emotion, every hesitation or little gestures they make... like Khushi calming him... it touches our heart... and we feel connected...

So once more I will say... never change the pace... and keep up the good work... 😊

an amazing story...