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@jas0308

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1081

waiting for new thread as well as new update Krani :)

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sakhter90

@sakhter90

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#1082

Amazing teaser! Pls update soon. I can't wait anymore!

Really nice VM as well

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ITS_LEENA

@ITS_LEENA

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#1083

I never had any doubts or questions, which u answered

I too had one, once khushi was designing on paper, will he recognize her skills in designing, will her designs brag any deals for him

beautiful update, her thought of sharing problems with the spouse helps to lessen the problem, easy way to get solutions, lovely

awesome teaser, waiting for next one

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jasleen

@jasleen14

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#1084

Krani u write so well ... My eyes just penetrates on ur story ... I just crave for ur writings... Hope u post part 50 by today .When u write u write with full conviction , I just wait for ur writing , I hope to write like u one day on ipkknd . You are precious writer on this forum .

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platoniclove

@platoniclove

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#1085

update soon dear...m eagerly waiting...

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JCJS

@JCJS

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#1086

Really this was an emotional update . I loved the way khushi explained things to him he and his ASR ego of not sharing things. Hmmm so he is worried for her while she is worried for his name and hardwork . The last scene was something like a slow action sequence. Waiting for the next update .

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JCJS

@JCJS

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#1087

Just a great teaser so he is badly falling for her and kissed her. I hope these don't lead to misunderstanding and help them to get together. Excited for the next update.

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Cassie

@s-h-a-a-m-a-t-h

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#1088

Just re read ( something which I normally don't like to do) ur work to have a better understanding of the current track...I love this story even more now after reading it again. love the way u explain the teeniest expressions and feelings of both the characters when they converse. I also like that u have added a unique track with Arnav's business sinking, u don't see many ffs where Arnav is not perfect with what he does.

I have been a silent reader for a while now and I never commented on ur work. this wud be my first comment and I just wanted to let u know that u r doing a great job at keeping me hooked to ur story :p

That wud be enough for a first comment I guess :p