'A DRUNK SWAYAM' Swaron os. Part two upd8 pg-6 chk note

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Vishaka

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

unres

sneha 🤗
so nicely u have writtern...i luv it

and most amazing part were when sharon explain her pov was really brillent...

Lov the way swayam undestand her feeling. And the way he proceed. Cutely describe.

I m waiting for more to u write...

Edited by Vishaka45 - 12 years ago

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Rachel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

finally i read the most talked about os in the AT

sabaash sneha bahut acha likha hai

aur guess kare kaunsa gaana sun rahi thi mein

tum hi ho

perfect

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Deepika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

awww...thats was beautiful dear...

I loved the fact that sharon told she dont regret anything happened between them

He is still the same majnu who keeps her comfort on the top of his priority list

She is madly in love with him...

Lovely end...😳👏

Do write more swthrt 😊

Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago

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LittleBitOfAlexis

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Wat a dreamy OS ..loved it

Great work !!

Edited by swaron_pk - 12 years ago

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cscs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

sneha..u write so amazingly yar..😊..its ur 1 st attempt n u bowled everyone..u r so good yar..specially d way u expressed sharon's emotions in d end...thank god sm1 wrote drunk swayam os..bcz d3 mai to kuch nhi milne wala.. loved it..n i ddint read it as ur di😉..luv u..do write more..n pls pm me too..

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Namratha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Good one bacha :) I liked the fact that Sharon didn't feel guilty about it n I loved how Swayam reacted to the entire situation.

The initial Sharon Simmi fight was kinda cute :) and it would be great to c a possessive Sharon in the show as well :)

AT waale log isse intense aur passionate toh main nahi likh sakti toh I'll drop my plans of writing the next OS which you requested 😆

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bhavika

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

henc proved tu mere hi behen h...
n it was too hot to handle...😳

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Princess_Devil

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Posted: 12 years ago

#48

nyc update sneha...

ur have written it very well...

loved sharon's pov...

it really cute to imagine swayam as drunk

amazingly written baby 👍🏼

pm me when u update...

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Simren

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Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Wow...First OS u must be kidding me...it's super super Awesum...Lol Swayam wants a kiss 😳 Loved the OS...Update the next chapters soon...vl be waiting 😳

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Kanchi..

@Kanchi..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#50

Superb os...
Luvd it..!!!
Amazingly written...
Nd it doesnt look lyk u hv written 4 1st tym...
Thnx 4 de pm
Nd keep writing more wud luv to read ur wrks...