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Iqra

@Iqraimran

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#711

You know I have never questioned about anything

i m reader how want to read what actually writer want to tell us in his/her own way. i asked any question on rare occasions.

i always appreciate the pace of this story not from honeymoon track but the from first chapter I had issues when u didn't disclose arnav thoughts properly then when honeymoon track u did it...i m happy about this helped arnav in an accurate way.

Most loveable part of your story, you didn't show arnav flawless in the business world. You give us a real flawed businessman, how have to handle his professional and personal life,

i was a business student now recently start my career, till now I met many entrepreneurs honestly the worst part of their job to balance professional and personal life which most hectic we ever thought about.

honeslt i never questioned you anything rarely but still commented

You should know i really appreciate your of writing this story i really don't mind if your updates are irregular honestly i understand ASLI Dunya :D

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-JollyJabeen-

@-JollyJabeen-

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#712

Krani? Seriously!? How can you think of yourself as not a good writer!? You excel at writing, One can clearly see your passion for writing through your work!! It's a complete pleasure to read.. I'm not sure if i've said this before or not but i'll say it now, I absolutely love the pace this story is going at! Constantly keeps me on my toes..

Krani guess what!! When i say this, I'm not even kidding. You know how it's Ramadhan, so i'm trying to not come onto the laptop as much as normal but on my phone, had this feeling that you updated.. Seriously! And just that thought was enough to check your Fic and my oh myy, was I pleasantly surprised to see a NEW chapter updated!! I was so elated! Literally😆😛

Absolutely loved the way Khushi was pushing Arnav, how she was protecting him, it was so sweet. Absolutely LOVED it!! I kinda have this hope that Khushi goes back and ensures Arnav gets the deal.. 😳 That would be absolutely adorable!! And than Arnav fixes his designs and their not that extravagaent so she comments, Khushi gets worried he'll get annoyed e.t.c. and they end up working together! It would be SOOO cuuute!

I love how you do so much justice to this FIC!! Please update soon Krani, will be waiting :) :)

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devsum

@devsum

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#713

thanks for the q & a... helps a lot. But in my opinion u r a very good writer...

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suri2610

@suri2610

Explorer

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#714

You are an excellent writer... And pls do keep the pace of the story as you had planned... Lot of the events and feelings that you write are so natural and realistic... Really love everything about your stories...

Will wait for updates... Do take your time.

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reshamc

@reshamc

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#715

Don't ever, even for a minute, never ever think that you are not a good writer.

I am a silent reader of around 30 FF's...and I was also a silent reader of this story for almost 27-odd chapters. Your brilliant writing skills forced me to start commenting on your threads.

For me, you will always be special. That one writer who made me explore the world of FF's. And I am thankful to you for that😳

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Now coming to the last two updates, AWESOME 👍🏼

The bond between Arnav and Khushi is growing strong. I absolutely loved the part where Khushi keeps her hand on Arnav's leg to calm him down...and I had big huge smile on my face when this small action of Khushi's actually had a calming effect on Arnav. These two are unknowingly becoming a team😃

Worried and concerned Arnav is always a treat. I could totally picture him beating that drunk man. And Khushi trying so desperately to stop him. Loved the concern both had for each other😳

Looking forward to regular updates now.

And one last thing, I found the pace of this story just perfecttt *Madhuri syle*😊

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#716

K ... I have no questions to which I want answers ... 😆

am really very happy with the pace of the story ...

Love this slow and steady love that is happening between them ...

and love your style ...

Thanks so much for taking the time out to give us such a fabulous story ...

Your fan following should be proof enough how much your story and writing style is loved ... 😉

Whether you update every week or once a month ... 😆

the number keeps increasing ... 😆

🤗 🤗 🤗 Thank you ...

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basicquestion1

@basicquestion1

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#717

aww such a shona u r/

i luv da slow pace of da story. none of them r a hormonal teenager / they r in a real relationship so i guess it will take some real amount of time for luv to kick in and permeate for eternity.

y don't they kiss...i luvd u'r answer ...go read room 420 🤣

u r moving 3 times..omg..what the?? that's so nerve wrecking...i don't think i'm being supportive here. i shud shut up🤔

i wud rather have an update then u'r personal response. may b it sounds rude but if a writer is crunched up on time, i can't expect them to write back to every reader.

u r an awesome writer. that's the only reason i'm on this thread.

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luvbug

@luvbug

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#718

I really have no issues with the pace of this story... i really enjoy reading ur updates... n i do think u r a fab writer (at least according to me)😛

will patiently wait for ur update!

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duzee

@duzee

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#719

Ah I actually thought they were given to kiss today! It was sooo good. I love how they are towards each other and the protective feeling he has towards her.
And also THEY HUGGED!!!!!!!!! AWEEE how cute!!!