'A DRUNK SWAYAM' Swaron os. Part two upd8 pg-6 chk note

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SnehaluvsKSG

@snehaswaron77

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

OMG!!!!This one was freaking hawt but a bit emotional too on Sharon's part!!!! Sharon is so in love wid him & that too madly!!!!This part was hell irresistible!!!!!loved it plz continue soon!!!!

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Vedshareyam

@Vedshareyam

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

please next update jaldi post karo... am waiting eagerly.. its interesting ur update...

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Anindita Dhar

@AninditaSwaRon

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Chapter 1 is uber cute

Chapter 2 is on the other hand is sensuous .
Lovely writing ..
Njoyed it..
Thanks for the pm dear

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austen_TanHa

@austen_TanHa

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

beautiful!
Loved jealous Sharon in the 1st part.Reason takes a complete toss for this lady when its about her lover boy😆
The 2nd part was pure poetry👏
You don't need to be more romantic,that was perfect.
It was blissful and smooth.
Didn't feel like you interchanged their characters.For me Sharon was Sharon and Swayam was Swayam.This is exactly how i would expect them to behave under the given circumstances.
Well done!

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aditi

@gupta.aditi20

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

hey sneha...
just read your os...
i cant believe its your first hand at writing...
you were superb...
i loved the os...
a drunk swayam is superawsome...
do write more..

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Don't even know anymore

@Death_Memories

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

nice update liked it
loved how they were expressing their feelings
all in all nice os

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Helloo_Vrushaan

@Helloo_Vrushaan

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Awesomeee OS dear and Very romanantic one👏

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payal

@.vruShan_rocks.

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

sorry bachaa for late comment😭🤗

papa ke baare me yeh sab?😆

ok coming to

chapter 1-it was damm cute.

i loved the way sharon was taking care of swayam.

and swayam like a small child putting fingers on his lips.

swayam-"me tumhara bachaa hu"😆

chapter 2

it was dam hot and sensous.

loved it too.👏❤️

update soon

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Trisha paul

@trisha19

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

nice update...👏

thanks for the pm

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Rae

@sweetbutbroken

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#60

ahaha simmi n sharon's fight was the best
n the "he loves me too" part was hilarious
sharon's reaction 🤣
the whole os was awesome
who knew u were such an awesome writer
thanks so much for the pm