Arhi OS : 'His Mamacita' NOTE PG 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
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DEDICATED TO THE MAN, WHO IRRITATES HIS MAMACITA

This OS is a result of a real story, where this Arnav and Khushi existed in our world.

There is this guy who loves to irritate his lady love… and he always calls her as his 'Mamacita'. And there is this girl, who doesn't realize her love for the man unless it was late. As they said, better late than never…

Their love story isn't simple. It isn't complicated either. They travelled in two different paths all their lives – one covered with rose buds, and one covered with its thorns. She thought she loved another man, when in reality, she loved this man. He wanted her happiness and readily fought with her family to give the guy a chance to prove his love.

Here, the lover isn't a bad, who tried to come between the couple. This might be posted as an OS based on Arnav and Khushi, and so most of you would hate the character Dhruv. But he isn't wrong in his decision in not approaching her family. He has his own reasons.

It had been difficult to compress a whole life of a girl as an One Short. I hope I did justice for the characters, both in fiction, and the real couple out there…

In a short, this story is dedicated to that man out there, the indecent, less gentlemanly lover-husband out there, to show the love of his Mamacita for him…

Love you…

Vanhi Karthikeya




PS:

Mamacita- It technically means little mama but men use it to women they think are sexy or beautiful

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Chocolate_barun thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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am first at this Awesome os…….🥳

so they loved each other despite their hatred ,fights and finally married to each other…..arnav fought with the whole family so that she got her love back…..it took her 10 minutes to say I love you too dhruv and it took her just one second to say that she feels pain of arnav not talking to her rather being happy that her family is going to meet dhruv……and dhruv had his own problems………….khushi started dressing for arnav and nothing more than his glance,his words mattered to her………………and it's true khushi is precious and arnav knws the value of his mamatica…………thanks for pm……….loved every bit of it and you have written very beautifully

Edited by Chocolate_barun - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very beautiful Os ! Soo nice to read …
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome os.loarshi and arnavs mamacita
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow, that was a beautiful and amazing one shot, simply mind blowing.

Written exceptionally well and a fantastic read from start to finish,

Awww just loved the journey of Arnav and khushi's friendship and then finally into marriage.

Khushi was just so unaware of her feelings towards Arnav, his presence in her life was really strong and she did love him, but just not realised how much.

The conversation with Dhruv was an eye opener, rather than being happy her father wanting to meet Dhruv she was more upset that Arnav was not talking to her.

Awww loved Arnav's teasing and so openly showing his PDA.

Loved the one shot, amazing writing.

Thanks for the PM xx
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res

UNRES!

OMG VANHI.. IT WAS AMAZING..
LOVED THIS POLES AND POLED APART ARNAV KHUSHI AND THEIR CUTE NOK JHOKS...
BLUSHWORTHY THAT WAS.

MAMACITAAA...
THIS WORD IS STUCK IN MY MIND..😆
ALL THANKS TO YOU LOLZ...

LOVED IT

MUAHS!

DI
Edited by Sarunfanatic_Ji - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks for the lovely os... i thought ur good for long ffs, u proved urself in bringing a story in an os... awesome... need such short os...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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No words to express wat feeling is der in my heart...words r not enough..I loved it..so so so realistic..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aahhh I love it..

Another one of your fabulous works..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was so beautiful yaar
loved ur os
wooow👍🏼

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