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mysticmanthri

@mysticmanthri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#501

I may not comment regularly but whenever I read your updates they are a complete package college romance funny scheming Akash flirty nk nerdy lav shy payalia and all of their gang is so adorable

And what's there to say about madhumathi and her pathi Krish funny duo their end convo you nailed it along with khushi's diary excerpt

I hope this is a calm before storm they can't stay away from each others throat for much longer

Can't wait to read more

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

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Posted: 12 years ago

#502

Thanks for yet another awesome chapter Semanti, as I have said to you time and time again I just love all the characters you bring to your stories, the dialogues you give them and particularly in this one I love the whole college scene. As usual bonus section was my favourite and this time you gave us two bonus segments so I was most certainly a happy camper.

I must admit one thing though I totally miss Arnav and Khushi interaction, not necessarily the kind of interaction that involves them two arguing with each other but just about them two thinking about each other or even sharing moments like the one they did when Arnav rescued her and calmed her down so I will look forward to some kind of progress in their relationship. Oh and when it came to comparisons between Khushi and Payal's looks I can't believe everyone is sort of referring to Khushi as somewhat unattractive even if it is done indirectly somehow it didn't go down well with me because she is the kind of character who has intelligence, a kick ass attitude and innocent beauty or perhaps it is that attitude of hers that they are referring to. In anycase, can't wait to read more!

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Polkadots78

@Polkadots78

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Posted: 12 years ago

#503

I like the pace of this story..especially the camaraderie between friends that you bring out so effortlessly ...

BTW i am missing the arguments too..can't wait for the sparks to fly again...

And wait ..what is with the tangled mess here..NK thinks Akash like Khushi, Akash thinks the same about NK and khushi..NK likes Lavanya, Payal has a crush on NK (?), and Lavanya likes NK too?? Phew!!!

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#504

Ahh ... college days ... theres nothing like those days ...

college days are the best days of one's life ...

so carefree ... with not an ounce of worry ...

loved the confusion Aakash has in his mind about NK being in love with Khushi ...

wanting to set them up ... Lavanya wondering why NK has not proposed to her yet ...

Arnav getting his bit of revenge by locking Khushi up in the empty classroom ... 😲

Thanks Semanti ... great update ...

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#505

I don't get rock much I totally cracked up at the Rock On and Aadat part! I think I might've even said that to a few rock wannabes ;)

And you are creating quite an ensemble here. Quite a treat to create characters that in at least one dimension resonate with the reader :)

Akash, Arnav and V are fun to read about and this polygon of sorts between them is all set to be howlarious. Except that one side that joins the a to the k will stand out. They still do even without being actually linked

Great story telling!

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sochanatha

@sochanatha

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#506

the starting of the chapter was the real bonus okay!!!
the song is like my FAV!!!! like i cant even express how much i love this song..but i will admit that it was lil hard to imagine Payalia singing with all that force that were needed...
ohh what a royal confusion in the air.. NK thinks Akash has feelings for khushi and Akash is trying to set NK and khushi up!!! 🤣
here I am with Arnav, I would give anything up to see Khushi's reaction or may be action(!) when she finds out!!!
liked Lavanya already...she is fun...
ohhh we completely get that Khushi is missing the arguments ONLY..absolutely..sure...
and i cant wait for the fundraiser day to come already...
humko lagat hai kuchho hone wala hai, babua... :D
waiting...

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Aishwarya

@EmpressSarayu

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#507

Akash and NK! Hahahaha! I can't wait to read what drama and chaos they're going to create with their match making!

The realtionship between Arnav, Akash and Lav is going to develop more I'm assuming!

PAYAL AND NK. Oh no. :( What is with these crazy love triangles real and thought up ones!

Can't wait to read more! :)

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Maya

@What_the

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#508

I loved NK and Aakash's conversation...the apparently "suggestive" smile esp...burst out laughing at that...

Like the way the story is progressing and waiting to read more...

Love

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tabzz

@tabzz

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#509

Very nice update 👏 👏 👏
And mind it Khushi is not missing Arnav 😉 she is just missing the fight 😆
Akash along with Arnav we too want to be the witness of thrashing on ur ass by Gupta sisters 😆